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Okay now to the story...Mopes off stage.
Kauru watched as the man before her fell. it was as if it was in slow motion. He fell. his hair flying out behind him like a cape.
Kauru stared at the destruction he had caused.
Then she jumped as the man before her stirred. Then opened his eyes.
Moments before his eyes had been Yellow. Now, though, they were violet.
She backd away from him, until she looked into her eyes. She didn't see the killer that had stood before her seconds ago.
All she saw was a tired boy, and a will to die.
He looked at his hands in horror, as if he couldn't belive what had hapened.
"Miss Scarlet." He whispered, stumbling toward the woman.
"Yahiko, Call the police, tell them to send two ambulances, and to hurry." She called to th lttle boy, then put her arm around Kenshin's weist, and his arm over her head to help him walk.
"You are not afraid?" He caughed up blood.
"No. Stay still.. I don't want you to die." She scolded gently.
Lady Scarlet had a wound that was pouring blood in her stomch and shoulder. Kenshin had a bullet hole in his arm and throat, the one in his side had reopened, and the buller had peirced his lung, being moved and shifted.
"Miss Kauru. Get out of here. you will be caught, that you will."
"No. Someone has to look after you two until they get here."
Kenshin passed out then. and reawoke on a stretcher, staring up at the blue eyed seventeen year old. He saw worry in his eyes. Worry about him.
Kenshin stayed in the hospital for a month until he was released int the care of his mother and Kauru.
End chappie. Now review. You know how. Click the little blue button on the bottom of the screen and type. There ya go, better? Yes.
Sigh.
I Swear, if you guys dont start reviewing, then i'll stop writing. I Swear!
Sigh...
Okay now to the story...Mopes off stage.
Kauru watched as the man before her fell. it was as if it was in slow motion. He fell. his hair flying out behind him like a cape.
Kauru stared at the destruction he had caused.
Then she jumped as the man before her stirred. Then opened his eyes.
Moments before his eyes had been Yellow. Now, though, they were violet.
She backd away from him, until she looked into her eyes. She didn't see the killer that had stood before her seconds ago.
All she saw was a tired boy, and a will to die.
He looked at his hands in horror, as if he couldn't belive what had hapened.
"Miss Scarlet." He whispered, stumbling toward the woman.
"Yahiko, Call the police, tell them to send two ambulances, and to hurry." She called to th lttle boy, then put her arm around Kenshin's weist, and his arm over her head to help him walk.
"You are not afraid?" He caughed up blood.
"No. Stay still.. I don't want you to die." She scolded gently.
Lady Scarlet had a wound that was pouring blood in her stomch and shoulder. Kenshin had a bullet hole in his arm and throat, the one in his side had reopened, and the buller had peirced his lung, being moved and shifted.
"Miss Kauru. Get out of here. you will be caught, that you will."
"No. Someone has to look after you two until they get here."
Kenshin passed out then. and reawoke on a stretcher, staring up at the blue eyed seventeen year old. He saw worry in his eyes. Worry about him.
Kenshin stayed in the hospital for a month until he was released int the care of his mother and Kauru.
End chappie. Now review. You know how. Click the little blue button on the bottom of the screen and type. There ya go, better? Yes.