This story is a re-posting of a previous story I had written with editing
and some revision done.
Previous Reviews when the Story was Posted Previously
2003-12-03 1 Anonymous KICK AS i swear i have been looking everywhere for a yu gi oh fanifc yoai *hugs* I TH|INK I LO|VE YOU! but hayden might hurt me Brandi (honeybun_2@hotmail.com)
2003-10-30 8 Anonymous WOW! That is a great story so far! I want you to update already! PLEASE!
AltruBabe 2003-08-11 9 hurry as fast as you can to write more! i can't wait till u get the chance
Untouchable Angel 2003-06-05 8 Don't you dare stop there! It doesn't matter how many reviews your get. It matters that there are people out there that love this story. And to say...IM ONE OF THEM! so come on, please update?
(puts on a sweet smile)
Serenity and Zwen 2003-05-25 8 either do serenity/seto or serenity/bakura/ryou. One of the two (three?. But I can't STAND honda/tristan and serneity pairings. Of course, this is your choice.
Hime no Ichigo 2003-05-22 8 Not bad...not bad...*applauds* Keep up the good work! *yawns* Hmm...gotta go to bed now! ^__^
Untouchable Angel 2003-05-19 6 CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONT INUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE !CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CON TINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINU E!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CO NTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTIN UE!CONTINUE!
Untouchable Angel 2003-05-10 7 Thats really good. ^_^ continue please!
2003-04-30 7 Anonymous I liked this fanfic! write more it's getting interesting!^.~! more please** Ja ne**
Hime no Ichigo 2003-04-30 7 Signed OOh...suspense! I like so far! ^O^ Update soon!
The Incurable Romantic 2003-04-29 5 hm. not bad. need to work a bit on your skills though. Serenity kissed Bakura without any complaint. I would have expected her to slap him or something. sorry to say that you need more practice.
Nizuno Mikomi 2003-04-28 5 Hey! You cant cop out now! There's too much at stake! *wriggles*
Come ON! Write more! *beg grovel plead*
Atari and Mekou 2003-04-27 5 Really Good I like it!
dragontamer623 2003-04-27 5 good story so far. please continue
Jaylen 2003-04-27 5 Wow, that was a really cool story. Please write more! I want to know what happens!
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Pease?
Okay, bye!
-Jaylen
Yami Hiei the Chaos Mage 2003-04-09 1 wehe! lookie! i reviewed twice xP *points to other review* anyways once again, great story! dont stop!!
Yami Hiei the Chaos Mage 2003-04-09 2 O_O dont stop now!! its just starting to get good! T-T people will start reviewing! its a great story! o_o yey.i was the first one to review!! ^_^!! *happy*
Previous Reviews when the Story was Posted Previously
2003-12-03 1 Anonymous KICK AS i swear i have been looking everywhere for a yu gi oh fanifc yoai *hugs* I TH|INK I LO|VE YOU! but hayden might hurt me Brandi (honeybun_2@hotmail.com)
2003-10-30 8 Anonymous WOW! That is a great story so far! I want you to update already! PLEASE!
AltruBabe 2003-08-11 9 hurry as fast as you can to write more! i can't wait till u get the chance
Untouchable Angel 2003-06-05 8 Don't you dare stop there! It doesn't matter how many reviews your get. It matters that there are people out there that love this story. And to say...IM ONE OF THEM! so come on, please update?
(puts on a sweet smile)
Serenity and Zwen 2003-05-25 8 either do serenity/seto or serenity/bakura/ryou. One of the two (three?. But I can't STAND honda/tristan and serneity pairings. Of course, this is your choice.
Hime no Ichigo 2003-05-22 8 Not bad...not bad...*applauds* Keep up the good work! *yawns* Hmm...gotta go to bed now! ^__^
Untouchable Angel 2003-05-19 6 CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONT INUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE !CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CON TINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINU E!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CO NTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTINUE!CONTIN UE!CONTINUE!
Untouchable Angel 2003-05-10 7 Thats really good. ^_^ continue please!
2003-04-30 7 Anonymous I liked this fanfic! write more it's getting interesting!^.~! more please** Ja ne**
Hime no Ichigo 2003-04-30 7 Signed OOh...suspense! I like so far! ^O^ Update soon!
The Incurable Romantic 2003-04-29 5 hm. not bad. need to work a bit on your skills though. Serenity kissed Bakura without any complaint. I would have expected her to slap him or something. sorry to say that you need more practice.
Nizuno Mikomi 2003-04-28 5 Hey! You cant cop out now! There's too much at stake! *wriggles*
Come ON! Write more! *beg grovel plead*
Atari and Mekou 2003-04-27 5 Really Good I like it!
dragontamer623 2003-04-27 5 good story so far. please continue
Jaylen 2003-04-27 5 Wow, that was a really cool story. Please write more! I want to know what happens!
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Pease?
Okay, bye!
-Jaylen
Yami Hiei the Chaos Mage 2003-04-09 1 wehe! lookie! i reviewed twice xP *points to other review* anyways once again, great story! dont stop!!
Yami Hiei the Chaos Mage 2003-04-09 2 O_O dont stop now!! its just starting to get good! T-T people will start reviewing! its a great story! o_o yey.i was the first one to review!! ^_^!! *happy*