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...except the plot. Let me rephrase that: the characters and setting
recognizable as being part of the Harry Potter series belong to JK Rowling.
The rest is mine.
A/N: OMG!!!! U ALL ROCK!!!! Thank you so much!! Runs around, hugging beloved reviewers. You are all such wonderful people, and may you all have long, happy lives with lots of children...or not, if you don't want children...whatever. Anyway, back to the point, I was very proud of the two sentence reviews, brilliant work! You all deserve gold stars! And thanks for mentioning that you read a/n's. I love writing them! Just a few points:
BohemianRaps767: thanks for the reviews, and you have to be the first person to say that you like short chapters- I do to! Um, the marauders didn't get in trouble because basically, detentions have no effect, they didn't want to expel the Head Boy, and frankly, Dumbledore likes them. Oh, and that part of the castle needed renovating anyway, so they were like, what the hell! Good point though, I didn't really think too much about it!
GriffindorGoddess28: I think bad handwriting would look cool, but here's and idea- why not get it done professionally?
Anon: well, I'm not exactly sure if there is a Head Girls dorms- are you sure that's canon? I'm fairly certain it wasn't mentioned in the books, but if I'm wrong, please tell me what book and chapter it's in. oh, and if Lily moved dorms, where would the story be? It's a FIC for god's sake, they're not meant to be realistic!! Who cares about plot holes??? They're meant to be fun and fluff!!!!!
Oh, and to everyone else, thank you all again, hope you like this one. Bear in mind though, I'm writing most of this at six in the morning, so it might be crud. Please forgive me! And I'm feeling motivated again, thanks to you!! So, read on!
Sorry about typos- I know I have many!
Chapter Eleven
Makeover Magic
Inside the classroom there was utter silence. Andrea looked at Lily, eyes wide.
"Oops," she whispered. Lily shook her head, which was in her hands.
Professor McGonagall was surveying them, an eyebrow raised.
"You may come in now," she said, her lips twitching.
Lily groaned and got to her feet. Andrea sauntered back into class, acting as if nothing had happened. Lily followed with her head hanging, desperately avoiding James eyes.
If she had looked up, she would have seen him grinning widely.
Remus nudged him lightly, and he turned and whispered to him-
"I told you so! Lily likes me!"
"No you didn't," Remus said calmly. "But I'm sure you told yourself so."
"Whatever," James agreed. "So, you think this means that we're together- together?"
"Ask her," Remus said, turning back to his work.
James tapped a quill impatiently against his mouth, thinking and muttering to himself.
All around the class, whispers were running.
"Lily likes James! But they share a dormitory! Do you think-?"
"I can't believe it! But I don't think he likes her...does he?"
"Oh my god! I can't wait to tell Angie- she has a crush on him too!"
Lily groaned again, sinking further down in her chair.
"You are so dead," she muttered to Andrea, who winced.
The renovations were going on day and night now, and the whole of the staircases had been cleared. Now, the harried and weary looking work wizards were plundering on through the dormitories, trying to restore them to what they used to be. It looked as if the whole work would be done within the next month or so.
James found himself almost dreading moving out of the girl's dormitories. He liked being able to hear Lily talking just before he went to sleep. And every morning, he would sneak into their side of the dorm and gaze upon her face. The sight gave him fresh inspiration for the rest of the day.
Lily on the other hand, was still pining for her privacy. The number of times one of the boys had carelessly walked in on her changing was becoming ridiculous, and she could never be sure if someone was listening in on her conversations or not. She was especially uncomfortable now, thinking of her and James in a room together. It was scary the way he looked at her now, and she still expected it to be some sort of prank.
That day in transfiguration...her cheeks burned just thinking about it! James had grinned at her devilishly for the rest of the day and he still raised his eyebrows knowingly at her now, and that was almost two days ago! Lily had taken to avoiding him to avoid any more encounters, although word had already spread that they were 'together'.
James walked into the dorm on Thursday evening to see that the curtains weren't drawn for a change.
He walked fully in and peered around in confusion. The space between the boy's side of the dorm and the girls had been filled with four stools. Next to each stool was a little table, and the worrying thing was, everything was in purple and pink. He crept cautiously over to one of the tables and stared at the bottles lining the top. They appeared to be some strange sort of potions, all in startlingly bright shades. There were also varying lengths of pencil, and little tubs of powder. A whole set of brushes and cotton bud type objects were also lying on the wooden top, and James bent and sniffed one warily.
