Welcome back people! I see my story has you all staying? Well,
I'm glad that no one hates this anymore! What really amazes e would have to
be the fact that it took me 7 chapters to get 14 reviews, but it's only 4
chapters so far and I all ready have 17 reviews! Yay me! Thank you
everyone, and here are some comments:
Vokteren: Wow! You really liked that chapter?! I feel happy! You're still with me! Yay! Apparently, my memory of my friend high gave everyone a laugh for the green flamingos. When I got a little high with her I saw a blue bear...
Flamethrowerqueen: Please don't call your self a fucking asshole. It makes me feel bad. It was my fault that I didn't say I was girl. I'm sorry. And don't worry about the flame. I'm really happy I got that. It showed me a lot of stuff I shouldn't have done. You saw purple flamingos? No fair...
Jasmine The Fire Adept: Glad you like this story. Hey, thanks for reviewing most of the chapters. I feel so loved. You have to be my most hyper fan. Thanks and I hope you like this next chapter! Oh, Isaac liked your hug.
From where we left off: Okay, all I can say is that Agatio got drunk and saw green flamingos not to mention that Alex was evil plotting some thing. What do you think is gonna happen?...
Mia sobbed on her bed. She would never see her father again. She would be stuck in a castle forever. She would have to date a guy who constantly barked or howled at the moon. She frowned when she heard knocking on her door.
"Come in..." She sniffled. The door burst open, and Sheba and her tea crew came in. Mia stared at the moving objects. "I knew it was a bad idea to have 3 beers before rescuing my father..." Mia thought.
"How are you doing, honey?" Sheba asked. Mia shook her head.
"How are you doing that?" Mia asked, staring at Sheba.
"I'm enchanted! Duh! God, the little knowledge these Water Adepts have these days..." Sheba poured some tea into a cup. "Have a cup of tea, dear. It might soothe you. So, how's your time here?" Sheba asked again.
"It's horrible!" Mia said.
"You think you're the only one?! I'm a frick'in teacup who can't even say damn!" Felix shouted. Sheba smacked him.
"Now what have I said about cussing Felix?!" Sheba demanded.
"I don't care what you say because we all know in real life I'm older than you, tea pot!" Felix challenged.
"At least I'm not a cup that looks like teacup trailer trash!" Sheba snapped.
"You wanna go chubby pot?!" Felix asked. "I can easily kill you with one Ragnorak spell!"
"We'll see which is better! Your Ragnorak or my Spark Plasma!" Sheba said, tackling Felix. Mia watched the two fight, and flinched when she heard something shatter and Felix's painful scream.
"Oh, you bitch! I just got that super glued!" Felix yelled. The door opened, and Piers hopped in.
"Dinner is served." He said, bowing.
"I'm not going." Mia simply said. Everyone froze, even Sheba and Felix.
"Where is she?!" Isaac whimpered, pacing back and fourth. (The character talking to Isaac will be Jenna instead of Sheba because the Duster needs more parts.)
"Well, she sort of lost her father and freedom in one day. Give her time." Jenna said. Isaac whined, sat down, and began to gnaw a flea off his claw. Garet, standing next to Jenna began to exchange glances.
"Hey, Isaac, you think she might be the one to break the spell?" Garet asked. Jenna smacked Garet on the back of his head.
"Duh! My god Garet, everyone knows that!" Jenna snapped.
"She couldn't be the one. She's so beautiful... and I'm a... a..." Isaac began before Garet finished.
"Mutt?" He asked, trying to cheer Isaac up in the worst way. Isaac sniffled, before sobbing. Jenna shot the other Fire Adept a glare.
"Isaac, help her see through that! Show her your soft side! The puppy within you!" Jenna ordered. Isaac looked at her confused.
"How?" He asked, back to normal.
"Flash her a smile! Be gentle! Whimper at her! Give her that famous puppy face you do! But you must control your temper!" Jenna shouted.
"I have a temper?!" Isaac asked, shocked. The door slowly opened. Piers walked in nervously. "Well? Where is she?" Isaac asked.
