I am back with some more torture!
GS crew: No!
Oh, shut up. Nightmare-Chan22 is on the site, hopping to bring you some more sap and comedy! 53... that's a lot... more than I have ever gotten... 0.0... Nice to know you all like it. Taking a vote, but when you review, can you say whether you think this is better than the Snow White or worse? Your pick. Thanks everyone:
Lord Cynic: Your special scene wasn't totally confusing. I thought it was rather funny. God, I wish I could get 5 bucks that easily... too bad my luck sucks...
Vokteren: Good work? Personally, I thought it was sappy. Was it really sad? Everyone thought it was cute. My friend got high... again... and she screamed in the middle of a movie 'Lime green horse!' I was so embarrassed...
Jasmine the Fire Adept: Please... please... please don't cry... you'll make me cry... (Sniffles and hugs Isaac.) It was cute I guess. Now you'll see if Mia gets her 'lunatic' father. I'm hurrying, and doing more! -! Enjoy this chapter!
Flamethrowerqueen: I don't know... there might be an unexpected twist... making the story turn out bad... or well? You'll have to read for yourself. Is it really always great? I felt so loved... (Sniffles and hugs Felix.) Hear that Felix? My story is great! (Felix: Just get off me...) Hope you like this!
Silver the Wind Seer: Same Silver, right? Hope so. I'm sorry it was filled with sap. Sorry, if you mean credit for convincing me to do a Piers/Jenna story, that's what I gave you. But I had the idea of Piers loving her and Garet going after him on my own. Please, no offense. I'm all ready feeling bad... I'm sorry, that sounded very bitchy of me...
Chibi Fizz: Isaac has been practicing, haven't you Isaac. (Isaac: Working day and night!) I meant to make him like a dog-puppy creature. I thought people might like the wagging his tail thing. -! Glad you liked it. Hope you like this chapter.
From where we left off: Isaac just released Mia.
Disclaimer: I don't own Golden Sun. (Sighs heavily.)
Kraden opened his old eyes. He saw a blurry vision. Blinking a few times, he saw Mia. She smiled sweetly at him. He smiled for a brief moment before letting out a girlie scream. Mia's hair flew back, and she stared at him shocked.
"No! You can't be real! I've seen you 3 times before! You aren't my daughter!" Kraden shouted. Mia shot him a glare.
"Father, it's me." She growled, smacking a hand to her forehead. Kraden blinked a few more times and squealed.
"My precious daughter! You have returned to me! When did you get here?" Kraden asked. Mia smiled, but then grew hurt.
"Isaac released me." She muttered. Kraden raised an eyebrow.
"What for?" He asked.
"Um... you were sick and lost, so I took you home." Mia said. Kraden hugged her. Mia smiled tears in her eyes. It was the moving blue purse that had caught their attention. "I brought that back with me... but I don't remember putting anything moving in it." Mia said, shaking the purse upside down. The 'magical' mirror and someone else fell out. Kraden and Mia raised an eyebrow.
"Ow! You bitch! You almost shattered me! And I just glued that piece back! Hey! What are you looking at old man?" Felix demanded. Kraden and Mia shot a nervous glance to one another. Mia sighed, and smacked him. "Ow again! What the hell?! I can't even leave the castle and still not be hit by some freak of nature bitch!" Felix shouted. Mia smacked him twice more.
"What on earth are you doing here?!" Mia demanded. Felix glared at her.
"Nice to see you too! Anyway I came because..." Felix paused to sniffle. "HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HIM?!?!?! HE LOVED YOU!!!" Felix sobbed into Mia's lap. Mia frowned. Suddenly, a knocking came from the door. Mia got up, opened the door, saw who it was, and instantly closed it. Kraden and Felix, who became perfectly fine, raised an eyebrow.
"Who in Vale was that?" Kraden asked. Mia laughed nervously.
"No one! No evil Fire Clan jerk at the door!" Mia shouted. Then, the door burst down, crushing Mia. Saturos glared down on her.
"That should teach you not to close the door on a handsome young man like me!" Saturos yelled.