"Hello there, Mister Sneaky," Came a cheerful voice from behind him. Sarah grinned at him as she walked past trailed by four, levitating bowls of warm water.
She waved her wand and each bowl went and floated down to rest on a table.
After here trooped Andrea, Lisa and the three other Marauders. Sirius threw James a panicked look and Remus looked slightly terrified. Peter was trembling and James found himself caught up with the urge to run as fast as possible.
However, at that moment, Lily Evans walked in, carefully shutting the door behind her. She threw him a nervous glance, and then, hesitantly, a half smile that made his knees a little weak.
All impulses to run drained out of him. Now all he wanted to do was be near her for the rest of his life.
"Hello boys," Sarah said brightly, turning to grin at the Marauders. "We've got a little surprise for you."
"Really," James said faintly. "I don't like surprises."
"Oh, but you'll looove this one," Andrea smirked, coming over to stand near one of the stools. She picked up one of the pots of powder and smeared a bit on her hand. She eyed the shade critically before trying another. All these movements seemed profoundly strange to James and the impulse to race away quickly was back again.
"Why don't you all just choose a stool and sit down?" Lily suggested from behind them. When the boys remained standing where they were, she snapped, "Now!"
No one ever disobeyed Lily Evans when she used that voice. The consequences were too scary. The boys quickly sat down. James experimentally tried standing up just a little. Just as he thought. The stool had been charmed so that he couldn't escape.
The girls came over to stand in front of them, and Grace also joined them from where she had been drawing in a sketchbook on her bed.
"Well, guys," Lisa began. "We were thinking yesterday about all you've ever done for us. And we realized just how much fun we've had over the years. There was never a time when you didn't have a prank up your sleeves to make our life a little more difficult."
"Yeah," Andrea stepped in. "You always made us feel special. Like there was that time when you charmed our wands so that they would only work with one spell a day. We got detentions for a week when all we could do was levitate things."
"And then, as I recall, there was one time when you transfigured my owl into a raccoon and failed to mention it to me. I spent almost a month thinking she had died," Sarah, remarked, seemingly unconcerned.
"And of course," Lily said, folding her arms. "We could never forget all those wonderful times when you bewitched us so that the only things we could say to teachers would be insults. I got detention for a month for calling Professor Flitwick names which I will not mention here just in case your ears turn red."
"Well, the list goes on," Lisa said, coming to stand directly in front of the boys. "And we could keep reciting it, but it'd take the rest of the night. The bottom line is, we thought, maybe it's time we return just a little bit of the favor. So tonight, darlings, we are going to give you what muggles like to refer to as a makeover."
"A makeover?" James gulped.
"Yes," Lily said, smiling sweetly. "A makeover."
Approximately two hours later, four very disgruntled looking...girls? Emerged from the dorm.
"I have never been so embarrassed in my life," one muttered in a deep husky voice. James Potter's voice.
"I know," Peter squeaked back, nervously shifting from one foot to another. "I don't wanna go down there."
They were standing on the top of the stairs, and they knew that just a few meters down was a whole room of people.
"Move," Lily hissed, coming up behind them and shoving James in the back.
"I was about to," he snapped back. "Do you have any idea how hard it is to walk in these things?" he held up a foot that had tightly laced on boots with heels almost six inches high covering it.
"Just what exactly do we have to do?" Sirius asked nervously from where he stood, tightly held by Sarah. He had been trying to escape but the girls weren't about to let that happen.
"We were just getting to that," Grace said, grinning devilishly. "We want you to go down there and ask a boy of your choice out. Now, now! Don't look so scared!"
"No one knows who you are, boys," Lisa said. "We made sure that you look pretty much like girls, and we can charm your voices. This is just so that you can feel humiliated inside."
"Lisa! You weren't supposed to tell them that!" Lily admonished. "Anyway, it's completely up to you who you choose to ask out, and by tomorrow, all these charms will have faded out, so they won't know it was you. Still, we thought it'd be funny who you chose, and besides, we know it'll be killing you inside!"
James threw her a glare, but found her couldn't stay angry with her when she looked so happy- even if it was at his expense.
"Fine," Remus sighed. "Let's get this over an done with."
Sirius descended slowly and gingerly, aware of Sarah gripping his wrist from behind. There was no escape.
