Meggido : Sorry for the delay! I will now take more of your time by writing
an author's note. And yes I do know I'm not good at this, but at least I try... right? Anyways I will try to do a battle scene with some jutsus that already existed and a few of my own.
= thoughts " " = speaking & = scene switch
Disclaimer : I (sadly) don't own Naruto
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chapter 3 :
The battle
commences
The jounins tensed as they saw a figure coming out of the tower, and they each started to release their jutsus.
"Waterfall explosion!!!"
Kakashi's water-blast took the figure by surprise, but it still managed to jump out of harm's way, but by then, Kurenai had the jumping figure in her sight.
"Lava-spear Barrage!!!" She made a seal and a red wall-like thing appeared in front of her, and then multiple spears of lava flew out of the wall, directed at the jumping figure.
'Kabuto' wasn't worried, as he had prepared his own jutsu...
"Meteor avalanche!!!"
Kurenai gasped in surprise as each of her spears were being snuffed out by the enemy's meteors, wich were appearing out of nowhere besides his falling form. Something was wrong though, he wasted chakra by summoning too meteors, unless... He was attacking through her jutsu! She had no time to make another jutsu before the meteors would reach her...
"Earth element : Stone Barrier!!!"
Thanks to Asuma's jutsu, a small shield raised from the ground to protect Kurenai, and that's when Gai made his move...
"Konoha Sempu!!!(Konoha whirlwind, I think... I'm going to put the real jutsus' names if I know them...)
But the figure had already landed and dodged to the side while preparing another jutsu...
"Dragon-fire missile!" was all Gai heard before losing concioussness.
Is that, Kabuto!?!Kakashi was dumbfounded, what was Kabuto doing here? Was Orochimaru preparing another invasion? He barely had time to dodge another flame blast from 'Kabuto' as he charged up the Chidori...
"I'll get you, you basthard!" Tsunade was still remembering her last fight with Kabuto, but something wasn't right, he wasn't this strong, and why didn't he use his chakra scalpels, his favorite weapons?
'Kabuto' smirked. Sure he was just a shadow clone, but having half of Kyubi's chakra still made him pretty damn strong...
Everyone was one him in a four-on-one Taijutsu fight, and he was still winning! He crouched to dodge a punch from Tsunade while sweeping Asuma's legs out from under him. He then used his momentum to get up in a spinning roundhouse kick that knocked out Kurenai, effectively taking her out of the battle, and punched Kakashi hard in the stomach, stunning him. Crouching to dodge another of Tsunade's punches, he got up in a furious backflip and kicked Asuma hard in the face.
Now it was only two-on-one, but Kakashi and Tsunade redoubled their efforts
and managed to give him a hard time. Kakashi dodged a snap kick to the head and tried to retaliate but got a fist to the face instead. Kakashi stumbled backwards and fell prey to countless high-speed punches to his gut, knoking him out.
Gai was slowly waking up when he saw Tsunade also fall to the ground, knocked out. This was going to be hard...
"Konoha sempu!!!!" screamed a battle ready Lee.
The clone ducked and used his motion to continue into a front-flip kick.
Tsunade, Asuma, Kurenai and Kakashi were groggily getting up when they saw Lee slam into the wall from the force of the opponents kick.
Neji was also arriving, as he and Lee were training and he had his Byakugan
activated. Seeing numerous chakra signatures, he started to worry and came as fast as he could with Lee and saw the other ninjas of his village getting up or knocked unconsciouss.
"Sixty-four points opening attack!"
But surprisingly, the enemy dodged them all, and then administered a brutal kick to the ribs, but instead of blocking or dodging it, Neji decided he could at least do a bit of damage to the enemy, so he grabbed the foot of the agressor (resulting in a few broken ribs) and initiated the heavenly spin.
"Kaiten!!!"
The attacker vanished in a puff of smoke, being a shadow clone.
Everyone was speechless.
A shadow clone?!?
Who the hell is that strong?!?
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Kyubi smirked. So, they finnaly landed a hit... But I don't care, I already copied the scroll completly... Suckers...
He jumped off the roof of the tower and headed towards Naruto's home. After all, if he using Naruto's body, he might as well use the appartment too.
Speaking of wich...Kyubi decided to pay a little visit to Naruto...
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Naruto was dumbfounded.
"OhFuckOhFuckOhFuckOhFuckOhFuck!!! He can't can't be THAT strong can he?"