"Young my foot! You're in your mid-30s!" Menardi's voice yelled. Saturos growled, and forced on an evil smirk to Kraden. Kraden nervously held Felix up for protection. Felix pulled out a mini 1 inch long Sol Blade. He made a war cry as he ran at Saturos. Saturos simply raised up a boot.... And...
"Felix!" Kraden shouted, hearing a shatter and seeing bits of glass beneath Saturos' boot. Saturos raised an eyebrow.
"Whoops." Saturos said, putting no emotion in. He grabbed Kraden by the collar and dragged him outside. Mia pushed the door off her, and ran after him. (Felix: Hey! Isn't anyone gonna super glue me back together?!) She ran out, and gasped. There were people with torches and a carriage with 'Homes for crazy seniors' on it.
"Saturos?! Why are you doing this?!" She demanded.
"Got paid to. Bring it up with Alex, not me." Saturos said, throwing Kraden in the back and locking it. Mia growled, and turned to see another blue-haired adept. Piers smiled warmly. (Just kidding people! -!) Alex smirked. Mia, pissed off, grabbed him by the collar and slammed him to the wall. (Isaac: 0.0)
"How do I get my father out?!" Mia demanded. Alex gulped.
"If you want him out, the first step is to put me down." Alex said. Mia dropped him. Alex groaned, and got up. He smirked once more. (Jenna: He wouldn't be smirking if I were there!) He brushed himself off. "The next step is.... To..." Alex paused to get on one knee and hold out s sapphire blue ring. "Marry me?" He yelped when Mia kicked him in the face.
"Never! I'm reserved for Isaac!" She yelled, grabbing a sharpie and writings 'Isaac' on her hand. Alex growled. "Why are you claiming my father's crazy?" Mia demanded.
"When he runs around town screaming you've been kidnapped by a beast, we all know he's messed up in the head." Alex said. Mia gapped at him.
"My father isn't crazy! I can prove it!" Mia cried, grabbing the mirror. (Isaac: Wh-What?! No! She's going to make them kill me!) "Show me the... er... dog creature!" She yelled. A picture of Isaac gnawing on a bone appeared. Everyone gapped at it. (Isaac: What?! Ever seen a dog eat a bone?!) Alex grabbed Mia by the wrist.
"Do you like him?" Alex asked, calmly.
"Yes. He's kind... funny... and"- Mia was cut off by Alex.
"She's with them. Lock her up." He said, calmly still. Saturos laughed as he threw Mia and Kraden into the basement, and placed a lock on it.
And so, the raid began. The male villagers began to head toward the castle. It was the super glued and perfectly fine... now, Felix that was the hero. He smirked evilly when he saw Kraden's werewolf machine...
"What's that sound?" Kraden asked, hearing a weird noise. Mia was too busy feeling guilty for giving away Isaac's cover. (Isaac: And you should be!) Suddenly, the door broke down. Mia and Kraden hugged each other nervously. Felix hung off a wire.
"Damn! That thing kicks ass! I gotta take that into battle with Alex sometime." Felix said. Mia grabbed Felix and ran outside.
"Where are you going Mia?!" Kraden asked.
"I'm going to rescue Isaac!" Mia said.
"Let me come with you!" He said. Mia raised an eyebrow.
"What for?" She asked.
"Well... that young lad did seem as though he was a werewolf..." Kraden said, looking thoughtful. Mia groaned, and helped him onto her horse, then rode off toward the castle.
Back at the castle, the servants had been panicking since the saw torches in the heart of the forest heading toward the castle. Sheba was running in circles, panicking about Felix, Ivan was making the boom box play scary music, Jenna was running in circles screaming 'we're all gonna die!' with Piers following her yelling 'Please calm down Lady Jenna!' Garet stood there, not understanding/thinking of an idea.
"Sheba! Go tell Isaac there are intruders!" Piers ordered, still chasing Jenna. Sheba nodded, and went to go tell Isaac...
TO BE CONTINUED...
That's all. This may be the end... Warning: Isaac has not had time to study his lines, so he will be quite forgetful. -! Please, R/R!