He was wearing high-healed sandals, and a mini silver sparkly dress, with spaghetti straps. His hair, usually flopping gracefully into his eyes, was now long and straight and hung down his back. When he touched a hand to his cheeks, he could feel stubble, but he knew that other people would only see a gorgeous brunette with sultry black eyes and a cute figure. It was all illusions, of course, but he had to say, he made a pretty damn hot looking girl!
As soon as he entered the common room, everyone went still. Then he could almost feel himself blushing when he saw several of the guys he talked to regularly glancing him up and down carefully. A couple even grinned and winked at him.
Eeyeww! He was thinking.
"Go for your life," Sarah whispered, shoving him forward.
"Um, hi?" he said hesitantly. Titters went around the room. "Uh, hey babe, wanna come for a ride?" he tried. Now he knew what was funny. His voice was still the same. His freaking voice was still a guy's voice!
The boys all had their eyebrows raised now, and some of them coughed to hide their laughs.
"Heh heh," Sirius laughed nervously. Then he spun around and stomped back up the stairs.
"Never again," he muttered to Sarah before storming into the dorm and slamming the curtains shut.
"Whatever," she said dismissively. "So who's next?"
Remus and Peter both looked at each other.
"Hey! Where's James?" Peter said suddenly. The girls glanced around.
"Not here," grave informed them.
Lisa shrugged.
"Go on Peter, your turn!"
James tripped into a tiny storeroom in the girl's dormitory corridor and sat down heavily on a can of metal grease. He hung his head. He knew he looked like a fool.
Suddenly, behind him, he heard giggling. Turning he caught sight of Lily Evans, hunched on the ground, shaking with laughter.
"Its not funny, ok!" he said, pouting. "Take this stuff off me!"
"You s-sound like a g-girl!" she spluttered. "But ok," she waved her wand and muttered 'Finite incantetum' (a/n: spelling? I don't have my hp books here to check!)
James sighed in relief, glancing at himself in a glass bottle. He was normal once again- thank god.
He crouched down beside Lily, and threw her a glare- she was still cracking up.
"What's so funny?" he grumbled.
"Y-you!" she said. Reaching up, she ruffled his hair. "You're such a kid!"
He tried glaring, but he couldn't help a small, sheepish grin coming through.
"Yeah, well," he said, looking away. "You like me."
"I do not!" she said hotly, sitting up fully. "Andrea made it up."
"Yes you do, Lily," he said patiently. "You're in denial like I was."
"Whatever, James," she said, rolling her eyes.
"Does that mean you do?" he said. "It can't be a 'whatever', Lily, it's either 'yes' or 'yes of course'."
"Yes of course," she said sarcastically. She was about to laugh and say 'yeah right is more like it' when she saw the look on his face.
He looked like a kid at Christmas, having just opened a parcel and found it to be exactly what he wanted. And it was right then that Lily finally realized that it wasn't a prank. James did seem to feel something for her, and he wasn't leading her on.
"I knew it," he murmured. He was leaning forward.
Every impulse in Lily's body told her to lean back. Bt somehow, she was inching towards him too.
Just as their lips met, and Lily forgot all conscious thought, the door to the cupboard fell open.
They broke apart suddenly, and looked up to see a first year boy staring at them wild-eyed.
"I-I just wanted a-a bottle of cleaning potion," he stammered. "S-sorry!" he squeaked, and then he spun around and sped away.
James laughed, and Lily turned to roll her eyes at him. He stopped his chuckling and grinned at her. He leant forward again, but she turned around quickly, so that his lips only brushed her cheek.
Quickly, she scrambled out of the cupboard.
"See you later," she murmured, walking away, cheeks burning.
James sighed, looking down. His first ever kiss with Lily Evans and it was ruined by some evil first year.
Still- the kiss had been good. Very good. He could see more of them on the way.
What the hell is happening to me? He thought, shaking his head. She's like some sort of elixir. When she's around everything is good and then she leaves and I have no purpose.
Before the Marauders had been the main part of his life. And now, it was Lily Evans.
A/N: well, that sure took awhile! I've been doing this since about six o'clock this morning. I had to add some stuff after reading your reviews, so I hope you like the finished product. Personally, I think I did some shoddy writing but hey! Cut me some slack, I was half asleep!! Well, we'll see what happens next chapter!
