If I turn my back I'm defenceless, And to go blindly seems senseless
If I hide my pride and let it all go on then they'll take from me till everything is gone
If I let them go I'll be outdone, but if I try to catch them I'll be outrun
If I'm killed by the questions like a cancer, then I'll be buried in the silence of the answer
BY MYSELF.
Linkin Park, aren't they a great band? I love them! That one was from "By Myself" or "BY MYSLF" from either of their albums, 'Hybrid theory' or 'Reanimation'. Well, enough of songs, onto my story, which some ungrateful bastards say I can't, write when I don't see them writing any stories!!
First of all, if you are any of the following, Ash, PrincessMercury, Lex (), demigod (), Weiila, Sephiroth Hayes, or Omegaflex, then read the following:
Ash- I am 13 years old, ok Ash!? What the fuck do you mean, "Don't try too hard"? Look, You do what you want with your life, and I'll do this just to piss you off, is that fair? I think so! And if you didn't read the others chapters cause of the first, they are made much different cause of chichiri's girl, k?
PrincessMercury- LMAO? Don't you mean LAO??.BITCH!
Lex()- (First of all, are you and demigod friends? You both have () after your names!) Man, did you read all the chapters? I changed during the chapters! I've actually now used Microsoft Word's Spelling & Grammar. But I don't think you would've bothered would you? Why do you assume Shayne lives in Balamb? He could live at Trabia for all you knew at the time! And I'm gonna update the chapter with all Spelling and Grammar correct, just to let you know! Thank you for reviewing! Look, even my brother says I have talent. And please, don't hesitate to inform me when you write a fic! Oh, and his pen name is Adam_lockhart. ({Sarcastic Dick}
demigod()- (First of all, are you and Lex friends? You both have () after your names!) Um, I don't see you spelling correctly! And if I don't, it's cause I'm writing fast, ok? I don't feel like checking it, is that ok with you? I guess not. Did you ever think that I made Shayne like that on purpose? Maybe he's gonna change or something? If you didn't, then you're no worthy reader are you? Man, I love it you know? All these shitty reviews telling me about spelling and grammar when I look at there spelling and it's atrocious! I know that in the review box it doesn't have it, but you can check it without the computer having to, you know? And chichiri's girl is NOT my girlfriend, she's just a reviewer, I don't even know who she is really! I only met her over the net, y'know?! BEEATCH!
Weiila- thanks for sticking up for me, you're the only one to tell Hayes off. for now. Oh, BTW, The review line is not a chat room!!
Sephiroth Hayes- Man, you think you're great don't you? Oh, in your profile, "Be afraid of a man with a swinging sword" or something like that, the only way you can kill someone is by just swinging a sword round and round! You can't fight like a man, can you? With your fists, or even fighting properly with a sword? You know, I'm glad I'm on your bad side!! You see, you cannot stop me from this; I don't care who you are! I don't care if you're the president! I don't care if you own this site! I don't care if you are the most important person in the world! You are a fool!!! No matter what you do, you cannot win! No one can beat me! Well, except for my brothers, but that is out of the question! I will succeed! I will conquer! I will overcome every single thing! It doesn't even matter how hard you try! (LOL). Sorry, got a little carried away there! Hmm, what else do I have to say? .Oh, yeah, that's right, hehehe.Have you ever written a story? Well, from what I've seen, you haven't! Oh, BTW, my brothers pen name is Adam_lockhart. He says I have talent and well, he gave me a review to you and others (above). You would be able to read it, wouldn't you? Read it please! I think it he wrote something about you! ( {BEEATCH!}
OmegaflareX(): I know by saying what I'm about to say is gonna make me look like an idiot, but, what you said is impossible! Let me ask you something, Have you written a fic? Well, have ya? Do not hesitate to inform me when you write a fic! And about what you said to my bro, well, 1st of all, I'm not hiding behind him, 2nd: Having to do a lot of work does mean it will change the quality, 'cause I'm updating my chapters, spelling & grammar and all that kind of stuff. And 3rd: I know this may sound stupid, but, uh, some people read the whole thing sometimes and when people review, they submit it to the 1st chapter and yes, I know some of you people didn't submit to chapter 1, and then when people check out who have reviewed, they see it's been submitted to chap 1 and think that they had submitted the review when the story only had that chapter! And I'm thinking that's what you did, 'cause you certainly didn't try to help me out! (
And for all of the above, sorry, but you pushed me just a little too hard! ((( Buh-Bye! Well onto the story!