"She is not coming." Piers said proudly, before flinching as though to be hit. Isaac sniffled.
"She's not...?" Isaac whimpered. Garet coughed.
"Isaac, that's your cue to be pissed off." Garet whispered.
"It is?" Isaac asked. They all nodded. "Oh... WHAT?!?!?!" Isaac roared. He broke down the doors, crushing little Ivan behind them, and ran to Mia's room. "Why aren't you coming to dinner?!" Isaac demanded through the door.
"I don't want to!" Mia shouted back.
"Why not?!" Isaac shouted back.
"I'm not hungry!" Mia called back to him.
"Then I'll just break down the door!" Isaac ran into the door, but nothing happened. He panted, and tried again. Nothing. "Curse this frail strength of mine..." Isaac muttered. Garet pulled on his pant leg.
"Master... I might be wrong... but I don't think that's the best thing to do." Garet said, forcing a smile on. Isaac sighed.
"Will you please join me for dinner?" Isaac asked, politely.
"I would never join a mutt for dinner!" Mia yelled. Silence. Suddenly, Isaac fell to his knees sobbing pathetically. Mutt was the worst word to be called. Garet began comforting the crying dog-eared being while Jenna burst into hell flames. She stormed to the door, and growled.
"IF YOU DON'T JOIN MASTER ISAAC FOR DINNER, I SWEAR TO GOD I WILL BURN DOWN THIS DOOR AND DRAG YOU TO THE TABLE!!!" Jenna screamed, preparing Fume. Garet gasped, and grabbed her.
"No Jenna! Violence nor Psyenergy will get us anywhere!" Garet said. Isaac pulled out the script, read his line (Isaac: Forgot. Sorry.)
"Um... fine... if you won't eat with... can't read that smudge... oh! If you won't eat with me than you can starve!" Isaac said. Mia thought he was angry, but Isaac was really smiling at the fact that he didn't screw up his line. He headed toward the West Wing and opened a door. There was a glowing pink rose dropping a pedal. He sighed, and stared at it. "She'll never see the Earth Adept side of me..." He whispered...
Not too bad. I thought it was okay. Please R/R!
Vokteren: Wow! You really liked that chapter?! I feel happy! You're still with me! Yay! Apparently, my memory of my friend high gave everyone a laugh for the green flamingos. When I got a little high with her I saw a blue bear...
Flamethrowerqueen: Please don't call your self a fucking asshole. It makes me feel bad. It was my fault that I didn't say I was girl. I'm sorry. And don't worry about the flame. I'm really happy I got that. It showed me a lot of stuff I shouldn't have done. You saw purple flamingos? No fair...
Jasmine The Fire Adept: Glad you like this story. Hey, thanks for reviewing most of the chapters. I feel so loved. You have to be my most hyper fan. Thanks and I hope you like this next chapter! Oh, Isaac liked your hug.
From where we left off: Okay, all I can say is that Agatio got drunk and saw green flamingos not to mention that Alex was evil plotting some thing. What do you think is gonna happen?...
Mia sobbed on her bed. She would never see her father again. She would be stuck in a castle forever. She would have to date a guy who constantly barked or howled at the moon. She frowned when she heard knocking on her door.
"Come in..." She sniffled. The door burst open, and Sheba and her tea crew came in. Mia stared at the moving objects. "I knew it was a bad idea to have 3 beers before rescuing my father..." Mia thought.
"How are you doing, honey?" Sheba asked. Mia shook her head.
"How are you doing that?" Mia asked, staring at Sheba.
"I'm enchanted! Duh! God, the little knowledge these Water Adepts have these days..." Sheba poured some tea into a cup. "Have a cup of tea, dear. It might soothe you. So, how's your time here?" Sheba asked again.
"It's horrible!" Mia said.
"You think you're the only one?! I'm a frick'in teacup who can't even say damn!" Felix shouted. Sheba smacked him.
"Now what have I said about cussing Felix?!" Sheba demanded.
