Whoo. Okay, here's the new chapter. From a review I got, I wish to make
some things clear:
I did proofread. they aren't spelling errors, they're British spellings. Other errors are explained below. I know it was rushed. I only got five minutes to type it so I hurried and cut out detail. That's why there's redundancy, too. Wasn't mentioned but I'll just say it now: I know their Japanese names, but they only have English names to me.
Okay. That aside, here comes the new chapter! __________________________________
Bijou blinked her big shiny eyes, and brushed back some of her dove white fur in their blue little bows. "We need to help zee little ham-ham," she observed, pointing out the obvious to everyone.
Hamtaro nodded, agreeing. "That we do."
Pashmina tilted her head slightly to the side, her candy pink scarf fluttering gently in a sudden rush of breeze. "I wonder who she belongs to," pondered she out loud, wistfulness to her soft little voice.
"We don't have time to worry about that now," Boss said, sage advice, going deep into the inky box and picking up the poor little hamster. He couldn't quite handle it alone, so Oxnard volunteered himself silently by following Boss in and aiding him. "We just need to get this little critter somewhere safe to rest and recuperate from whatever happened to her." He tipped up his yellow hardhat slightly. "THEN we can worry about who she belongs to."
Panda frowned a bit, rubbing one of his ebony-circled eyes lazily with a paw. "Whoever owns her must not really care much for her or she wouldn't be here," he remarked snidely, rather uncharacteristic of himself. Hamtaro frowned, always looking at the best of everyone in the world.
"Maybe they were moving and she fell off the truck or something," Hamtaro reasoned, waving his little paws in the air.
Pashmina's face drooped a little, her big, round eyes going solemn. "But didn't Laura carry you inside of a box inside of the car when she brought you, Hamtaro?"
Hamtaro bit his lip and facefaulted; she had him there. "Well. uh.."
"Forget about it," Boss said. "Let's just take this poor little girl to our clubhouse to get better."
"Good idea, Boss!" Oxnard chimed, a wry little yes-man grin on his face.
"Ookyuu!" cried Penelope.
With that, they all abandoned the mysterious shiny box and carried the poor little hamster to the clubhouse. _________________
Uh, I was typing this at skool and study hall just ended, so this is the chapter for now. It was going to have some more, but I guess I'll have to cliffhanger it again and put the rest as Chapter three.
Remember, review and get a sunflower seed cookie!
Why not. Incentive! 10th review gets a drawing of any of the ham-hams they want. I'll even do fancharacters. n_n
I did proofread. they aren't spelling errors, they're British spellings. Other errors are explained below. I know it was rushed. I only got five minutes to type it so I hurried and cut out detail. That's why there's redundancy, too. Wasn't mentioned but I'll just say it now: I know their Japanese names, but they only have English names to me.
Okay. That aside, here comes the new chapter! __________________________________
Bijou blinked her big shiny eyes, and brushed back some of her dove white fur in their blue little bows. "We need to help zee little ham-ham," she observed, pointing out the obvious to everyone.
Hamtaro nodded, agreeing. "That we do."
Pashmina tilted her head slightly to the side, her candy pink scarf fluttering gently in a sudden rush of breeze. "I wonder who she belongs to," pondered she out loud, wistfulness to her soft little voice.
"We don't have time to worry about that now," Boss said, sage advice, going deep into the inky box and picking up the poor little hamster. He couldn't quite handle it alone, so Oxnard volunteered himself silently by following Boss in and aiding him. "We just need to get this little critter somewhere safe to rest and recuperate from whatever happened to her." He tipped up his yellow hardhat slightly. "THEN we can worry about who she belongs to."
Panda frowned a bit, rubbing one of his ebony-circled eyes lazily with a paw. "Whoever owns her must not really care much for her or she wouldn't be here," he remarked snidely, rather uncharacteristic of himself. Hamtaro frowned, always looking at the best of everyone in the world.
"Maybe they were moving and she fell off the truck or something," Hamtaro reasoned, waving his little paws in the air.
Pashmina's face drooped a little, her big, round eyes going solemn. "But didn't Laura carry you inside of a box inside of the car when she brought you, Hamtaro?"
Hamtaro bit his lip and facefaulted; she had him there. "Well. uh.."
"Forget about it," Boss said. "Let's just take this poor little girl to our clubhouse to get better."
"Good idea, Boss!" Oxnard chimed, a wry little yes-man grin on his face.
"Ookyuu!" cried Penelope.
With that, they all abandoned the mysterious shiny box and carried the poor little hamster to the clubhouse. _________________
Uh, I was typing this at skool and study hall just ended, so this is the chapter for now. It was going to have some more, but I guess I'll have to cliffhanger it again and put the rest as Chapter three.
Remember, review and get a sunflower seed cookie!
Why not. Incentive! 10th review gets a drawing of any of the ham-hams they want. I'll even do fancharacters. n_n