Meggido : Hey there! My first attempt at a non-humor fic...that I actually
put on the net anyway...
Disclaimer : I don't own Naruto, but I wish I did.
CONTROL SHIFT
chapter 1 :
Revelations
and a lot of pain
As he woke up, Naruto felt...different. He couldn't explain it but...it felt like he was looking through someone else's eyes.It felt...wrong.
He tried to get up, only to find he couldn't. He wasn't feeling tired and his chakra wasn't drained or blocked or anything. He couldn't even feel his arms. //So, what the hell is happening to me?// he wondered.
He then started to move, but he wasn't controlling his body.He felt like a puppet with some unknown presence pulling the strings.He tried to move something like his arms or his lips or his neck, but he couldn't feel any part of his body, let alone move them. He then got a nauseus feeling, the one when you're sure you're going to puke, and everything went white...
He regained consciousness on his back,, lightly floating in ankle-deep water. "I know this place..." he said, looking around. This was the place where he met the demon fox face to face and Kyubi agreed to give him some of his chakra to summon Gama-Bunta and save their lives. To his left was a huge window, apparently showing what his eyes saw, even though he had no control over the direction the eyes were looking or what his body was doing. He heard chuckling, and that's when he noticed something, he was on the wrong side of the sealing bars! Correction, the sealing bars were gone!
"That's right, " Kyubi calmely stated from behind him, nearly giving Naruto a heart attack out of chock. "For today, this is my body to do with as I please..." He grinned. A terrifying sight to Naruto, who got a close up view of those giant teeth, just waiting to tear something, or even worse, someone, to shreds. "What do you mean, for today?" The blond asked, hoping Kyubi wouldn't erase him from existence in a way the blond boy was sure would be very painful. The nine-tailed demon fox snarled angrily while Naruto silently prayed his chances of surviving were better than he thought they were. "It means that after today things will go back to normal, and I'll thank you not to remind me that much, or some, how do I put this, accidents, might happen to your friends..."
"What! No! I won't let you hurt my friends!" Naruto shouted defiently, his fear for himself being overtaken by his fear for the safety of his friends.
"Insolent WELP!!! Kyubi roared as he got up and slashed Naruto across the stomach and left several deep bloody gashes across Naruto's chest, "It is only by my will that you still live, brat. I'm currently healing the damage but as you can see, even that can be a painful, slow torture..."
Naruto could barely hear him, first he thought he was dead, then he wished he was. He was doubled over in pain, the pain from Kyubi's strike still lingering. The wounds were healing, yes, but they were doing so in an agonisingly slow and painfull way. The healing chakra burned and hurt him so much... and every once in a while the wounds would rip open again, sending more spears of pain through his body. He wished he could just die and stop the pain.
"Please, please stop." He let out in a hoarse whisper, realising he was giving up but the words just burst out of his mouth, helped along by the agonising pain he was in. "Very well, just remember, that was only a fraction of what I could make you endure..."
As soon as Kyubi said that, the wounds completly disappeared, along with the pain.// At least this will end in about a day, he thought to himself, then it will be back to normal, yeah, just cling on to that thought and you'll make it through this... I hope.//
"Oh, and by the way, Kyubi started, I can make this permanent with the forbidden scroll, wich, thanks to you, I know exactly how to get."
Naruto's eyes widened as he realised the Kyubi was going to take over his body, completly. The blond gennin was so shocked he almost failed to notice that Kyubi was slowly fading away.Almost.
"What the... Where are you going!?!" Naruto couldn't understand what was happening to the nine tailed demon fox. " I'm getting the scroll, was Kyubi's arrogant reply, his voice seemingly coming from all directions, "While talking to you I was already going towards the scroll, but now, it seems, they beefed up security, so I must divert my full attention to this."
//At least he's gone, for now...// Was Naruto's thoughts as Kyubi fully disappeared from view...
One thought was going through his mind a bit later and would stay for quite a while: //Oh fuck...//
end part one
Meggido : What did ya think? R&R! Was I too hard on Naruto? Nah, he can take it, I hope...And I know that entire "strenght of freindship" thing sucked... anyways, I welcome feedback, so, yeah. I don't really have a plan for the story, except maybe a bit more cruelty on Kyubi's part. You MIGHT be able to change that by telling what you did/did not liked in your reviews / emails. Also, this is my first fic like this E_V_E_R!!! But I'm done!
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BTW, My comp's a windows 95, so the format might ( and probably will ) be fucked.