GS crew: No!
Oh, shut up. Nightmare-Chan22 is on the site, hopping to bring you some more sap and comedy! 53... that's a lot... more than I have ever gotten... 0.0... Nice to know you all like it. Taking a vote, but when you review, can you say whether you think this is better than the Snow White or worse? Your pick. Thanks everyone:
Lord Cynic: Your special scene wasn't totally confusing. I thought it was rather funny. God, I wish I could get 5 bucks that easily... too bad my luck sucks...
Vokteren: Good work? Personally, I thought it was sappy. Was it really sad? Everyone thought it was cute. My friend got high... again... and she screamed in the middle of a movie 'Lime green horse!' I was so embarrassed...
Jasmine the Fire Adept: Please... please... please don't cry... you'll make me cry... (Sniffles and hugs Isaac.) It was cute I guess. Now you'll see if Mia gets her 'lunatic' father. I'm hurrying, and doing more! -! Enjoy this chapter!
Flamethrowerqueen: I don't know... there might be an unexpected twist... making the story turn out bad... or well? You'll have to read for yourself. Is it really always great? I felt so loved... (Sniffles and hugs Felix.) Hear that Felix? My story is great! (Felix: Just get off me...) Hope you like this!
Silver the Wind Seer: Same Silver, right? Hope so. I'm sorry it was filled with sap. Sorry, if you mean credit for convincing me to do a Piers/Jenna story, that's what I gave you. But I had the idea of Piers loving her and Garet going after him on my own. Please, no offense. I'm all ready feeling bad... I'm sorry, that sounded very bitchy of me...
Chibi Fizz: Isaac has been practicing, haven't you Isaac. (Isaac: Working day and night!) I meant to make him like a dog-puppy creature. I thought people might like the wagging his tail thing. -! Glad you liked it. Hope you like this chapter.
From where we left off: Isaac just released Mia.
Disclaimer: I don't own Golden Sun. (Sighs heavily.)
Kraden opened his old eyes. He saw a blurry vision. Blinking a few times, he saw Mia. She smiled sweetly at him. He smiled for a brief moment before letting out a girlie scream. Mia's hair flew back, and she stared at him shocked.
"No! You can't be real! I've seen you 3 times before! You aren't my daughter!" Kraden shouted. Mia shot him a glare.
"Father, it's me." She growled, smacking a hand to her forehead. Kraden blinked a few more times and squealed.
"My precious daughter! You have returned to me! When did you get here?" Kraden asked. Mia smiled, but then grew hurt.
"Isaac released me." She muttered. Kraden raised an eyebrow.
"What for?" He asked.
"Um... you were sick and lost, so I took you home." Mia said. Kraden hugged her. Mia smiled tears in her eyes. It was the moving blue purse that had caught their attention. "I brought that back with me... but I don't remember putting anything moving in it." Mia said, shaking the purse upside down. The 'magical' mirror and someone else fell out. Kraden and Mia raised an eyebrow.
"Ow! You bitch! You almost shattered me! And I just glued that piece back! Hey! What are you looking at old man?" Felix demanded. Kraden and Mia shot a nervous glance to one another. Mia sighed, and smacked him. "Ow again! What the hell?! I can't even leave the castle and still not be hit by some freak of nature bitch!" Felix shouted. Mia smacked him twice more.
"What on earth are you doing here?!" Mia demanded. Felix glared at her.
"Nice to see you too! Anyway I came because..." Felix paused to sniffle. "HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HIM?!?!?! HE LOVED YOU!!!" Felix sobbed into Mia's lap. Mia frowned. Suddenly, a knocking came from the door. Mia got up, opened the door, saw who it was, and instantly closed it. Kraden and Felix, who became perfectly fine, raised an eyebrow.
"Who in Vale was that?" Kraden asked. Mia laughed nervously.
"No one! No evil Fire Clan jerk at the door!" Mia shouted. Then, the door burst down, crushing Mia. Saturos glared down on her.
"That should teach you not to close the door on a handsome young man like me!" Saturos yelled.
