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Gone chapter 5 - thoughts
Naruto POV.
When I woke up, everyone was gone. 'Good' I thought, 'now I can have some time to think.' ' Kit,
why did you do it?' ' Kyuubi, you know my reasons. I was alone, the darkness was there for me. It
accepted me for being me.' 'Kit, you have to remember that you're not the only thing in this body.
Did you every think about what would happen to me if you succeeded in killing yourself. Did you?' ' No Kyuubi, but sometimes I just don't think. I just feel like I have to do this, or I have to do
that. I work on impulse, and the darkness was there just waiting for me. it accepted me then and it still
accepts me.' 'Kit, do you really think that all the people that were here are going to let you be by
yourself? Do you really think they are going to pretend this never happened? They are most
likely going to watch you so that you can't attempt this again.' 'Kyuubi, they won't do that they
trust me...... right?'
Sasuke POV ah during the meeting
After Sakura left I decided to go to the ramen stall. When I got there the place was packed. "What kind
of ramen would you like today?" asked the man behind the counter. "Um. chicken ramen please," I told
him. "Eh you, your on that Naruto's team, right," shouted one of the people in the back. "Yeah, why do
you care?" " Is he dead yet." Oh, that got me pissed. "What's your fucking problem man. Do you have
a personal problem with him or something, because if you only hate him because of what he didn't have
a choice over, then you really are a pathetic man. And you better hope I don't come over there and hurt
you." "Kid, here's your ramen." "Thanks. This place is so crowded today ,why?" "Because that kid,
Naruto isn't here. we are all here celebrating." Oh I was determined to never go there again. "keep your
ramen, I don't want it anymore asshole."
I had to go see Tsunade, and tell her what is going on in the village. When I got to her office, she had
just gotten back and everyone who was in the hospital room was know in her office. Or at least all the
adults were. *knock, knock* "Come in," Tsunade called. I walked in not knowing what to expect.
There sat all the adults. Half of who were crying. I couldn't tell her at another time , could I? No I had
to tell her now. "Tsunade, do you know what the.. the villagers are doing?" "Continue Sasuke." "They
are celebrating. I went to the ramen bar, and people were asking me if Naruto had died yet. Can we do
any thing to bring to an end to this?" "Unfortunately no we can't Sasuke. The villagers have there own rights to celebrate when they want and we can't stop them." Kakashi-sensei answered. "So.. so can we
do anything?" "All we can do Sasuke, is support Naruto, and try to ignore what the villagers do and say
unless it is life threatening." This time Tsunade answered. "One more thing before you go Sasuke,
tomorrow go see Naruto. If we can we want to stop him from doing this again." "Of course Miss.
Hokage." "Oh another things Sasuke, NEVER call me Miss. Hokage." "Ok ..... Miss. Hokage."
Naruto POV
"Come in, " I called in response to the knock on the door. "I'm sorry if I woke you Naruto-kun." "No
it's okay Hinata, I was awake already." "I..I brought you some flowers Naruto-kun, To say sorry for
my rude actions before." " Thank-you Hinata, but you didn't have to." "Na. Naruto - Kun .. I have
some. something to tell you." "Go on Hinata, " I told her kindly. "I...I ..I.....I have to go." With that
Hinata ran out of the room. "Kyuubi did I do something wrong. I acted how I 'normally' act." "No kit, I
don't think it was you this time. I think it was something about her." "Oh okay, thanks Kyuubi."
'Anytime kit, anytime.'
Hinata POV
Why, why did I do that. I just made a fool of myself right in front of Naruto-kun. He probably thinks
I'm stupid. Seeing as I am always stumbling, and blushing when I am around him. I wonder he if thinks I
am to obvious. He most likely thinks that I am weak, but that's because I am. I am so stupid and weak,
and Naruto-kun will never acknowledge me. No one ever does. No don't think like that Hinata. I will
train more then. I will become strong. I will work harder. I will. I will show everyone who I am and
what I can be. I will show Naruto-kun that I'm not weak. I will prove my love to him. Prove to him that
I am worthy of him. Who can train me. I know I'll ask Kiba and Akamaru. They shouldn't be busy right
now. And if they ask why, then I can just say .... that I want to improve more. Yeah that's what I'll say,
I want to improve more. Yeah. I won't ask him today though. I'll ask him .... tomorrow after practise. Yeah that's a good time. And that's just what I'll do.
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We will have to wait and see if Hinata actually does that. sorry your reviews gave me some inspiration but I hate this chapter. I am going to try and do better. I just need an idea. The title went well with the first chapter but it isn't doing that well right now, so i am going to brainstorm for another one, and if any one else has an idea fell free to tell me. By email or review it doesn't matter. Please review
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