Stares at reviews and jaw drops. Damn! 32?! Wasn't expecting that! That's like... 32! I mean, that's the biggest I've gotten so far! Not to mention 3 new people reviewed it! -! Thank you everyone for reviewing! Whoa! I'm happy!:
Silver : Updated again like you wanted me to... again! Sorry Isaac sucks as a monster... glad you like it. Sorry if I wasn't supposed to listen...
Flamethrowerqueen: Sorry that I made the chapter pretty short. But I wanted to leave you all with a cliffhanger. Was it really good? It shocked me when everyone got mad because I said it wasn't good. Sorry about that. Hope you like the next chapter!
Lord Cynic: Nice to see someone new. Happy you enjoyed this. I agree, Isaac really needs to remember his lines... (Isaac: Can't help it! I'm a very forgetful person.) Isaac, Lord Cynic told you to eat your lines, so eat them. (Isaac: How the hell can I do that?! Do I shove the script into my mouth and pray I don't choke on it?!)...... He's not in the best mood. Sorry. But keep reading, please.
Vokteren: It touched me so much that you gave me a few sentences on how my story wasn't bad. Thank you. Sorry for calling it bad. Your friend saw a yellow rat chasing a pink cat?! 0.o?! My friend got high off the highlighter again, and I told her to sharpen my pencil, and when she did, she screamed: "Oh my god! The pencil sharpener just turned into a hot pink monkey!" I burst out laughing and so did my table group.
TheDeadMan09: Perfectly fine with the whole story thing. I'm sorry if I made you feel bad... Thanks for loving my story, and for using my idea.
Jasmine the Fire Adept: This may be off topic, but your 'Hallo' thing is adorable. Anyway, my friends haven't Golden Sun either. They've seen pics, and they all like Felix and Ivan. I'm happy people enjoy Felix as the Teacup. Hope you like this chapter.
Lokhart: Another new reviewer. Thanks for reviewing. At least you agree with Garet being a dumbass. Everyone seems to like Garet and Felix in this. I agree with Beauty and the Beast being one of the best Disney movies. I just have fond memories with it...
Jupiter Adepts Rule: Like your user name. The raid will happen soon, don't worry. I will keep up the good work. Enjoy this next chapter:
From where we left off: Isaac forgets his lines too much, Mia just ran away, and Garet is still trying to figure out what those are...
Mia rode her horse toward the direction home. It was still a blizzard. Felix: Some blizzard! I mean, this is so corny! Anyone could tell they were slips of paper!
Garet: 0.o?! They're papers?!
Readers, this part may be more serious then funny.
She was still angry with Isaac for putting so much emotion into his lines. Suddenly, something darted by a bush. She gasped, and the horse reared upward, knocking her up.
"Oh... my head..." She groaned, looking up. She screamed at the sight she saw. Karst, Menardi and Dodonpa were all in wolf suits. "Oh my god! It's you guys!"
"We needed some real parts, not some extra part." Menardi said. Mia screamed. Dodonpa grinned evilly.
"I'm going to rob you, Menardi is gonna attack you while Karst hacks you to pieces!" Dodonpa laughed. Mia screamed once more but with less fear. Karst growled.
"Scream like the girlie girl you are! I want to hear that scream when I chop off your head!" Karst yelled, raising her scythe. Then, someone tackled her.
"Quickly Ivan! Hit play on the boom box!" ??? said.
"You got it!" Ivan said, hitting play on a boom box. A re-mix of some hero song came on. Isaac glared at Karst.
"Leave her alone!" Isaac growled, biting onto Karst's boot. Karst gasped.
"No! Those are my only pair of evil black boots, you jerk!" Karst yelled.
"Yeah, the rest are hot pink. Agatio thought that they suited her." Menardi laughed. Karst shot her a glare.
"At least I didn't get a frilly hot pink dress from Saturos!" Karst yelled. Menardi shot her a glare. Karst let out another scream when Isaac bit her arm. Isaac growled, and began to spit into the ground.
