First, replies,
Ares: Thanks for your Vote.
A.L. Nowicki: Eheh, I wasn't thinking of 'On the List' when I chose the name Zu, It was just a coincidence, and yes, after 4.25 days of labour, anyone would change drastictly, as for Mina being Pregnant with te little ones, thats not the case, the other day I was watching an Interview with Peta Willson on TV, and she said that her future plans is to have Ten Kids, I thought it was hillarious and decided to Include it in here, but in the fic she simply decided that she and Dorian would have Ten Kids, without bothering to discuss the matter with Dorian.
Second, I'll try and Rap up things by next friday, so that I can start preparing for finalls, its my final simester at high school. Anyway, I would like it if you checked out me other fic, 'the Bureau of Extraordinarys' which is about the League of 2004.
Oh, By Mid June I'll return with LEAGUERS III, which will probebly not bea romance but a story about Skinners past.
Third, Ipresent to you:
SCENE VIII
"But why are you leaving?" asked Elain anxiously.
"There is no reason to stay, not anymore." said Bernadette as she was packing her things in her cabin on the Nautiulus.
"Isn't there anything I can do to get you stay?"
"I don't think so."
"I'll Double your salary!"
"I don't get paid to begin with!"
"I'll triple it then!"
"Ugh!"
"Can't you just take a few days off to concider it?"
"I can, butI won't."
"Havn't you thought about the effect this is going to have on evryone?"
"You managed quit well before I came along."
"I mean Personally."
"I'll miss you Elain, and Nemona and Mina as well, I'll miss talking about fashion and flowers and all sorts of Gay stuff with Dorian, I'll even Miss Skinner making jokes about being French and Eating Frogs, but I'll get over it, as will all of you."
"How about Henry?"
"I'll miss him the most, I hope he forgets about me."
"But will you forget about him?"
"...................."
"I though so."
"My Ship arrives in three days."
"You don't want to leave, don't you? if you really wanted to leave you would have asked Nemona to take you away."
"I don't want to bother her, I have booked a room in a hotel downtown London, I'll stay in there till my ship arrives."
"So thats it, your leaving?"
"Yes."
"To France?"
"Yes."
"What are you gonna do?"
"I'll probebly get back to my job detecting trouble makers at the Mouling Roure, as well as scallping tickets on the side."
"Speaking of which, do you have any 'Fleetwood Mac' tickets?"
"No, I'm all out, I can get you a seat Next to the Speakers at the 'Muse' concert."
"Thats alright, no need."
"Good Bye Elain."
"Good Bye, C-cu....., Bernadette."
The two then hugged before Bernadette picked up her bag and left.
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Two scenes and a Epilogue to go, I have two endings depending on wether you think they should stay togeather or leave each other, so tell me.
Ares: Thanks for your Vote.
A.L. Nowicki: Eheh, I wasn't thinking of 'On the List' when I chose the name Zu, It was just a coincidence, and yes, after 4.25 days of labour, anyone would change drastictly, as for Mina being Pregnant with te little ones, thats not the case, the other day I was watching an Interview with Peta Willson on TV, and she said that her future plans is to have Ten Kids, I thought it was hillarious and decided to Include it in here, but in the fic she simply decided that she and Dorian would have Ten Kids, without bothering to discuss the matter with Dorian.
Second, I'll try and Rap up things by next friday, so that I can start preparing for finalls, its my final simester at high school. Anyway, I would like it if you checked out me other fic, 'the Bureau of Extraordinarys' which is about the League of 2004.
Oh, By Mid June I'll return with LEAGUERS III, which will probebly not bea romance but a story about Skinners past.
Third, Ipresent to you:
SCENE VIII
"But why are you leaving?" asked Elain anxiously.
"There is no reason to stay, not anymore." said Bernadette as she was packing her things in her cabin on the Nautiulus.
"Isn't there anything I can do to get you stay?"
"I don't think so."
"I'll Double your salary!"
"I don't get paid to begin with!"
"I'll triple it then!"
"Ugh!"
"Can't you just take a few days off to concider it?"
"I can, butI won't."
"Havn't you thought about the effect this is going to have on evryone?"
"You managed quit well before I came along."
"I mean Personally."
"I'll miss you Elain, and Nemona and Mina as well, I'll miss talking about fashion and flowers and all sorts of Gay stuff with Dorian, I'll even Miss Skinner making jokes about being French and Eating Frogs, but I'll get over it, as will all of you."
"How about Henry?"
"I'll miss him the most, I hope he forgets about me."
"But will you forget about him?"
"...................."
"I though so."
"My Ship arrives in three days."
"You don't want to leave, don't you? if you really wanted to leave you would have asked Nemona to take you away."
"I don't want to bother her, I have booked a room in a hotel downtown London, I'll stay in there till my ship arrives."
"So thats it, your leaving?"
"Yes."
"To France?"
"Yes."
"What are you gonna do?"
"I'll probebly get back to my job detecting trouble makers at the Mouling Roure, as well as scallping tickets on the side."
"Speaking of which, do you have any 'Fleetwood Mac' tickets?"
"No, I'm all out, I can get you a seat Next to the Speakers at the 'Muse' concert."
"Thats alright, no need."
"Good Bye Elain."
"Good Bye, C-cu....., Bernadette."
The two then hugged before Bernadette picked up her bag and left.
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Two scenes and a Epilogue to go, I have two endings depending on wether you think they should stay togeather or leave each other, so tell me.