"I don't care what you say because we all know in real life I'm older than you, tea pot!" Felix challenged.
"At least I'm not a cup that looks like teacup trailer trash!" Sheba snapped.
"You wanna go chubby pot?!" Felix asked. "I can easily kill you with one Ragnorak spell!"
"We'll see which is better! Your Ragnorak or my Spark Plasma!" Sheba said, tackling Felix. Mia watched the two fight, and flinched when she heard something shatter and Felix's painful scream.
"Oh, you bitch! I just got that super glued!" Felix yelled. The door opened, and Piers hopped in.
"Dinner is served." He said, bowing.
"I'm not going." Mia simply said. Everyone froze, even Sheba and Felix.
"Where is she?!" Isaac whimpered, pacing back and fourth. (The character talking to Isaac will be Jenna instead of Sheba because the Duster needs more parts.)
"Well, she sort of lost her father and freedom in one day. Give her time." Jenna said. Isaac whined, sat down, and began to gnaw a flea off his claw. Garet, standing next to Jenna began to exchange glances.
"Hey, Isaac, you think she might be the one to break the spell?" Garet asked. Jenna smacked Garet on the back of his head.
"Duh! My god Garet, everyone knows that!" Jenna snapped.
"She couldn't be the one. She's so beautiful... and I'm a... a..." Isaac began before Garet finished.
"Mutt?" He asked, trying to cheer Isaac up in the worst way. Isaac sniffled, before sobbing. Jenna shot the other Fire Adept a glare.
"Isaac, help her see through that! Show her your soft side! The puppy within you!" Jenna ordered. Isaac looked at her confused.
"How?" He asked, back to normal.
"Flash her a smile! Be gentle! Whimper at her! Give her that famous puppy face you do! But you must control your temper!" Jenna shouted.
"I have a temper?!" Isaac asked, shocked. The door slowly opened. Piers walked in nervously. "Well? Where is she?" Isaac asked.
"She is not coming." Piers said proudly, before flinching as though to be hit. Isaac sniffled.
"She's not...?" Isaac whimpered. Garet coughed.
"Isaac, that's your cue to be pissed off." Garet whispered.
"It is?" Isaac asked. They all nodded. "Oh... WHAT?!?!?!" Isaac roared. He broke down the doors, crushing little Ivan behind them, and ran to Mia's room. "Why aren't you coming to dinner?!" Isaac demanded through the door.
"I don't want to!" Mia shouted back.
"Why not?!" Isaac shouted back.
"I'm not hungry!" Mia called back to him.
"Then I'll just break down the door!" Isaac ran into the door, but nothing happened. He panted, and tried again. Nothing. "Curse this frail strength of mine..." Isaac muttered. Garet pulled on his pant leg.
"Master... I might be wrong... but I don't think that's the best thing to do." Garet said, forcing a smile on. Isaac sighed.
"Will you please join me for dinner?" Isaac asked, politely.
"I would never join a mutt for dinner!" Mia yelled. Silence. Suddenly, Isaac fell to his knees sobbing pathetically. Mutt was the worst word to be called. Garet began comforting the crying dog-eared being while Jenna burst into hell flames. She stormed to the door, and growled.
"IF YOU DON'T JOIN MASTER ISAAC FOR DINNER, I SWEAR TO GOD I WILL BURN DOWN THIS DOOR AND DRAG YOU TO THE TABLE!!!" Jenna screamed, preparing Fume. Garet gasped, and grabbed her.
"No Jenna! Violence nor Psyenergy will get us anywhere!" Garet said. Isaac pulled out the script, read his line (Isaac: Forgot. Sorry.)
"Um... fine... if you won't eat with... can't read that smudge... oh! If you won't eat with me than you can starve!" Isaac said. Mia thought he was angry, but Isaac was really smiling at the fact that he didn't screw up his line. He headed toward the West Wing and opened a door. There was a glowing pink rose dropping a pedal. He sighed, and stared at it. "She'll never see the Earth Adept side of me..." He whispered...
Not too bad. I thought it was okay. Please R/R!