Ten more? Reviews, I mean- you know I live off them!
So, see you next time, Luv Jaizar
A/N: OMG!!!! U ALL ROCK!!!! Thank you so much!! Runs around, hugging beloved reviewers. You are all such wonderful people, and may you all have long, happy lives with lots of children...or not, if you don't want children...whatever. Anyway, back to the point, I was very proud of the two sentence reviews, brilliant work! You all deserve gold stars! And thanks for mentioning that you read a/n's. I love writing them! Just a few points:
BohemianRaps767: thanks for the reviews, and you have to be the first person to say that you like short chapters- I do to! Um, the marauders didn't get in trouble because basically, detentions have no effect, they didn't want to expel the Head Boy, and frankly, Dumbledore likes them. Oh, and that part of the castle needed renovating anyway, so they were like, what the hell! Good point though, I didn't really think too much about it!
GriffindorGoddess28: I think bad handwriting would look cool, but here's and idea- why not get it done professionally?
Anon: well, I'm not exactly sure if there is a Head Girls dorms- are you sure that's canon? I'm fairly certain it wasn't mentioned in the books, but if I'm wrong, please tell me what book and chapter it's in. oh, and if Lily moved dorms, where would the story be? It's a FIC for god's sake, they're not meant to be realistic!! Who cares about plot holes??? They're meant to be fun and fluff!!!!!
Oh, and to everyone else, thank you all again, hope you like this one. Bear in mind though, I'm writing most of this at six in the morning, so it might be crud. Please forgive me! And I'm feeling motivated again, thanks to you!! So, read on!
Sorry about typos- I know I have many!
Chapter Eleven
Makeover Magic
Inside the classroom there was utter silence. Andrea looked at Lily, eyes wide.
"Oops," she whispered. Lily shook her head, which was in her hands.
Professor McGonagall was surveying them, an eyebrow raised.
"You may come in now," she said, her lips twitching.
Lily groaned and got to her feet. Andrea sauntered back into class, acting as if nothing had happened. Lily followed with her head hanging, desperately avoiding James eyes.
If she had looked up, she would have seen him grinning widely.
Remus nudged him lightly, and he turned and whispered to him-
"I told you so! Lily likes me!"
"No you didn't," Remus said calmly. "But I'm sure you told yourself so."
"Whatever," James agreed. "So, you think this means that we're together- together?"
"Ask her," Remus said, turning back to his work.
James tapped a quill impatiently against his mouth, thinking and muttering to himself.
All around the class, whispers were running.
"Lily likes James! But they share a dormitory! Do you think-?"
"I can't believe it! But I don't think he likes her...does he?"
"Oh my god! I can't wait to tell Angie- she has a crush on him too!"
Lily groaned again, sinking further down in her chair.
"You are so dead," she muttered to Andrea, who winced.
The renovations were going on day and night now, and the whole of the staircases had been cleared. Now, the harried and weary looking work wizards were plundering on through the dormitories, trying to restore them to what they used to be. It looked as if the whole work would be done within the next month or so.
James found himself almost dreading moving out of the girl's dormitories. He liked being able to hear Lily talking just before he went to sleep. And every morning, he would sneak into their side of the dorm and gaze upon her face. The sight gave him fresh inspiration for the rest of the day.
Lily on the other hand, was still pining for her privacy. The number of times one of the boys had carelessly walked in on her changing was becoming ridiculous, and she could never be sure if someone was listening in on her conversations or not. She was especially uncomfortable now, thinking of her and James in a room together. It was scary the way he looked at her now, and she still expected it to be some sort of prank.
That day in transfiguration...her cheeks burned just thinking about it! James had grinned at her devilishly for the rest of the day and he still raised his eyebrows knowingly at her now, and that was almost two days ago! Lily had taken to avoiding him to avoid any more encounters, although word had already spread that they were 'together'.
James walked into the dorm on Thursday evening to see that the curtains weren't drawn for a change.
He walked fully in and peered around in confusion. The space between the boy's side of the dorm and the girls had been filled with four stools. Next to each stool was a little table, and the worrying thing was, everything was in purple and pink. He crept cautiously over to one of the tables and stared at the bottles lining the top. They appeared to be some strange sort of potions, all in startlingly bright shades. There were also varying lengths of pencil, and little tubs of powder. A whole set of brushes and cotton bud type objects were also lying on the wooden top, and James bent and sniffed one warily.