He couldn't beleive all the strongest ninjas in his village were defeated by a shadow clone!! Sure Kyubi was powerfull, but this?!?
"I thought you would've realized by now how powerful I was, welp"
Naruto froze when he heard the voice behind him. Yep, he was in deep shit alright.
Kyubi mentally grinned when he saw the boy cringe. I'll break him... I don't want him interfering with my plans...watching him squirm is highly amusing...
Naruto turned and put on the bravest look he could muster.
"What do you want?" He nearly spat out. Although Naruto tried to act brave, deep down, he was scared shit-less. And Kyubi knew it.
"I think I'll take up residence in your home, brat."
"What? What do you mean?" Naruto was panicking. If Kyubi stayed, he might want to hurt people, wich meant he might hurt Iruka, or Kakashi, or other people precious to him...
(AN: NO YAOI!!! I just thought since they were the first people to go: "You are a person Naruto, not a cruel demon reject.", they should get to be the first people on Naruto's worry list. That is all.)
"If I leave now, they'll know something's up. Likewise, I'll have to act like you would for a couple of weeks, or they'll suspect something... I'll just have to gradually change behaviour so it looks normal. And since you're just becoming a teenager, they'll all think it's perfectly natural...
Oh shit... This is going to work... He's going to replace me...Now Naruto was sweating bullets. His mouth was so dry he thought he went a year in the sahara without water.
Already panicking? tsk, tsk. I thought you were brave brat.
(AN: Sorry for making Kyubi sound like a hypocrite...)
Kyubi then lunged and slammed Naruto hard in the ribs, sending him flying.
"What did you that for?!?"
"I'm bored, time for hide and seek, winner escapes..."
As Kyubi was talking, walls appeared out of nowhere, and to Naruto it seemed as if the room was getting way bigger. The labirinth was complete.
Naruto had one coherent thought in his head...
"Fuck..."
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How'd you like it? Did I do the fight right? Oh, and btw, tell me if you want me to do a pairing or not (concerning Naruto) don't tell me who, just vote yes or no for the pairing thing.
P.S.
I can't get the Italics/Bold to appear sad and I have an old computer so the format is probably crap.
an author's note. And yes I do know I'm not good at this, but at least I try... right? Anyways I will try to do a battle scene with some jutsus that already existed and a few of my own.
= thoughts " " = speaking & = scene switch
Disclaimer : I (sadly) don't own Naruto
CONTROL SHIFT
chapter 3 :
The battle
commences
The jounins tensed as they saw a figure coming out of the tower, and they each started to release their jutsus.
"Waterfall explosion!!!"
Kakashi's water-blast took the figure by surprise, but it still managed to jump out of harm's way, but by then, Kurenai had the jumping figure in her sight.
"Lava-spear Barrage!!!" She made a seal and a red wall-like thing appeared in front of her, and then multiple spears of lava flew out of the wall, directed at the jumping figure.
'Kabuto' wasn't worried, as he had prepared his own jutsu...
"Meteor avalanche!!!"
Kurenai gasped in surprise as each of her spears were being snuffed out by the enemy's meteors, wich were appearing out of nowhere besides his falling form. Something was wrong though, he wasted chakra by summoning too meteors, unless... He was attacking through her jutsu! She had no time to make another jutsu before the meteors would reach her...
"Earth element : Stone Barrier!!!"
Thanks to Asuma's jutsu, a small shield raised from the ground to protect Kurenai, and that's when Gai made his move...
"Konoha Sempu!!!(Konoha whirlwind, I think... I'm going to put the real jutsus' names if I know them...)
But the figure had already landed and dodged to the side while preparing another jutsu...
"Dragon-fire missile!" was all Gai heard before losing concioussness.
Is that, Kabuto!?!Kakashi was dumbfounded, what was Kabuto doing here? Was Orochimaru preparing another invasion? He barely had time to dodge another flame blast from 'Kabuto' as he charged up the Chidori...
"I'll get you, you basthard!" Tsunade was still remembering her last fight with Kabuto, but something wasn't right, he wasn't this strong, and why didn't he use his chakra scalpels, his favorite weapons?
'Kabuto' smirked. Sure he was just a shadow clone, but having half of Kyubi's chakra still made him pretty damn strong...