"When was the last time you took a shower?! Sick! I mean, you sure don't taste like chicken..." Isaac said, wiping his tongue on his arm.
"Menardi! Karst! You take care of him!" Dodonpa yelled.
"Why can't you help?!" Menardi demanded.
"I don't have my evil toad monster with me!" Dodonpa yelled. He ran off, scared. Karst on the other hand was stabbing Isaac with her scythe. At that exact moment, Ivan's boom box stopped, making the funny 'halt the music' sound.
"Take this! And this!" She yelled, making swipes at him. Karst at one point had her scythe get him in the side. Isaac howled in pain, and fell over. Karst and Menardi began to prepare their psyenergy before...
"You. Hurt. My. Isaac." A voice growled through her teeth. The two Fire Adepts turn to Mia, with pure red eyes. They gulped. "No one hurts Isaac except for Felix and Jenna!" Mia yelled. She raised a glowing blue hand up.
"Was that tsunami?" Felix asked, looking out the window.
"Don't make up stories, Felix." Sheba said.
"That should teach you!" Mia yelled, looking down on the swirly eyed Fire Clan Adepts. She smiled, and looked up at Isaac. He coughed out some water, and had blood dripping down his side. "Isaac!" She cried, running to him.
"Don't worry Mia, it's fake. See, barbecue sauce." Isaac said, licking his paw. Mia smacked a hand to her forehead.
"Isaac, that's your cue to whimper and fall over dead." Mia grumbled.
"Oh... oh!" Isaac suddenly falls over, with 'X' for eyes.
Piers: My, Isaac, you seem not to well with parodies. Maybe it was better when you had no lines in the Snow White one.
Isaac: I'm forgetful and I can't seem to know what to do once I finally say my line!
Sorry, that part stunk...
Mia was wrapping a bandage around Isaac's arm. Isaac whimpered when she tightened it.
"Thank you for coming to my rescue." She whispered. Isaac smiled at her.
"Don't mention it. That's what I do. Tell Ivan to hit the music, and kill a few bad guys. That's what heroes do!" Isaac said, getting a cool background. Mia was too busy ignoring him to care.
"So... how may I help you?" Saturos asked. He was sitting at a table with Alex and Agatio sitting across from him. Alex handed him a few Mist potions.
"We need you to do us a favor." Alex said, smiling.
"What kind of favor?" Saturos asked, stuffing the Mist potions into his pocket. Agatio and Alex exchanged grins.
"We want you to throw Kraden in jail for causing chaos today." Alex said.
"Why? Kraden is harmless." Saturos said, raising an eyebrow.
"True. But Mia will do anything for her lunatic of a father to be free. I've been trying to get her to marry me lately, so you lock him up, and I'll let Mia know that the only way she can ever see her father again is if she marries me." Alex said, smiling evilly.
"My god! That is brilliant! I now know what to do for Menardi! I mean, I'll kidnap Karst, and threaten to throw her into the Mars Lighthouse beacon unless Menardi marries me! Brilliant! Brilliant I tell you!" Saturos laughed, ending it with a maniac laugh.
"So... what do you want in return?" Agatio asked, trying to fit a line in.
"So me what you have." Saturos demanded. Alex placed 4 Waters of Life on the table. Saturos raised an eyebrow. "That's it?" He asked.
"What more do you want?!" Alex demanded.
"I don't know.. maybe something powerful..." Saturos asked, putting an innocent look on.
"Fine, fine! How about this?" Alex placed the stone tablet for Iris on the table. Saturos raises eyebrow once more.
"Keep going." Saturos ordered. Alex groaned, and slammed the Sol Blade on the table.
"How's that?!" Alex asked.
"Perfect! I'll do it. Heh, heh, heh..." Saturos snickered, pulling all the items to him.
Felix: Has anyone seen my Sol Blade?
Isaac: I suddenly feel like I can't summon Iris...
Jenna: Where'd all my Mist potions go?!