A/N: once again, I would like to thank Chichiri's girl for her reviews! I would also like to say thanks for reviewing to Seriphath Hayes, Ash, Weiila, Lex(), demigod(), PrincessMercury. I bet youse are wondering why I'm thanking you, correct? Well, where do I begin? You have reminded me, reminded me that there are stupid, f#&king people in the world.
A CHILD HERO
CHAPTER 5 - AN AMAZING WARRIOR?
Last chapter...
"Nick, you mean nick Almasy?!" Quistis asked, worried. Rinoa nodded. "We have to go to his 'lair' immediately!" Quistis told Rinoa.
"Why?" Rinoa asked. Quistis grabbed Rinoa by the arm and started for the door.
"Cuz, i have a bad feeling. I think that he is somehow involve in the timber incident!" Quistis told her.
(Meanwhile)
"Ahhh!!" Zell screamed, being knocked back to the ground.
"ZELL!" squall screamed. They were fighting a man, wearing a full black body suit. "WHO ARE YOU!?" squall asked loudly.
"I am your worst nightmare, I am death, I am, the one and only, Exedous!" Exedous told.
This chapter...
"Exedous, hey? What do you want with us? Who do you work for? Karajan?" squall asked helping Zell up.
"So, you know more about us than 'master' thought?" Exedous said, mainly talking to himself.
"'Master'? Who is this 'master' of yours? Is it Karajan?" squall asked.
"Master? You 3 will meet him soon!" Exedous told. As Squall continued talking talking to Exodus, Shayne scanned the area checking for anything suspicious. He looked at Squall who was standing in a fight stance looking at Exedous. He then looked at Zell, who was looking at Squall who was looking at Exedous, also in a fight stance. A shiver went up Shayne's spine, making him alert for more danger. He quickly turned around, at the same time taking out his Gunblade, ready for battle, only to see a cat of some description.
"Phew," Shayne thought, relieved. He started to put his Gunblade away when a shadowy figure moved quickly, out of an alleyway to Shayne's right. Luckily, Shayne saw it in the corner of his eye. In an instant Shayne pulled back his Gunblade and blocked an attack from the shadowy figure. "Arrggghh!!" Shayne struggled to hold back the attack. He took a quick glance to his right, long enough to see Zell coming toward him then knocking the person off of him. Shayne fell to the ground, weak. "Thanks Zell." He thanked Zell, grabbing his gunblade which had fallen next to him.
"No need for thanks! Helping save you is more than enough! By the way, I did promise your mother that I would protect you and Squall!" Zell told him. Shayne just nodded, then got up, getting ready for another attack.
"Who's that!?" Squall asked, seeing the person who attacked Shayne. Exedous glanced over toward where Shayne and Zell were standing.
"Who? That guy?" Exedous asked.
"Yeah! The one who attacked my son!" Squall said, furiously.
"Oh, yeah! That's right! Master requested reinforcements! So they actually sent some other? I don't know why?" He questioned. "I could've taken care of youse by myself!" He argued.
"Shayne! This guy looks tough! We'll both have to take him, OK!?" Zell suggested.
"Right!" Shayne agreed with Zell. Shayne got ready to attack, as did Zell. Shayne had a feeling this guy wasn't your average fighter. He had a feeling this was going to be one of the toughest fights of his life!
"On 'three', OK?" Zell said. Shayne nodded. "One!" Zell said.
"Two!" Shayne said.
"THREE!!" They both said in unison, and then jumped at the person who attacked them. The person grabbed out to daggers and swung his right arm backward, then bringing it forward to hit Shayne backward onto the ground. He swung his left hand back and brought it forward to hit Zell back onto the ground as well.
"Ahhh!" Zell screamed as he hit the ground.
"Who is this guy!?" Shayne screamed out. Shayne and Zell both got up, getting ready to defend or attack. "Zell! It's no use attacking him head on! He's too fast! We'll have to figure out another technique!" Shayne yelled to Zell.
"Right!" Zell replied.
"How about we use our GFs then?" Shayne asked with a smirk on his face.
