Well..I might be able to get this in the day I..well..write it..so..maybe
some people might actually like it from now on..but..*sighs*, I wouldn't
know....
I'm thinking about not continuing this story..no one likes it..and no one will like to read it..it's the 3rd chapter for heavens sake!! No one will read it!! No one likes these kinds of fics I guess..
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I Didn't Know..
Choices
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Inuyasha looked out Kagome's window and at the start. 'they shine as brightly as Kagome's smile....tomorrow is a new day....maybe something good will happen....' with that last thought, Inuyasha drifted off into a trubled sleep.
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"Inuyasha? Is that you? She peeked out from behind the door and found the crumpled and bloody corspes of her family. She screamed.
"KAGOME!! WAKE UP!!! K-A-G-O-M-E!!!!!" Inuyasha yelled, at the top of his lunges. Kagome shot up, her eyes large and frightful. She looked over at him, "Inuyasha!!" She threw herself at his and cried.
Inuyasha bit his lower lip and hugged Kagome while patting her back. "Shhh..Kagome..everything will be alright..I promise.."
(I could stop here you know)
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Kagome's mom was troubled. She had no idea how bad dad's condiction was, but she darent tell Kagome. She had enough to worry without those Jewel Shards.
Sota looked up from his video game. "Mom!! LOOK OUT!!" He yelled, a little to late. Kagome's mom screamed and swvered, trying to avoid the trucker. She crashed, tumbling around and around and around until---
END
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no one will review so why make long chapters???
I'm thinking about not continuing this story..no one likes it..and no one will like to read it..it's the 3rd chapter for heavens sake!! No one will read it!! No one likes these kinds of fics I guess..
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I Didn't Know..
Choices
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Inuyasha looked out Kagome's window and at the start. 'they shine as brightly as Kagome's smile....tomorrow is a new day....maybe something good will happen....' with that last thought, Inuyasha drifted off into a trubled sleep.
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"Inuyasha? Is that you? She peeked out from behind the door and found the crumpled and bloody corspes of her family. She screamed.
"KAGOME!! WAKE UP!!! K-A-G-O-M-E!!!!!" Inuyasha yelled, at the top of his lunges. Kagome shot up, her eyes large and frightful. She looked over at him, "Inuyasha!!" She threw herself at his and cried.
Inuyasha bit his lower lip and hugged Kagome while patting her back. "Shhh..Kagome..everything will be alright..I promise.."
(I could stop here you know)
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Kagome's mom was troubled. She had no idea how bad dad's condiction was, but she darent tell Kagome. She had enough to worry without those Jewel Shards.
Sota looked up from his video game. "Mom!! LOOK OUT!!" He yelled, a little to late. Kagome's mom screamed and swvered, trying to avoid the trucker. She crashed, tumbling around and around and around until---
END
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no one will review so why make long chapters???