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I walked into Noah's old apartment with my bags. I was nervous; I hadn't seen Rachel in two years since I went to boarding school.
"Pele?" I turned around, there was Rachel.
"Hi Rachel." I said.
"I guess I'm your guardian now. Put your stuff by the door, we can get it when we leave. Aiden's in the living room, he'll be glad to see you." I nodded and put my stuff by the door. Then I went to look for Aiden. I noticed the coffin was closed in the living room, stupid really, I wanted it to be open coffin; he couldn't look that bad, could he? I walked towards the coffin, *why'd you leave me Noah?* I thought. I reached my hand to touch his coffin. When my hand touched the coffin, for the first time in four months my Powers went out of my control, I saw Noah's face, all mutilated and gross. That wasn't the only thing that scared me, I could hear laughter a little girl's laugh.
I gasped and pulled my hand away, shuddering. Aiden was beside me, instead of saying hi, he said
"You saw his face." It was a statement. I nodded.
"Hey Aiden."
"Hi Pele." He said solemnly. A lawyer walked up to me and Aiden,
"Mr. Aiden Keller, Noah has left you his camera, bicycle ties, jackets and developing materials along with the sum of $20,000. Here's the list you need to present to receive your items, (I have no idea how this works, bear with me people.) Ms. Pele Clay, Noah has left you his motorcycle, video camera, swivel chair and the sum of $20,000. Here is your list." He walked away. I turned to ask Aiden what he was talking about but he shook his head, no questions.
"Pele, Aiden, time to leave." Rachel said softly. I grabbed my bags and followed them into their car, thinking about my powers, I could have sworn they were under control. We got to their apartment and Rachel opened the door.
"Alright, come on Pele your room's over here." Rachel said, trying to sound like she had known for a while I would be her charge, but heard her thoughts, *I wish I had time to I dunno... clean up or something, at least known I would be Pele's guardian.* I walked into what must have been the guest room behind her.
"Okay, Aiden, Pele, give me your lists, I'll go back and pick up your stuff. Aiden, Pele's in charge." Rachel said walking out the door.
"I'll be in my room." Aiden said. I nodded and put my stuff down. I sat down on the bed and grabbed the remote, I pressed power button, big mistake.
I was in a huge white room with a TV filling one wall. Static at first but then... a weird noise, what looked like an eclipse, weird images (I forget their order) when it got to maggots turning skeletons in water, I tried to close my eyes, turn around, I couldn't, something wasn't wrong with my Powers, someone more powerful was here. Finally it showed a well then it ended. All of a sudden I was on the bed, apparently I was conscience the whole time, I was still sitting on the bed. My cell phone rang, I picked it up. It was on speaker
"7 days, Pele." A little girl's voice said, and then hung up.
Aiden ran into 'my' room. "How Pele? Rachel has the tape in her purse, I saw it in there." He said softly but with a bit of fear. "What did you see?" I told him about it all.
"But she couldn't, your supposed to watch a tape... not fair she did that. Maybe..."
"What are you talking about Aiden?" I said. He told me all he knew, about the tape, Samara, the well, Noah. I didn't say a word, I believed him.
"Be careful, Pele." He said. Just then, Rachel came home.
"All the stuff will come on Tuesday. Let's see, what do you guys want to do for dinner?"
*She's trying to be a better mom than before, she's getting better.* Aiden thought. I smiled inwardly, Aiden was the only one of the few who knew about my powers that acknowledged it and used it to our advantage. *That's good. Should I tell her about the vision?*
*No, she can't handle it. She doesn't have an inkling of Power like me, let alone as much as you, she'll go insane.*
*Okay.* I thought. Rachel looked at us expectantly so Aiden said,
"How about we go see a movie?"
"OK, you Pele?"
"Yeah, movie, great." That seemed to be a satisfactory answer, 'cause Rachel grabbed the newspaper and started to look for the movie times. There was an interesting title, Criminal man dies day after parole. I picked it up,
Peter Krakow, cleared murderer of his wife,
Died just one day after his parole hearing
Police suspect foul play due to...
I stopped reading there and looked at the picture of the man. He had died 8 days after Noah, I knew who killed him. Aiden had said Rachel must have shown someone else the tape since he was still alive.
(Important A/N! Remember when Noah's looking at the pictures before his death? Remember how he picked up his coffee of the newspaper and people thought it centered on the circle? Well actually you were supposed to notice the headline, Peter Something parole pending. Originally, Rachel was supposed to interview him at the beginning and not believe his innocence, and at the end she was supposed to show him the tape to save Aiden. Then they cut it, but I'm playing off that. I found that on some interview of the guy that played him.)
"Alright kids, how about Secret Window? It starts in an hour." Rachel cut into my thoughts.
"Secret Window? Isn't that, like, five years to old for Aiden?"
"I'm mature, and I've wanted to see it." Aiden said. I shrugged, Aiden confused me, why see a horror movie when you were living one?
A/N, well, how did you like it? I know the newspaper 'article' sucks, but I'm no journalist, REVIEW, even if you've already reviewed, REVIEW!
