Hehe, sorry, my computer's being stupid & I don't feel like typing at the moment (not a whole chapter at least). I came up with this during math, it's an RK poem. angsty & stupid but I felt I should post it.....It's about Battousai and his change to kenshin, then the end is when Kurogasa kidnapped Kauru & so on.......

Hidden Rage:

So much rage
Deep in my heart,
Drowns my soul,
Numbs my mind.
There's not much hope
Left inside,
Empty as these golden eyes...

Darkness comes,
My mind gone blank,
Red everywhere,
Drowning in a sea of blood...

A light shines through,
I wander from here to there
My rage locked away,
The red starts to wash away...

Glorious light,
The only light,
In this sea of blood.
Lifeless eyes, soulless voice
Blinding hope, this joyful bliss
Violet innocence.
Hope renewed, souls mend...

'A manslayer is a manslayer untill the day he dies'
A monster's words.
A heartless shell, nothing more.
A malicious ghost
haunts my past,
I can't let it go...

The light is dulled,
Gold returns, killer's eyes,
Ravens wings, stunning rage.
To break a vow, to kill again
Closer now, the killer comes
The light breaks free
& shines again,
The monster falls,
The killer fades...

Any suggestions ? I'm not a poet, I'm more of an artist(the kind that draws, I know poetry is an art), but I enjoy this poem & need to replace parts, but I'm not sure with what.....any suggestins would help :3