"Yeah, I think so too." Zell answered. They both got ready to Summon. "I. SUMMON. THEE. IFRIT!" Zell screamed. Ifrit came from a fireball, ready to his thing.
"I.SUMMON.THEE.SHIVA!" Shayne screamed. Up from the ground in an icicle came Shiva. She got 'Diamond Dust' ready and Ifrit got 'Hell Fire' ready. They both were moving at the same speed. Shiva and Ifrit were just about to finish their moves when they both got knocked down. They lay on the ground, lifeless. "Huh? Whoa! What happened?" Shayne asked, confused.
"He just knocked them down! How?" Zell screamed.
"Shayne! .Zell! .MAN!" Squall screamed, clenching his fists, and gritting his teeth. "How could he?! You! Exedous! Tell me! Who is that guy?! I want a name!" Squall ordered.
"I do not know who he is, all I know is that he is pretty damn strong! HAHAHAHAHA!!" Exedous laughed.
"Stop. LAUGHING!!" Squall screamed. "AAHHHH!!" Squall held his Lionheart and jumped up in the air and attacked Exedous by hitting him continuously with his Lionheart.
"Aargghh!!" Exedous screamed as Squall hit him, over and over again.
"See! .How! .You! .Like! .IT!!" Squall yelled, as he hit Exedous each time, doing the limit break, 'Lionheart'.
"No! No! NNOOOOOOO!!" Exedous screamed, as Squall finished 'Lionheart'. Squall hit Exedous, knocking him to the ground. Squall landed on his feet, about 20 metres away from where Exedous lay, lifeless. He landed facing away from Exedous. After a few moments, Squall put his gunblade away, and turned around. He slowly walked over to where Exedous was. When he reached the body, he knelt down next to it.
"You didn't have a chance. You knew it. This was a decoy, so is he, if not, then these guys a pretty stupid to have weak guys as defence." Squall thought, while looking over to Shayne and Zell, fighting off the person. "Except for that guy, though. If he was as strong as Exedous, Shayne could take him on easily. Well, guess I should help 'em!" Squall thought, then standing up straight again he said, "Goodbye, you could've had a better life, but instead you fought me, farewell. I hope your next life's better." He ran over to Shayne and Zell. "You need some help?"
"I would say so!" Zell yelled, jumping back from an attack.
"Well, now I'm here!" Squall told them, grabbing out his gunblade again, ready to attack. "Let's get him!" Squall yelled, signalling Zell and Shayne to back him up. Squall slowly walked toward the person, being careful, ready for anything. "Hey, there! You hurt my son! Do you know what happens to people who hurt my son?" Squall asked, with a smirk on his face. The person shook his head.
"Well, you get a meeting with me, Squall Leonhart!"
".So, you are the great. Squall Leonhart? I heard about you!" The person finally spoke, in a medium pitched voice.
"Huh?" Squall asked, unsuspected that he would speak. "You speak?"
"Of course I speak, nearly everyone speaks! You idiot!" The guy told Squall, quietly, and seriously.
"Who are you? Do you work for Karajan?" Squall asked, still holding his gunblade in a fighting stance.
"I do not know a Karajan, personally. Although, I was sent here to destroy him as my primary objective, and to kill anyone who gets in my way." This guy told Squall, walking slowly toward him. Squall put his gunblade up, sideways, in front of himself.
"What? Another master? How could this be? Show us your face!" Squall ordered.
"My FACE!? No one sees my face! Especially you, the 'great' Squall Leonhart!" this guy was starting to piss of Squall. Squall grabbed his gunblade, which he was already holding, and walked closer to the guy.
"If you won't show me your face, at least tell me your name!" Squall ordered, hoping he would comply. The guy turned around facing away from Squall.
"Okay then. I am a warrior from Zegar, a planet a fair distance away from this one, where people who look like humans live. We are called the Zegarians." The guy informed them. "I am one of the best on that planet, as a matter of fact. And probably one of the best here, as well. Well, My name is."
[End of chapter]
P.S. Linkin Park rock, as does Eminem.
Another name trivia thingy! Well, I hope ya like the chapter. R&R! C YA soon. Sorry it was short, but couldn't think much, too much time writing replies to reviewers. (At top) And writing songs.