"Hello there, Mister Sneaky," Came a cheerful voice from behind him. Sarah grinned at him as she walked past trailed by four, levitating bowls of warm water.
She waved her wand and each bowl went and floated down to rest on a table.
After here trooped Andrea, Lisa and the three other Marauders. Sirius threw James a panicked look and Remus looked slightly terrified. Peter was trembling and James found himself caught up with the urge to run as fast as possible.
However, at that moment, Lily Evans walked in, carefully shutting the door behind her. She threw him a nervous glance, and then, hesitantly, a half smile that made his knees a little weak.
All impulses to run drained out of him. Now all he wanted to do was be near her for the rest of his life.
"Hello boys," Sarah said brightly, turning to grin at the Marauders. "We've got a little surprise for you."
"Really," James said faintly. "I don't like surprises."
"Oh, but you'll looove this one," Andrea smirked, coming over to stand near one of the stools. She picked up one of the pots of powder and smeared a bit on her hand. She eyed the shade critically before trying another. All these movements seemed profoundly strange to James and the impulse to race away quickly was back again.
"Why don't you all just choose a stool and sit down?" Lily suggested from behind them. When the boys remained standing where they were, she snapped, "Now!"
No one ever disobeyed Lily Evans when she used that voice. The consequences were too scary. The boys quickly sat down. James experimentally tried standing up just a little. Just as he thought. The stool had been charmed so that he couldn't escape.
The girls came over to stand in front of them, and Grace also joined them from where she had been drawing in a sketchbook on her bed.
"Well, guys," Lisa began. "We were thinking yesterday about all you've ever done for us. And we realized just how much fun we've had over the years. There was never a time when you didn't have a prank up your sleeves to make our life a little more difficult."
"Yeah," Andrea stepped in. "You always made us feel special. Like there was that time when you charmed our wands so that they would only work with one spell a day. We got detentions for a week when all we could do was levitate things."
"And then, as I recall, there was one time when you transfigured my owl into a raccoon and failed to mention it to me. I spent almost a month thinking she had died," Sarah, remarked, seemingly unconcerned.
"And of course," Lily said, folding her arms. "We could never forget all those wonderful times when you bewitched us so that the only things we could say to teachers would be insults. I got detention for a month for calling Professor Flitwick names which I will not mention here just in case your ears turn red."
"Well, the list goes on," Lisa said, coming to stand directly in front of the boys. "And we could keep reciting it, but it'd take the rest of the night. The bottom line is, we thought, maybe it's time we return just a little bit of the favor. So tonight, darlings, we are going to give you what muggles like to refer to as a makeover."
"A makeover?" James gulped.
"Yes," Lily said, smiling sweetly. "A makeover."
Approximately two hours later, four very disgruntled looking...girls? Emerged from the dorm.
"I have never been so embarrassed in my life," one muttered in a deep husky voice. James Potter's voice.
"I know," Peter squeaked back, nervously shifting from one foot to another. "I don't wanna go down there."
They were standing on the top of the stairs, and they knew that just a few meters down was a whole room of people.
"Move," Lily hissed, coming up behind them and shoving James in the back.
"I was about to," he snapped back. "Do you have any idea how hard it is to walk in these things?" he held up a foot that had tightly laced on boots with heels almost six inches high covering it.
"Just what exactly do we have to do?" Sirius asked nervously from where he stood, tightly held by Sarah. He had been trying to escape but the girls weren't about to let that happen.
"We were just getting to that," Grace said, grinning devilishly. "We want you to go down there and ask a boy of your choice out. Now, now! Don't look so scared!"
"No one knows who you are, boys," Lisa said. "We made sure that you look pretty much like girls, and we can charm your voices. This is just so that you can feel humiliated inside."
"Lisa! You weren't supposed to tell them that!" Lily admonished. "Anyway, it's completely up to you who you choose to ask out, and by tomorrow, all these charms will have faded out, so they won't know it was you. Still, we thought it'd be funny who you chose, and besides, we know it'll be killing you inside!"
James threw her a glare, but found her couldn't stay angry with her when she looked so happy- even if it was at his expense.
"Fine," Remus sighed. "Let's get this over an done with."
Sirius descended slowly and gingerly, aware of Sarah gripping his wrist from behind. There was no escape.