Piers: Funny. My Waters of Life are gone!
That's all folks. It was okay... I guess... but I hope you liked it! Please R/R!
Silver : Updated again like you wanted me to... again! Sorry Isaac sucks as a monster... glad you like it. Sorry if I wasn't supposed to listen...
Flamethrowerqueen: Sorry that I made the chapter pretty short. But I wanted to leave you all with a cliffhanger. Was it really good? It shocked me when everyone got mad because I said it wasn't good. Sorry about that. Hope you like the next chapter!
Lord Cynic: Nice to see someone new. Happy you enjoyed this. I agree, Isaac really needs to remember his lines... (Isaac: Can't help it! I'm a very forgetful person.) Isaac, Lord Cynic told you to eat your lines, so eat them. (Isaac: How the hell can I do that?! Do I shove the script into my mouth and pray I don't choke on it?!)...... He's not in the best mood. Sorry. But keep reading, please.
Vokteren: It touched me so much that you gave me a few sentences on how my story wasn't bad. Thank you. Sorry for calling it bad. Your friend saw a yellow rat chasing a pink cat?! 0.o?! My friend got high off the highlighter again, and I told her to sharpen my pencil, and when she did, she screamed: "Oh my god! The pencil sharpener just turned into a hot pink monkey!" I burst out laughing and so did my table group.
TheDeadMan09: Perfectly fine with the whole story thing. I'm sorry if I made you feel bad... Thanks for loving my story, and for using my idea.
Jasmine the Fire Adept: This may be off topic, but your 'Hallo' thing is adorable. Anyway, my friends haven't Golden Sun either. They've seen pics, and they all like Felix and Ivan. I'm happy people enjoy Felix as the Teacup. Hope you like this chapter.
Lokhart: Another new reviewer. Thanks for reviewing. At least you agree with Garet being a dumbass. Everyone seems to like Garet and Felix in this. I agree with Beauty and the Beast being one of the best Disney movies. I just have fond memories with it...
Jupiter Adepts Rule: Like your user name. The raid will happen soon, don't worry. I will keep up the good work. Enjoy this next chapter:
From where we left off: Isaac forgets his lines too much, Mia just ran away, and Garet is still trying to figure out what those are...
Mia rode her horse toward the direction home. It was still a blizzard. Felix: Some blizzard! I mean, this is so corny! Anyone could tell they were slips of paper!
Garet: 0.o?! They're papers?!
Readers, this part may be more serious then funny.
She was still angry with Isaac for putting so much emotion into his lines. Suddenly, something darted by a bush. She gasped, and the horse reared upward, knocking her up.
"Oh... my head..." She groaned, looking up. She screamed at the sight she saw. Karst, Menardi and Dodonpa were all in wolf suits. "Oh my god! It's you guys!"
"We needed some real parts, not some extra part." Menardi said. Mia screamed. Dodonpa grinned evilly.
"I'm going to rob you, Menardi is gonna attack you while Karst hacks you to pieces!" Dodonpa laughed. Mia screamed once more but with less fear. Karst growled.
"Scream like the girlie girl you are! I want to hear that scream when I chop off your head!" Karst yelled, raising her scythe. Then, someone tackled her.
"Quickly Ivan! Hit play on the boom box!" ??? said.
"You got it!" Ivan said, hitting play on a boom box. A re-mix of some hero song came on. Isaac glared at Karst.
"Leave her alone!" Isaac growled, biting onto Karst's boot. Karst gasped.
"No! Those are my only pair of evil black boots, you jerk!" Karst yelled.
"Yeah, the rest are hot pink. Agatio thought that they suited her." Menardi laughed. Karst shot her a glare.
"At least I didn't get a frilly hot pink dress from Saturos!" Karst yelled. Menardi shot her a glare. Karst let out another scream when Isaac bit her arm. Isaac growled, and began to spit into the ground.
"When was the last time you took a shower?! Sick! I mean, you sure don't taste like chicken..." Isaac said, wiping his tongue on his arm.