SHAYNE/SQUALL
If I hide my pride and let it all go on then they'll take from me till everything is gone
If I let them go I'll be outdone, but if I try to catch them I'll be outrun
If I'm killed by the questions like a cancer, then I'll be buried in the silence of the answer
BY MYSELF.
Linkin Park, aren't they a great band? I love them! That one was from "By Myself" or "BY MYSLF" from either of their albums, 'Hybrid theory' or 'Reanimation'. Well, enough of songs, onto my story, which some ungrateful bastards say I can't, write when I don't see them writing any stories!!
First of all, if you are any of the following, Ash, PrincessMercury, Lex (), demigod (), Weiila, Sephiroth Hayes, or Omegaflex, then read the following:
Ash- I am 13 years old, ok Ash!? What the fuck do you mean, "Don't try too hard"? Look, You do what you want with your life, and I'll do this just to piss you off, is that fair? I think so! And if you didn't read the others chapters cause of the first, they are made much different cause of chichiri's girl, k?
PrincessMercury- LMAO? Don't you mean LAO??.BITCH!
Lex()- (First of all, are you and demigod friends? You both have () after your names!) Man, did you read all the chapters? I changed during the chapters! I've actually now used Microsoft Word's Spelling & Grammar. But I don't think you would've bothered would you? Why do you assume Shayne lives in Balamb? He could live at Trabia for all you knew at the time! And I'm gonna update the chapter with all Spelling and Grammar correct, just to let you know! Thank you for reviewing! Look, even my brother says I have talent. And please, don't hesitate to inform me when you write a fic! Oh, and his pen name is Adam_lockhart. ({Sarcastic Dick}
demigod()- (First of all, are you and Lex friends? You both have () after your names!) Um, I don't see you spelling correctly! And if I don't, it's cause I'm writing fast, ok? I don't feel like checking it, is that ok with you? I guess not. Did you ever think that I made Shayne like that on purpose? Maybe he's gonna change or something? If you didn't, then you're no worthy reader are you? Man, I love it you know? All these shitty reviews telling me about spelling and grammar when I look at there spelling and it's atrocious! I know that in the review box it doesn't have it, but you can check it without the computer having to, you know? And chichiri's girl is NOT my girlfriend, she's just a reviewer, I don't even know who she is really! I only met her over the net, y'know?! BEEATCH!
Weiila- thanks for sticking up for me, you're the only one to tell Hayes off. for now. Oh, BTW, The review line is not a chat room!!
Sephiroth Hayes- Man, you think you're great don't you? Oh, in your profile, "Be afraid of a man with a swinging sword" or something like that, the only way you can kill someone is by just swinging a sword round and round! You can't fight like a man, can you? With your fists, or even fighting properly with a sword? You know, I'm glad I'm on your bad side!! You see, you cannot stop me from this; I don't care who you are! I don't care if you're the president! I don't care if you own this site! I don't care if you are the most important person in the world! You are a fool!!! No matter what you do, you cannot win! No one can beat me! Well, except for my brothers, but that is out of the question! I will succeed! I will conquer! I will overcome every single thing! It doesn't even matter how hard you try! (LOL). Sorry, got a little carried away there! Hmm, what else do I have to say? .Oh, yeah, that's right, hehehe.Have you ever written a story? Well, from what I've seen, you haven't! Oh, BTW, my brothers pen name is Adam_lockhart. He says I have talent and well, he gave me a review to you and others (above). You would be able to read it, wouldn't you? Read it please! I think it he wrote something about you! ( {BEEATCH!}
OmegaflareX(): I know by saying what I'm about to say is gonna make me look like an idiot, but, what you said is impossible! Let me ask you something, Have you written a fic? Well, have ya? Do not hesitate to inform me when you write a fic! And about what you said to my bro, well, 1st of all, I'm not hiding behind him, 2nd: Having to do a lot of work does mean it will change the quality, 'cause I'm updating my chapters, spelling & grammar and all that kind of stuff. And 3rd: I know this may sound stupid, but, uh, some people read the whole thing sometimes and when people review, they submit it to the 1st chapter and yes, I know some of you people didn't submit to chapter 1, and then when people check out who have reviewed, they see it's been submitted to chap 1 and think that they had submitted the review when the story only had that chapter! And I'm thinking that's what you did, 'cause you certainly didn't try to help me out! (
And for all of the above, sorry, but you pushed me just a little too hard! ((( Buh-Bye! Well onto the story!
