ok,ok,i know the chapter was toooooo short.so i wrote another chapter.no flames.
A few week laters.At dory's tunnel a young Blue tang peaked out a looked around, she was excited about
something.She looked around again and and swam back into the tunnel.
Tang:Mom,Hey mom,wake up
Dory:(talking in sleep) 200 more years please.
Tang:Mom,wake up,it my first day of school,and Nemo going to be there.
Dory:Huh,what is it?
Tang:it my first day of school
Dory:Oh,I almost forgot
Tang:Mom,you did forget
Dory:Garlin said he's going to come over and take you to school with me.
Tang:No, wait,You remember that.
Dory:Now Yolanda,I know you don't have good attention span,but please listen to me,
Yolanda:(nods) ok
Dory:Now remember, Don't go anywhere dangerous because Shamin is very protective,so please don't get him
Started.OK, did you get all that?
Yolanda:Sorry, I wasn't paying attention
Dory:(sighs) now I forgot what I said.
Yolanda:you said something about Marlin being parinoid.
Dory:now wait, I remember now.Just don't go nowhere dangerous,and you will be okay.
Yolanda:That's "anywhere" mom.
voice:Dory,are you here?
Dory:Hi Shaman
Marlin:That's Marlin
Yolanda:Hi Marlin, Hi Nemo
Nemo:Hello,Yolanda,
Yolanda:hi nemo
On the Way to school
Nemo and yolanda were swiming ahead of Marlin and Dory.
Marlin:(to dory) you know, for a adopted fish,she looks and acts like you in a lot of ways.
Dory:Alrighty then, Name one thing.
Marlin:Well she looks like you.
Dory:well of course she looks like me we are the same spieces, silly
Marlin:Yeah that's true, but she even got the same eye color.
Dory:But don't all Blue tangs have the same eye color?
Marlin:Well I really don't know, have she been feeling okay lately?
Dory:Yeah, her overgrown dorsal fin ain't getting any bigger.
Marlin:she kinda looks like she had hair
Dory:yeah, it really suits her.....Oh, look we're here!
Marlin:Ok, Nemo, introdudes Yolanda to all of your classmates, ok.
Nemo:Ok, dad.
Yolanda:This is going to be fun!
Nemo:Hey look there's Mr.Ray, come on Yolanda I want you to meet my friends.
Mr.Ray:Hi Nemo, Who this?
Nemo:This is Yolanda
Mr.Ray:Well, Answer this question. What do your kind use to protect yourself?
Yolanda:Well, we seal sharp spines
Nemo:Cool!
Mr.Ray:Right! Come on aboard.
Dory:Bye Yolanda, bye Leo
Marlin:That's Nemo.Bye Son! see you later.
Yolanda:Bye mom, bye Marlin!
Nemo:Bye dad,see you later.
That the second chapter,Sorry I couldn't think of a better name.Reveiws please.No flames.
Are you wondering why Yolanda has overgrown dorsal fin, you'll find out later,
if i can think of a good reason,if you have some good idea please put them in the review.
Thanks.
A few week laters.At dory's tunnel a young Blue tang peaked out a looked around, she was excited about
something.She looked around again and and swam back into the tunnel.
Tang:Mom,Hey mom,wake up
Dory:(talking in sleep) 200 more years please.
Tang:Mom,wake up,it my first day of school,and Nemo going to be there.
Dory:Huh,what is it?
Tang:it my first day of school
Dory:Oh,I almost forgot
Tang:Mom,you did forget
Dory:Garlin said he's going to come over and take you to school with me.
Tang:No, wait,You remember that.
Dory:Now Yolanda,I know you don't have good attention span,but please listen to me,
Yolanda:(nods) ok
Dory:Now remember, Don't go anywhere dangerous because Shamin is very protective,so please don't get him
Started.OK, did you get all that?
Yolanda:Sorry, I wasn't paying attention
Dory:(sighs) now I forgot what I said.
Yolanda:you said something about Marlin being parinoid.
Dory:now wait, I remember now.Just don't go nowhere dangerous,and you will be okay.
Yolanda:That's "anywhere" mom.
voice:Dory,are you here?
Dory:Hi Shaman
Marlin:That's Marlin
Yolanda:Hi Marlin, Hi Nemo
Nemo:Hello,Yolanda,
Yolanda:hi nemo
On the Way to school
Nemo and yolanda were swiming ahead of Marlin and Dory.
Marlin:(to dory) you know, for a adopted fish,she looks and acts like you in a lot of ways.
Dory:Alrighty then, Name one thing.
Marlin:Well she looks like you.
Dory:well of course she looks like me we are the same spieces, silly
Marlin:Yeah that's true, but she even got the same eye color.
Dory:But don't all Blue tangs have the same eye color?
Marlin:Well I really don't know, have she been feeling okay lately?
Dory:Yeah, her overgrown dorsal fin ain't getting any bigger.
Marlin:she kinda looks like she had hair
Dory:yeah, it really suits her.....Oh, look we're here!
Marlin:Ok, Nemo, introdudes Yolanda to all of your classmates, ok.
Nemo:Ok, dad.
Yolanda:This is going to be fun!
Nemo:Hey look there's Mr.Ray, come on Yolanda I want you to meet my friends.
Mr.Ray:Hi Nemo, Who this?
Nemo:This is Yolanda
Mr.Ray:Well, Answer this question. What do your kind use to protect yourself?
Yolanda:Well, we seal sharp spines
Nemo:Cool!
Mr.Ray:Right! Come on aboard.
Dory:Bye Yolanda, bye Leo
Marlin:That's Nemo.Bye Son! see you later.
Yolanda:Bye mom, bye Marlin!
Nemo:Bye dad,see you later.
That the second chapter,Sorry I couldn't think of a better name.Reveiws please.No flames.
Are you wondering why Yolanda has overgrown dorsal fin, you'll find out later,
if i can think of a good reason,if you have some good idea please put them in the review.
Thanks.