"Menardi! Karst! You take care of him!" Dodonpa yelled.
"Why can't you help?!" Menardi demanded.
"I don't have my evil toad monster with me!" Dodonpa yelled. He ran off, scared. Karst on the other hand was stabbing Isaac with her scythe. At that exact moment, Ivan's boom box stopped, making the funny 'halt the music' sound.
"Take this! And this!" She yelled, making swipes at him. Karst at one point had her scythe get him in the side. Isaac howled in pain, and fell over. Karst and Menardi began to prepare their psyenergy before...
"You. Hurt. My. Isaac." A voice growled through her teeth. The two Fire Adepts turn to Mia, with pure red eyes. They gulped. "No one hurts Isaac except for Felix and Jenna!" Mia yelled. She raised a glowing blue hand up.
"Was that tsunami?" Felix asked, looking out the window.
"Don't make up stories, Felix." Sheba said.
"That should teach you!" Mia yelled, looking down on the swirly eyed Fire Clan Adepts. She smiled, and looked up at Isaac. He coughed out some water, and had blood dripping down his side. "Isaac!" She cried, running to him.
"Don't worry Mia, it's fake. See, barbecue sauce." Isaac said, licking his paw. Mia smacked a hand to her forehead.
"Isaac, that's your cue to whimper and fall over dead." Mia grumbled.
"Oh... oh!" Isaac suddenly falls over, with 'X' for eyes.
Piers: My, Isaac, you seem not to well with parodies. Maybe it was better when you had no lines in the Snow White one.
Isaac: I'm forgetful and I can't seem to know what to do once I finally say my line!
Sorry, that part stunk...
Mia was wrapping a bandage around Isaac's arm. Isaac whimpered when she tightened it.
"Thank you for coming to my rescue." She whispered. Isaac smiled at her.
"Don't mention it. That's what I do. Tell Ivan to hit the music, and kill a few bad guys. That's what heroes do!" Isaac said, getting a cool background. Mia was too busy ignoring him to care.
"So... how may I help you?" Saturos asked. He was sitting at a table with Alex and Agatio sitting across from him. Alex handed him a few Mist potions.
"We need you to do us a favor." Alex said, smiling.
"What kind of favor?" Saturos asked, stuffing the Mist potions into his pocket. Agatio and Alex exchanged grins.
"We want you to throw Kraden in jail for causing chaos today." Alex said.
"Why? Kraden is harmless." Saturos said, raising an eyebrow.
"True. But Mia will do anything for her lunatic of a father to be free. I've been trying to get her to marry me lately, so you lock him up, and I'll let Mia know that the only way she can ever see her father again is if she marries me." Alex said, smiling evilly.
"My god! That is brilliant! I now know what to do for Menardi! I mean, I'll kidnap Karst, and threaten to throw her into the Mars Lighthouse beacon unless Menardi marries me! Brilliant! Brilliant I tell you!" Saturos laughed, ending it with a maniac laugh.
"So... what do you want in return?" Agatio asked, trying to fit a line in.
"So me what you have." Saturos demanded. Alex placed 4 Waters of Life on the table. Saturos raised an eyebrow. "That's it?" He asked.
"What more do you want?!" Alex demanded.
"I don't know.. maybe something powerful..." Saturos asked, putting an innocent look on.
"Fine, fine! How about this?" Alex placed the stone tablet for Iris on the table. Saturos raises eyebrow once more.
"Keep going." Saturos ordered. Alex groaned, and slammed the Sol Blade on the table.
"How's that?!" Alex asked.
"Perfect! I'll do it. Heh, heh, heh..." Saturos snickered, pulling all the items to him.
Felix: Has anyone seen my Sol Blade?
Isaac: I suddenly feel like I can't summon Iris...
Jenna: Where'd all my Mist potions go?!
Piers: Funny. My Waters of Life are gone!
That's all folks. It was okay... I guess... but I hope you liked it! Please R/R!