A/N: once again, I would like to thank Chichiri's girl for her reviews! I would also like to say thanks for reviewing to Seriphath Hayes, Ash, Weiila, Lex(), demigod(), PrincessMercury. I bet youse are wondering why I'm thanking you, correct? Well, where do I begin? You have reminded me, reminded me that there are stupid, f#&king people in the world.
A CHILD HERO
CHAPTER 5 - AN AMAZING WARRIOR?
Last chapter...
"Nick, you mean nick Almasy?!" Quistis asked, worried. Rinoa nodded. "We have to go to his 'lair' immediately!" Quistis told Rinoa.
"Why?" Rinoa asked. Quistis grabbed Rinoa by the arm and started for the door.
"Cuz, i have a bad feeling. I think that he is somehow involve in the timber incident!" Quistis told her.
(Meanwhile)
"Ahhh!!" Zell screamed, being knocked back to the ground.
"ZELL!" squall screamed. They were fighting a man, wearing a full black body suit. "WHO ARE YOU!?" squall asked loudly.
"I am your worst nightmare, I am death, I am, the one and only, Exedous!" Exedous told.
This chapter...
"Exedous, hey? What do you want with us? Who do you work for? Karajan?" squall asked helping Zell up.
"So, you know more about us than 'master' thought?" Exedous said, mainly talking to himself.
"'Master'? Who is this 'master' of yours? Is it Karajan?" squall asked.
"Master? You 3 will meet him soon!" Exedous told. As Squall continued talking talking to Exodus, Shayne scanned the area checking for anything suspicious. He looked at Squall who was standing in a fight stance looking at Exedous. He then looked at Zell, who was looking at Squall who was looking at Exedous, also in a fight stance. A shiver went up Shayne's spine, making him alert for more danger. He quickly turned around, at the same time taking out his Gunblade, ready for battle, only to see a cat of some description.
"Phew," Shayne thought, relieved. He started to put his Gunblade away when a shadowy figure moved quickly, out of an alleyway to Shayne's right. Luckily, Shayne saw it in the corner of his eye. In an instant Shayne pulled back his Gunblade and blocked an attack from the shadowy figure. "Arrggghh!!" Shayne struggled to hold back the attack. He took a quick glance to his right, long enough to see Zell coming toward him then knocking the person off of him. Shayne fell to the ground, weak. "Thanks Zell." He thanked Zell, grabbing his gunblade which had fallen next to him.
"No need for thanks! Helping save you is more than enough! By the way, I did promise your mother that I would protect you and Squall!" Zell told him. Shayne just nodded, then got up, getting ready for another attack.
"Who's that!?" Squall asked, seeing the person who attacked Shayne. Exedous glanced over toward where Shayne and Zell were standing.
"Who? That guy?" Exedous asked.
"Yeah! The one who attacked my son!" Squall said, furiously.
"Oh, yeah! That's right! Master requested reinforcements! So they actually sent some other? I don't know why?" He questioned. "I could've taken care of youse by myself!" He argued.
"Shayne! This guy looks tough! We'll both have to take him, OK!?" Zell suggested.
"Right!" Shayne agreed with Zell. Shayne got ready to attack, as did Zell. Shayne had a feeling this guy wasn't your average fighter. He had a feeling this was going to be one of the toughest fights of his life!
"On 'three', OK?" Zell said. Shayne nodded. "One!" Zell said.
"Two!" Shayne said.
"THREE!!" They both said in unison, and then jumped at the person who attacked them. The person grabbed out to daggers and swung his right arm backward, then bringing it forward to hit Shayne backward onto the ground. He swung his left hand back and brought it forward to hit Zell back onto the ground as well.
"Ahhh!" Zell screamed as he hit the ground.
"Who is this guy!?" Shayne screamed out. Shayne and Zell both got up, getting ready to defend or attack. "Zell! It's no use attacking him head on! He's too fast! We'll have to figure out another technique!" Shayne yelled to Zell.
"Right!" Zell replied.
"How about we use our GFs then?" Shayne asked with a smirk on his face.