Everyone was one him in a four-on-one Taijutsu fight, and he was still winning! He crouched to dodge a punch from Tsunade while sweeping Asuma's legs out from under him. He then used his momentum to get up in a spinning roundhouse kick that knocked out Kurenai, effectively taking her out of the battle, and punched Kakashi hard in the stomach, stunning him. Crouching to dodge another of Tsunade's punches, he got up in a furious backflip and kicked Asuma hard in the face.
Now it was only two-on-one, but Kakashi and Tsunade redoubled their efforts
and managed to give him a hard time. Kakashi dodged a snap kick to the head and tried to retaliate but got a fist to the face instead. Kakashi stumbled backwards and fell prey to countless high-speed punches to his gut, knoking him out.
Gai was slowly waking up when he saw Tsunade also fall to the ground, knocked out. This was going to be hard...
"Konoha sempu!!!!" screamed a battle ready Lee.
The clone ducked and used his motion to continue into a front-flip kick.
Tsunade, Asuma, Kurenai and Kakashi were groggily getting up when they saw Lee slam into the wall from the force of the opponents kick.
Neji was also arriving, as he and Lee were training and he had his Byakugan
activated. Seeing numerous chakra signatures, he started to worry and came as fast as he could with Lee and saw the other ninjas of his village getting up or knocked unconsciouss.
"Sixty-four points opening attack!"
But surprisingly, the enemy dodged them all, and then administered a brutal kick to the ribs, but instead of blocking or dodging it, Neji decided he could at least do a bit of damage to the enemy, so he grabbed the foot of the agressor (resulting in a few broken ribs) and initiated the heavenly spin.
"Kaiten!!!"
The attacker vanished in a puff of smoke, being a shadow clone.
Everyone was speechless.
A shadow clone?!?
Who the hell is that strong?!?
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Kyubi smirked. So, they finnaly landed a hit... But I don't care, I already copied the scroll completly... Suckers...
He jumped off the roof of the tower and headed towards Naruto's home. After all, if he using Naruto's body, he might as well use the appartment too.
Speaking of wich...Kyubi decided to pay a little visit to Naruto...
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Naruto was dumbfounded.
"OhFuckOhFuckOhFuckOhFuckOhFuck!!! He can't can't be THAT strong can he?"
He couldn't beleive all the strongest ninjas in his village were defeated by a shadow clone!! Sure Kyubi was powerfull, but this?!?
"I thought you would've realized by now how powerful I was, welp"
Naruto froze when he heard the voice behind him. Yep, he was in deep shit alright.
Kyubi mentally grinned when he saw the boy cringe. I'll break him... I don't want him interfering with my plans...watching him squirm is highly amusing...
Naruto turned and put on the bravest look he could muster.
"What do you want?" He nearly spat out. Although Naruto tried to act brave, deep down, he was scared shit-less. And Kyubi knew it.
"I think I'll take up residence in your home, brat."
"What? What do you mean?" Naruto was panicking. If Kyubi stayed, he might want to hurt people, wich meant he might hurt Iruka, or Kakashi, or other people precious to him...
(AN: NO YAOI!!! I just thought since they were the first people to go: "You are a person Naruto, not a cruel demon reject.", they should get to be the first people on Naruto's worry list. That is all.)
"If I leave now, they'll know something's up. Likewise, I'll have to act like you would for a couple of weeks, or they'll suspect something... I'll just have to gradually change behaviour so it looks normal. And since you're just becoming a teenager, they'll all think it's perfectly natural...
Oh shit... This is going to work... He's going to replace me...Now Naruto was sweating bullets. His mouth was so dry he thought he went a year in the sahara without water.
Already panicking? tsk, tsk. I thought you were brave brat.
(AN: Sorry for making Kyubi sound like a hypocrite...)
Kyubi then lunged and slammed Naruto hard in the ribs, sending him flying.
"What did you that for?!?"
"I'm bored, time for hide and seek, winner escapes..."
As Kyubi was talking, walls appeared out of nowhere, and to Naruto it seemed as if the room was getting way bigger. The labirinth was complete.
Naruto had one coherent thought in his head...
"Fuck..."
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How'd you like it? Did I do the fight right? Oh, and btw, tell me if you want me to do a pairing or not (concerning Naruto) don't tell me who, just vote yes or no for the pairing thing.
P.S.
I can't get the Italics/Bold to appear sad and I have an old computer so the format is probably crap.