He was wearing high-healed sandals, and a mini silver sparkly dress, with spaghetti straps. His hair, usually flopping gracefully into his eyes, was now long and straight and hung down his back. When he touched a hand to his cheeks, he could feel stubble, but he knew that other people would only see a gorgeous brunette with sultry black eyes and a cute figure. It was all illusions, of course, but he had to say, he made a pretty damn hot looking girl!
As soon as he entered the common room, everyone went still. Then he could almost feel himself blushing when he saw several of the guys he talked to regularly glancing him up and down carefully. A couple even grinned and winked at him.
Eeyeww! He was thinking.
"Go for your life," Sarah whispered, shoving him forward.
"Um, hi?" he said hesitantly. Titters went around the room. "Uh, hey babe, wanna come for a ride?" he tried. Now he knew what was funny. His voice was still the same. His freaking voice was still a guy's voice!
The boys all had their eyebrows raised now, and some of them coughed to hide their laughs.
"Heh heh," Sirius laughed nervously. Then he spun around and stomped back up the stairs.
"Never again," he muttered to Sarah before storming into the dorm and slamming the curtains shut.
"Whatever," she said dismissively. "So who's next?"
Remus and Peter both looked at each other.
"Hey! Where's James?" Peter said suddenly. The girls glanced around.
"Not here," grave informed them.
Lisa shrugged.
"Go on Peter, your turn!"
James tripped into a tiny storeroom in the girl's dormitory corridor and sat down heavily on a can of metal grease. He hung his head. He knew he looked like a fool.
Suddenly, behind him, he heard giggling. Turning he caught sight of Lily Evans, hunched on the ground, shaking with laughter.
"Its not funny, ok!" he said, pouting. "Take this stuff off me!"
"You s-sound like a g-girl!" she spluttered. "But ok," she waved her wand and muttered 'Finite incantetum' (a/n: spelling? I don't have my hp books here to check!)
James sighed in relief, glancing at himself in a glass bottle. He was normal once again- thank god.
He crouched down beside Lily, and threw her a glare- she was still cracking up.
"What's so funny?" he grumbled.
"Y-you!" she said. Reaching up, she ruffled his hair. "You're such a kid!"
He tried glaring, but he couldn't help a small, sheepish grin coming through.
"Yeah, well," he said, looking away. "You like me."
"I do not!" she said hotly, sitting up fully. "Andrea made it up."
"Yes you do, Lily," he said patiently. "You're in denial like I was."
"Whatever, James," she said, rolling her eyes.
"Does that mean you do?" he said. "It can't be a 'whatever', Lily, it's either 'yes' or 'yes of course'."
"Yes of course," she said sarcastically. She was about to laugh and say 'yeah right is more like it' when she saw the look on his face.
He looked like a kid at Christmas, having just opened a parcel and found it to be exactly what he wanted. And it was right then that Lily finally realized that it wasn't a prank. James did seem to feel something for her, and he wasn't leading her on.
"I knew it," he murmured. He was leaning forward.
Every impulse in Lily's body told her to lean back. Bt somehow, she was inching towards him too.
Just as their lips met, and Lily forgot all conscious thought, the door to the cupboard fell open.
They broke apart suddenly, and looked up to see a first year boy staring at them wild-eyed.
"I-I just wanted a-a bottle of cleaning potion," he stammered. "S-sorry!" he squeaked, and then he spun around and sped away.
James laughed, and Lily turned to roll her eyes at him. He stopped his chuckling and grinned at her. He leant forward again, but she turned around quickly, so that his lips only brushed her cheek.
Quickly, she scrambled out of the cupboard.
"See you later," she murmured, walking away, cheeks burning.
James sighed, looking down. His first ever kiss with Lily Evans and it was ruined by some evil first year.
Still- the kiss had been good. Very good. He could see more of them on the way.
What the hell is happening to me? He thought, shaking his head. She's like some sort of elixir. When she's around everything is good and then she leaves and I have no purpose.
Before the Marauders had been the main part of his life. And now, it was Lily Evans.
A/N: well, that sure took awhile! I've been doing this since about six o'clock this morning. I had to add some stuff after reading your reviews, so I hope you like the finished product. Personally, I think I did some shoddy writing but hey! Cut me some slack, I was half asleep!! Well, we'll see what happens next chapter!
Ten more? Reviews, I mean- you know I live off them!
So, see you next time, Luv Jaizar