"Yeah, I think so too." Zell answered. They both got ready to Summon. "I. SUMMON. THEE. IFRIT!" Zell screamed. Ifrit came from a fireball, ready to his thing.
"I.SUMMON.THEE.SHIVA!" Shayne screamed. Up from the ground in an icicle came Shiva. She got 'Diamond Dust' ready and Ifrit got 'Hell Fire' ready. They both were moving at the same speed. Shiva and Ifrit were just about to finish their moves when they both got knocked down. They lay on the ground, lifeless. "Huh? Whoa! What happened?" Shayne asked, confused.
"He just knocked them down! How?" Zell screamed.
"Shayne! .Zell! .MAN!" Squall screamed, clenching his fists, and gritting his teeth. "How could he?! You! Exedous! Tell me! Who is that guy?! I want a name!" Squall ordered.
"I do not know who he is, all I know is that he is pretty damn strong! HAHAHAHAHA!!" Exedous laughed.
"Stop. LAUGHING!!" Squall screamed. "AAHHHH!!" Squall held his Lionheart and jumped up in the air and attacked Exedous by hitting him continuously with his Lionheart.
"Aargghh!!" Exedous screamed as Squall hit him, over and over again.
"See! .How! .You! .Like! .IT!!" Squall yelled, as he hit Exedous each time, doing the limit break, 'Lionheart'.
"No! No! NNOOOOOOO!!" Exedous screamed, as Squall finished 'Lionheart'. Squall hit Exedous, knocking him to the ground. Squall landed on his feet, about 20 metres away from where Exedous lay, lifeless. He landed facing away from Exedous. After a few moments, Squall put his gunblade away, and turned around. He slowly walked over to where Exedous was. When he reached the body, he knelt down next to it.
"You didn't have a chance. You knew it. This was a decoy, so is he, if not, then these guys a pretty stupid to have weak guys as defence." Squall thought, while looking over to Shayne and Zell, fighting off the person. "Except for that guy, though. If he was as strong as Exedous, Shayne could take him on easily. Well, guess I should help 'em!" Squall thought, then standing up straight again he said, "Goodbye, you could've had a better life, but instead you fought me, farewell. I hope your next life's better." He ran over to Shayne and Zell. "You need some help?"
"I would say so!" Zell yelled, jumping back from an attack.
"Well, now I'm here!" Squall told them, grabbing out his gunblade again, ready to attack. "Let's get him!" Squall yelled, signalling Zell and Shayne to back him up. Squall slowly walked toward the person, being careful, ready for anything. "Hey, there! You hurt my son! Do you know what happens to people who hurt my son?" Squall asked, with a smirk on his face. The person shook his head.
"Well, you get a meeting with me, Squall Leonhart!"
".So, you are the great. Squall Leonhart? I heard about you!" The person finally spoke, in a medium pitched voice.
"Huh?" Squall asked, unsuspected that he would speak. "You speak?"
"Of course I speak, nearly everyone speaks! You idiot!" The guy told Squall, quietly, and seriously.
"Who are you? Do you work for Karajan?" Squall asked, still holding his gunblade in a fighting stance.
"I do not know a Karajan, personally. Although, I was sent here to destroy him as my primary objective, and to kill anyone who gets in my way." This guy told Squall, walking slowly toward him. Squall put his gunblade up, sideways, in front of himself.
"What? Another master? How could this be? Show us your face!" Squall ordered.
"My FACE!? No one sees my face! Especially you, the 'great' Squall Leonhart!" this guy was starting to piss of Squall. Squall grabbed his gunblade, which he was already holding, and walked closer to the guy.
"If you won't show me your face, at least tell me your name!" Squall ordered, hoping he would comply. The guy turned around facing away from Squall.
"Okay then. I am a warrior from Zegar, a planet a fair distance away from this one, where people who look like humans live. We are called the Zegarians." The guy informed them. "I am one of the best on that planet, as a matter of fact. And probably one of the best here, as well. Well, My name is."
[End of chapter]
P.S. Linkin Park rock, as does Eminem.
Another name trivia thingy! Well, I hope ya like the chapter. R&R! C YA soon. Sorry it was short, but couldn't think much, too much time writing replies to reviewers. (At top) And writing songs.
SHAYNE/SQUALL