It's me again! I like this whole I'll review back for you guys!
I've been losing hope in this fic...
Garet: Why do you lose faith in your stories?!
Disclaimer: God, I've been forgetting these. I don't own Golden Sun! That goes for the other chapter before as well! Golden Sun belongs to Camelot!
Well... someone said it sucked... and another person said it wasn't all that funny... and a few more bad things toward it... not to mention my friends at school are mad because I made the Golden Sun characters replace the Soul Crystal characters in the original ones... Anyway, time to talk to my reviewers!
Vokteren: Not being harsh, but you scared me again. Your review was nice, but I began panicking thinking 'Crap! Drastic?! I don't even know what that means?! Screw up my story?! It's all ready screwed up!' But I am not being mean, please don't think that. I just don't want to lose my Norway friend!
Flamethrowerqueen: Perfectly understandable. Although, that was the first flame I have ever received, it's okay. I'll though I was hurt afterward, I thought 'Hey, she's right. It did suck.' So thank you for saying that. I guess I my attempts for humor were in clumps and caused the story to suck. Don't get mad or sad please! But only one thing has been stuck in my mind. When you said 'Looks at him sheepishly' who's he? If you are referring to me, I want you to know I'm a girl...
Master Adept 2000: Thank you for reviewing my story. Nice to know you picked up this story. I'm still enjoying the Emperor's New Groove. Please update and hope you like this story!
TheDeadMan09: Wow! I love the fact that you love my stories like Mcdonalds! I'm still looking out for more of the Horrible B-day stories. Thanks for reviewing!
WildfireDreams: Nice to get new blood in the reviews. It is also nice to know someone doesn't mind the lack of humor. This may turn out more romantics for Isaac and Mia then humor. Keep reading please!
Jasmine the Fire Adept: Go me? Wow... like, no one's ever said that to me really... thank you! I feel loved! And my stories rock? Thank you. Do keep reading!
From where we left off: Mia made a deal with Isaac that she would stay at the castle as long as it meant she would take his place. Will romance and humor occur?
The two Adepts were walking around the hall in silence. Each avoided eye contact. Garet, who had been silently still in Isaac's claw. Mia had grown nervous by the scary Chinese demon statues. She gasped, and clung to Isaac's arm. (Aww... they're so cute!) She shivered when she felt how cold he was. Isaac blushed at the fact that Mia was holding onto his arm.
"Um... my mom always taught me to give a nice girl a nice room. So, you can have the room down this hall. But promise me something." Isaac said.
"What's that?" Mia asked, raising an eyebrow.
"Since this is your new home, you can go anywhere but the West Wing." Isaac said. Mia was about to talk before Isaac held up a claw. "I know, you were gonna say what's in the West Wing, but I'll just say it's forbidden." Isaac said.
"Why is it forbidden?" Mia asked.
"I can't tell you. Says so in the script. Look at page 22." Isaac said. Mia did and read 'Mia can't know what's in the West Wing because it's forbidden.' "Stupid isn't it?" Isaac asked.
"No kidding." Mia grumbled. (HEY!!!) Isaac couldn't help but stare at her blue hair. He had never seen anyone with blue hair besides Piers. He just wanted to feel it. See if it was greasy dyed or smooth and natural. He growled, not able to tear his eyes off that blue hair. Garet began poking his claw. Isaac looked down.
"Invite her to dinner!" Garet hissed. Isaac nodded.
"You'll join me for dinner." Isaac said, shoving her into a room. Mia gasped when he slammed the door. Though on the other side, Isaac was more nervous than angry. "How was that?" Isaac asked, smiling.
"I said 'ask' not force." Garet grumbled. Isaac blushed.
"I was nervous! I've never really asked anyone out before!" Isaac growled. Garet raised an eyebrow.
"That bitch! How dare she make a fool of me!" Alex shouted, sitting in a fur chair. Agatio came looking drunk with a few more beers.
"Cheer up blue boy! I mean, it's not like it's the end of the world! God! I'm seeing green flamingos!" Agatio said. Alex looked around. Boy, the poor Proxian was so drunk he saw green flamingos... (My friend got high off a highlighter and in the middle of class she said 'Hi Bob the green flamingo!')
"How can I cheer up?! Mia's the only pretty girl in the village who's a water adept! If she says no, I might have to go for Karst, and we all know she's scary!" Alex said. "Really? I think she's hot!" Agatio said. Suddenly, Kraden ran in.
"Help me! Mia has been kidnapped!" Kraden cried.
"Kidnapped?! By who?!" Alex demanded, jumping up.
"Some guy with dog-ears! He's big and scary!" Kraden said. Alex and Agatio turned to each other to exchange glances. "Please help me out!"
"Oh, I'll be more than happy to help you out." Alex said, smirking. Kraden smiled.
Kraden screamed and landed with swirly eyes hard in the snow outside the bar.
"And keep out you lunatic!" Alex called. Kraden sniffled. That's when Alex got an evil idea...