"Young my foot! You're in your mid-30s!" Menardi's voice yelled. Saturos growled, and forced on an evil smirk to Kraden. Kraden nervously held Felix up for protection. Felix pulled out a mini 1 inch long Sol Blade. He made a war cry as he ran at Saturos. Saturos simply raised up a boot.... And...
"Felix!" Kraden shouted, hearing a shatter and seeing bits of glass beneath Saturos' boot. Saturos raised an eyebrow.
"Whoops." Saturos said, putting no emotion in. He grabbed Kraden by the collar and dragged him outside. Mia pushed the door off her, and ran after him. (Felix: Hey! Isn't anyone gonna super glue me back together?!) She ran out, and gasped. There were people with torches and a carriage with 'Homes for crazy seniors' on it.
"Saturos?! Why are you doing this?!" She demanded.
"Got paid to. Bring it up with Alex, not me." Saturos said, throwing Kraden in the back and locking it. Mia growled, and turned to see another blue-haired adept. Piers smiled warmly. (Just kidding people! -!) Alex smirked. Mia, pissed off, grabbed him by the collar and slammed him to the wall. (Isaac: 0.0)
"How do I get my father out?!" Mia demanded. Alex gulped.
"If you want him out, the first step is to put me down." Alex said. Mia dropped him. Alex groaned, and got up. He smirked once more. (Jenna: He wouldn't be smirking if I were there!) He brushed himself off. "The next step is.... To..." Alex paused to get on one knee and hold out s sapphire blue ring. "Marry me?" He yelped when Mia kicked him in the face.
"Never! I'm reserved for Isaac!" She yelled, grabbing a sharpie and writings 'Isaac' on her hand. Alex growled. "Why are you claiming my father's crazy?" Mia demanded.
"When he runs around town screaming you've been kidnapped by a beast, we all know he's messed up in the head." Alex said. Mia gapped at him.
"My father isn't crazy! I can prove it!" Mia cried, grabbing the mirror. (Isaac: Wh-What?! No! She's going to make them kill me!) "Show me the... er... dog creature!" She yelled. A picture of Isaac gnawing on a bone appeared. Everyone gapped at it. (Isaac: What?! Ever seen a dog eat a bone?!) Alex grabbed Mia by the wrist.
"Do you like him?" Alex asked, calmly.
"Yes. He's kind... funny... and"- Mia was cut off by Alex.
"She's with them. Lock her up." He said, calmly still. Saturos laughed as he threw Mia and Kraden into the basement, and placed a lock on it.
And so, the raid began. The male villagers began to head toward the castle. It was the super glued and perfectly fine... now, Felix that was the hero. He smirked evilly when he saw Kraden's werewolf machine...
"What's that sound?" Kraden asked, hearing a weird noise. Mia was too busy feeling guilty for giving away Isaac's cover. (Isaac: And you should be!) Suddenly, the door broke down. Mia and Kraden hugged each other nervously. Felix hung off a wire.
"Damn! That thing kicks ass! I gotta take that into battle with Alex sometime." Felix said. Mia grabbed Felix and ran outside.
"Where are you going Mia?!" Kraden asked.
"I'm going to rescue Isaac!" Mia said.
"Let me come with you!" He said. Mia raised an eyebrow.
"What for?" She asked.
"Well... that young lad did seem as though he was a werewolf..." Kraden said, looking thoughtful. Mia groaned, and helped him onto her horse, then rode off toward the castle.
Back at the castle, the servants had been panicking since the saw torches in the heart of the forest heading toward the castle. Sheba was running in circles, panicking about Felix, Ivan was making the boom box play scary music, Jenna was running in circles screaming 'we're all gonna die!' with Piers following her yelling 'Please calm down Lady Jenna!' Garet stood there, not understanding/thinking of an idea.
"Sheba! Go tell Isaac there are intruders!" Piers ordered, still chasing Jenna. Sheba nodded, and went to go tell Isaac...
TO BE CONTINUED...
That's all. This may be the end... Warning: Isaac has not had time to study his lines, so he will be quite forgetful. -! Please, R/R!