Chapter Two
Inside The Deku Tree
~AN~ Before I continue on with the story, I'd like to say a few things =). Anyways, thankyou guys SO much for the reviews!! It really encouraged me to write more. The second I finished reading them all, I felt a grin spread across my face. Immediatley, I opened up MicroSoft Word, just so I can continue right away! Margaret: I know, I have this image of him in a tunic in my mind, it's so cute!!! ^_^ And I didn't make fun of Navi for one reason: I like her too =D
WOW!: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!! I must say, you encouraged me the most! Love Ya! Dogs: Don't worry, as long as I'm writing this story, Yugi won't die =) And to everyone else: Thankyou so much for reviewing!! Here, take a giant triple chocolate chip cookie =) Anyway, on with the story!
The second Yugi walked inside, he expected some ferocious beast would jump out at him. Instead, it was rather quiet. "What's-" Yugi started to say, as he ran to the middle of the room of the Deku Tree's trunk. Yugi gasped. "It's-it's a giant SPIDERWEB!?" He shuddered thinking of the spider that must've made it. "Yugi! Look! Look through the web. There's water down there!" Yugi got down to his knees and looked down. Sure enough, there was a pool of water way way WAY down below. He swallowed, and unsheathed his sword. Not knowing how in the world to use it, he started chopping at the web.
To his amazement, the web just swayed slightly, and didn't even have the slightest trace of a cut in it. Yugi looked around looking for something.. anything that could help.
Seeing a ladder, he walked over to it, and climbed up. He walked on the small platform where there was once a bridge, but had broken away, into two. He took a run at it, and leaped to the other side. Panting, he continued on.
"Look at those vines, Yugi! They look pretty strong, I bet you could climb them no problem!" "R-right." He said looking up seeing how very high they reached. He put his right foot on one, and grabbed on the vines with his hands. Amazingly, they didn't even tremble slightly under is weight. "WAIT! Look up there!" He looked up and saw a few spiders, but their body was a skull. "Those are called Skullwalltulas. Try and climb past them, they'll knock into you so hard, you'll be knocked down! Maybe we should climb these when we find something else we can use to kill them."
"Right. There's a door over there, maybe something in there can help us." He ran over to it, and Navi quickly followed him saying to him urgently, "Careful Yugi! Anything can be in there!" "Can't be that bad, can it?" He said while opening the door. Suddenly out of nowhere, which appeared to be a walnut hit him in the head. "Well you were right. Anything could be in here, but I never expected a killer walnut.." "Actually it was a Deku Nut." Navi replied smiling. Just then another one came whizzing toward him, this time it hit Navi, and Navi being caught by surprise, fell to the ground with a soft plunk. "Whoa, you okay?" Yugi said to her worriedly while unsheating his sword. "I'm fine, go see what's in there." Navi said irritably, shaking her head while jumping back up into the air. Yugi ran in, and saw a green leafy thing in some grass.
"That's a Deku Scrub. Try bouncing his nuts back somenow." Yugi instinctively took out his shield. The Deku Scrub bounced around the room, and Yugi stepped on the grass in which the Deku Scrub was hiding and sliced him with his sword when he got near.
He walked through the door and saw a rock suspended in air, when he jumped on it, it fell to the ground and smashed. (Sheesh, that flame is making me lose my touch)
To Be Continued.. Sorry guys, but I'm losing the will to write =( I was actually sort of proud of my story, and I get a major flame. I mean how fair is that!? Only review if you're nice. Constructive criticism is still allowed, but if I get one more flame, I might stop this fanfiction all together. I know I shouldn't get so worked up about one flame and nine really nice ones, but writing's all I got left, and I'm not even good at THAT. *sigh*
I know above it says how I was encouraged, at that day I was. But now I feel deflated.
Inside The Deku Tree
~AN~ Before I continue on with the story, I'd like to say a few things =). Anyways, thankyou guys SO much for the reviews!! It really encouraged me to write more. The second I finished reading them all, I felt a grin spread across my face. Immediatley, I opened up MicroSoft Word, just so I can continue right away! Margaret: I know, I have this image of him in a tunic in my mind, it's so cute!!! ^_^ And I didn't make fun of Navi for one reason: I like her too =D
WOW!: Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!! I must say, you encouraged me the most! Love Ya! Dogs: Don't worry, as long as I'm writing this story, Yugi won't die =) And to everyone else: Thankyou so much for reviewing!! Here, take a giant triple chocolate chip cookie =) Anyway, on with the story!
The second Yugi walked inside, he expected some ferocious beast would jump out at him. Instead, it was rather quiet. "What's-" Yugi started to say, as he ran to the middle of the room of the Deku Tree's trunk. Yugi gasped. "It's-it's a giant SPIDERWEB!?" He shuddered thinking of the spider that must've made it. "Yugi! Look! Look through the web. There's water down there!" Yugi got down to his knees and looked down. Sure enough, there was a pool of water way way WAY down below. He swallowed, and unsheathed his sword. Not knowing how in the world to use it, he started chopping at the web.
To his amazement, the web just swayed slightly, and didn't even have the slightest trace of a cut in it. Yugi looked around looking for something.. anything that could help.
Seeing a ladder, he walked over to it, and climbed up. He walked on the small platform where there was once a bridge, but had broken away, into two. He took a run at it, and leaped to the other side. Panting, he continued on.
"Look at those vines, Yugi! They look pretty strong, I bet you could climb them no problem!" "R-right." He said looking up seeing how very high they reached. He put his right foot on one, and grabbed on the vines with his hands. Amazingly, they didn't even tremble slightly under is weight. "WAIT! Look up there!" He looked up and saw a few spiders, but their body was a skull. "Those are called Skullwalltulas. Try and climb past them, they'll knock into you so hard, you'll be knocked down! Maybe we should climb these when we find something else we can use to kill them."
"Right. There's a door over there, maybe something in there can help us." He ran over to it, and Navi quickly followed him saying to him urgently, "Careful Yugi! Anything can be in there!" "Can't be that bad, can it?" He said while opening the door. Suddenly out of nowhere, which appeared to be a walnut hit him in the head. "Well you were right. Anything could be in here, but I never expected a killer walnut.." "Actually it was a Deku Nut." Navi replied smiling. Just then another one came whizzing toward him, this time it hit Navi, and Navi being caught by surprise, fell to the ground with a soft plunk. "Whoa, you okay?" Yugi said to her worriedly while unsheating his sword. "I'm fine, go see what's in there." Navi said irritably, shaking her head while jumping back up into the air. Yugi ran in, and saw a green leafy thing in some grass.
"That's a Deku Scrub. Try bouncing his nuts back somenow." Yugi instinctively took out his shield. The Deku Scrub bounced around the room, and Yugi stepped on the grass in which the Deku Scrub was hiding and sliced him with his sword when he got near.
He walked through the door and saw a rock suspended in air, when he jumped on it, it fell to the ground and smashed. (Sheesh, that flame is making me lose my touch)
To Be Continued.. Sorry guys, but I'm losing the will to write =( I was actually sort of proud of my story, and I get a major flame. I mean how fair is that!? Only review if you're nice. Constructive criticism is still allowed, but if I get one more flame, I might stop this fanfiction all together. I know I shouldn't get so worked up about one flame and nine really nice ones, but writing's all I got left, and I'm not even good at THAT. *sigh*
I know above it says how I was encouraged, at that day I was. But now I feel deflated.