That's all for now folks! I hope it kept you reading. Please R/R!
Garet: Why do you lose faith in your stories?!
Disclaimer: God, I've been forgetting these. I don't own Golden Sun! That goes for the other chapter before as well! Golden Sun belongs to Camelot!
Well... someone said it sucked... and another person said it wasn't all that funny... and a few more bad things toward it... not to mention my friends at school are mad because I made the Golden Sun characters replace the Soul Crystal characters in the original ones... Anyway, time to talk to my reviewers!
Vokteren: Not being harsh, but you scared me again. Your review was nice, but I began panicking thinking 'Crap! Drastic?! I don't even know what that means?! Screw up my story?! It's all ready screwed up!' But I am not being mean, please don't think that. I just don't want to lose my Norway friend!
Flamethrowerqueen: Perfectly understandable. Although, that was the first flame I have ever received, it's okay. I'll though I was hurt afterward, I thought 'Hey, she's right. It did suck.' So thank you for saying that. I guess I my attempts for humor were in clumps and caused the story to suck. Don't get mad or sad please! But only one thing has been stuck in my mind. When you said 'Looks at him sheepishly' who's he? If you are referring to me, I want you to know I'm a girl...
Master Adept 2000: Thank you for reviewing my story. Nice to know you picked up this story. I'm still enjoying the Emperor's New Groove. Please update and hope you like this story!
TheDeadMan09: Wow! I love the fact that you love my stories like Mcdonalds! I'm still looking out for more of the Horrible B-day stories. Thanks for reviewing!
WildfireDreams: Nice to get new blood in the reviews. It is also nice to know someone doesn't mind the lack of humor. This may turn out more romantics for Isaac and Mia then humor. Keep reading please!
Jasmine the Fire Adept: Go me? Wow... like, no one's ever said that to me really... thank you! I feel loved! And my stories rock? Thank you. Do keep reading!
From where we left off: Mia made a deal with Isaac that she would stay at the castle as long as it meant she would take his place. Will romance and humor occur?
The two Adepts were walking around the hall in silence. Each avoided eye contact. Garet, who had been silently still in Isaac's claw. Mia had grown nervous by the scary Chinese demon statues. She gasped, and clung to Isaac's arm. (Aww... they're so cute!) She shivered when she felt how cold he was. Isaac blushed at the fact that Mia was holding onto his arm.
"Um... my mom always taught me to give a nice girl a nice room. So, you can have the room down this hall. But promise me something." Isaac said.
"What's that?" Mia asked, raising an eyebrow.
"Since this is your new home, you can go anywhere but the West Wing." Isaac said. Mia was about to talk before Isaac held up a claw. "I know, you were gonna say what's in the West Wing, but I'll just say it's forbidden." Isaac said.
"Why is it forbidden?" Mia asked.
"I can't tell you. Says so in the script. Look at page 22." Isaac said. Mia did and read 'Mia can't know what's in the West Wing because it's forbidden.' "Stupid isn't it?" Isaac asked.
"No kidding." Mia grumbled. (HEY!!!) Isaac couldn't help but stare at her blue hair. He had never seen anyone with blue hair besides Piers. He just wanted to feel it. See if it was greasy dyed or smooth and natural. He growled, not able to tear his eyes off that blue hair. Garet began poking his claw. Isaac looked down.
"Invite her to dinner!" Garet hissed. Isaac nodded.
"You'll join me for dinner." Isaac said, shoving her into a room. Mia gasped when he slammed the door. Though on the other side, Isaac was more nervous than angry. "How was that?" Isaac asked, smiling.
"I said 'ask' not force." Garet grumbled. Isaac blushed.
"I was nervous! I've never really asked anyone out before!" Isaac growled. Garet raised an eyebrow.
"That bitch! How dare she make a fool of me!" Alex shouted, sitting in a fur chair. Agatio came looking drunk with a few more beers.
"Cheer up blue boy! I mean, it's not like it's the end of the world! God! I'm seeing green flamingos!" Agatio said. Alex looked around. Boy, the poor Proxian was so drunk he saw green flamingos... (My friend got high off a highlighter and in the middle of class she said 'Hi Bob the green flamingo!')
"How can I cheer up?! Mia's the only pretty girl in the village who's a water adept! If she says no, I might have to go for Karst, and we all know she's scary!" Alex said. "Really? I think she's hot!" Agatio said. Suddenly, Kraden ran in.
"Help me! Mia has been kidnapped!" Kraden cried.
"Kidnapped?! By who?!" Alex demanded, jumping up.
"Some guy with dog-ears! He's big and scary!" Kraden said. Alex and Agatio turned to each other to exchange glances. "Please help me out!"
"Oh, I'll be more than happy to help you out." Alex said, smirking. Kraden smiled.
Kraden screamed and landed with swirly eyes hard in the snow outside the bar.
"And keep out you lunatic!" Alex called. Kraden sniffled. That's when Alex got an evil idea...
That's all for now folks! I hope it kept you reading. Please R/R!