I walked into Noah's old apartment with my bags. I was nervous; I hadn't seen Rachel in two years since I went to boarding school.
"Pele?" I turned around, there was Rachel.
"Hi Rachel." I said.
"I guess I'm your guardian now. Put your stuff by the door, we can get it when we leave. Aiden's in the living room, he'll be glad to see you." I nodded and put my stuff by the door. Then I went to look for Aiden. I noticed the coffin was closed in the living room, stupid really, I wanted it to be open coffin; he couldn't look that bad, could he? I walked towards the coffin, *why'd you leave me Noah?* I thought. I reached my hand to touch his coffin. When my hand touched the coffin, for the first time in four months my Powers went out of my control, I saw Noah's face, all mutilated and gross. That wasn't the only thing that scared me, I could hear laughter a little girl's laugh.
I gasped and pulled my hand away, shuddering. Aiden was beside me, instead of saying hi, he said
"You saw his face." It was a statement. I nodded.
"Hey Aiden."
"Hi Pele." He said solemnly. A lawyer walked up to me and Aiden,
"Mr. Aiden Keller, Noah has left you his camera, bicycle ties, jackets and developing materials along with the sum of $20,000. Here's the list you need to present to receive your items, (I have no idea how this works, bear with me people.) Ms. Pele Clay, Noah has left you his motorcycle, video camera, swivel chair and the sum of $20,000. Here is your list." He walked away. I turned to ask Aiden what he was talking about but he shook his head, no questions.
"Pele, Aiden, time to leave." Rachel said softly. I grabbed my bags and followed them into their car, thinking about my powers, I could have sworn they were under control. We got to their apartment and Rachel opened the door.
"Alright, come on Pele your room's over here." Rachel said, trying to sound like she had known for a while I would be her charge, but heard her thoughts, *I wish I had time to I dunno... clean up or something, at least known I would be Pele's guardian.* I walked into what must have been the guest room behind her.
"Okay, Aiden, Pele, give me your lists, I'll go back and pick up your stuff. Aiden, Pele's in charge." Rachel said walking out the door.
"I'll be in my room." Aiden said. I nodded and put my stuff down. I sat down on the bed and grabbed the remote, I pressed power button, big mistake.
I was in a huge white room with a TV filling one wall. Static at first but then... a weird noise, what looked like an eclipse, weird images (I forget their order) when it got to maggots turning skeletons in water, I tried to close my eyes, turn around, I couldn't, something wasn't wrong with my Powers, someone more powerful was here. Finally it showed a well then it ended. All of a sudden I was on the bed, apparently I was conscience the whole time, I was still sitting on the bed. My cell phone rang, I picked it up. It was on speaker
"7 days, Pele." A little girl's voice said, and then hung up.
Aiden ran into 'my' room. "How Pele? Rachel has the tape in her purse, I saw it in there." He said softly but with a bit of fear. "What did you see?" I told him about it all.
"But she couldn't, your supposed to watch a tape... not fair she did that. Maybe..."
"What are you talking about Aiden?" I said. He told me all he knew, about the tape, Samara, the well, Noah. I didn't say a word, I believed him.
"Be careful, Pele." He said. Just then, Rachel came home.
"All the stuff will come on Tuesday. Let's see, what do you guys want to do for dinner?"
*She's trying to be a better mom than before, she's getting better.* Aiden thought. I smiled inwardly, Aiden was the only one of the few who knew about my powers that acknowledged it and used it to our advantage. *That's good. Should I tell her about the vision?*
*No, she can't handle it. She doesn't have an inkling of Power like me, let alone as much as you, she'll go insane.*
*Okay.* I thought. Rachel looked at us expectantly so Aiden said,
"How about we go see a movie?"
"OK, you Pele?"
"Yeah, movie, great." That seemed to be a satisfactory answer, 'cause Rachel grabbed the newspaper and started to look for the movie times. There was an interesting title, Criminal man dies day after parole. I picked it up,
Peter Krakow, cleared murderer of his wife,
Died just one day after his parole hearing
Police suspect foul play due to...
I stopped reading there and looked at the picture of the man. He had died 8 days after Noah, I knew who killed him. Aiden had said Rachel must have shown someone else the tape since he was still alive.
(Important A/N! Remember when Noah's looking at the pictures before his death? Remember how he picked up his coffee of the newspaper and people thought it centered on the circle? Well actually you were supposed to notice the headline, Peter Something parole pending. Originally, Rachel was supposed to interview him at the beginning and not believe his innocence, and at the end she was supposed to show him the tape to save Aiden. Then they cut it, but I'm playing off that. I found that on some interview of the guy that played him.)
"Alright kids, how about Secret Window? It starts in an hour." Rachel cut into my thoughts.
"Secret Window? Isn't that, like, five years to old for Aiden?"
"I'm mature, and I've wanted to see it." Aiden said. I shrugged, Aiden confused me, why see a horror movie when you were living one?
A/N, well, how did you like it? I know the newspaper 'article' sucks, but I'm no journalist, REVIEW, even if you've already reviewed, REVIEW!