Disclaimer : I don't own Naruto, but I wish I did.
CONTROL SHIFT
chapter 1 :
Revelations
and a lot of pain
As he woke up, Naruto felt...different. He couldn't explain it but...it felt like he was looking through someone else's eyes.It felt...wrong.
He tried to get up, only to find he couldn't. He wasn't feeling tired and his chakra wasn't drained or blocked or anything. He couldn't even feel his arms. //So, what the hell is happening to me?// he wondered.
He then started to move, but he wasn't controlling his body.He felt like a puppet with some unknown presence pulling the strings.He tried to move something like his arms or his lips or his neck, but he couldn't feel any part of his body, let alone move them. He then got a nauseus feeling, the one when you're sure you're going to puke, and everything went white...
He regained consciousness on his back,, lightly floating in ankle-deep water. "I know this place..." he said, looking around. This was the place where he met the demon fox face to face and Kyubi agreed to give him some of his chakra to summon Gama-Bunta and save their lives. To his left was a huge window, apparently showing what his eyes saw, even though he had no control over the direction the eyes were looking or what his body was doing. He heard chuckling, and that's when he noticed something, he was on the wrong side of the sealing bars! Correction, the sealing bars were gone!
"That's right, " Kyubi calmely stated from behind him, nearly giving Naruto a heart attack out of chock. "For today, this is my body to do with as I please..." He grinned. A terrifying sight to Naruto, who got a close up view of those giant teeth, just waiting to tear something, or even worse, someone, to shreds. "What do you mean, for today?" The blond asked, hoping Kyubi wouldn't erase him from existence in a way the blond boy was sure would be very painful. The nine-tailed demon fox snarled angrily while Naruto silently prayed his chances of surviving were better than he thought they were. "It means that after today things will go back to normal, and I'll thank you not to remind me that much, or some, how do I put this, accidents, might happen to your friends..."
"What! No! I won't let you hurt my friends!" Naruto shouted defiently, his fear for himself being overtaken by his fear for the safety of his friends.
"Insolent WELP!!! Kyubi roared as he got up and slashed Naruto across the stomach and left several deep bloody gashes across Naruto's chest, "It is only by my will that you still live, brat. I'm currently healing the damage but as you can see, even that can be a painful, slow torture..."
Naruto could barely hear him, first he thought he was dead, then he wished he was. He was doubled over in pain, the pain from Kyubi's strike still lingering. The wounds were healing, yes, but they were doing so in an agonisingly slow and painfull way. The healing chakra burned and hurt him so much... and every once in a while the wounds would rip open again, sending more spears of pain through his body. He wished he could just die and stop the pain.
"Please, please stop." He let out in a hoarse whisper, realising he was giving up but the words just burst out of his mouth, helped along by the agonising pain he was in. "Very well, just remember, that was only a fraction of what I could make you endure..."
As soon as Kyubi said that, the wounds completly disappeared, along with the pain.// At least this will end in about a day, he thought to himself, then it will be back to normal, yeah, just cling on to that thought and you'll make it through this... I hope.//
"Oh, and by the way, Kyubi started, I can make this permanent with the forbidden scroll, wich, thanks to you, I know exactly how to get."
Naruto's eyes widened as he realised the Kyubi was going to take over his body, completly. The blond gennin was so shocked he almost failed to notice that Kyubi was slowly fading away.Almost.
"What the... Where are you going!?!" Naruto couldn't understand what was happening to the nine tailed demon fox. " I'm getting the scroll, was Kyubi's arrogant reply, his voice seemingly coming from all directions, "While talking to you I was already going towards the scroll, but now, it seems, they beefed up security, so I must divert my full attention to this."
//At least he's gone, for now...// Was Naruto's thoughts as Kyubi fully disappeared from view...
One thought was going through his mind a bit later and would stay for quite a while: //Oh fuck...//
end part one
Meggido : What did ya think? R&R! Was I too hard on Naruto? Nah, he can take it, I hope...And I know that entire "strenght of freindship" thing sucked... anyways, I welcome feedback, so, yeah. I don't really have a plan for the story, except maybe a bit more cruelty on Kyubi's part. You MIGHT be able to change that by telling what you did/did not liked in your reviews / emails. Also, this is my first fic like this E_V_E_R!!! But I'm done!
\(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/ \(^o^)/ \(^.^)/
BTW, My comp's a windows 95, so the format might ( and probably will ) be fucked.