M'k!! I REALLY don't see the point in continuing this story.. no one really
likes it... so why? I'm prolly gonna deleate this or stop writing this if I
don't get any more reviews. Sorry, to you ppl (if any..) who ACTUALLY reads
this fan fic. Besides, I've got a book I'm writing... and, maybe, if it's
good enough, I'll be able to.. um.. yeah... get it published... but I don't
want it to be under a children's publisher.. so it's gonna take me a LONG
time.. sighs... I gave up on the book once.. but I'm starting back up on
it.. don't know how long I'll keep writing it.. but all my friends seem to
enjoy reading it, so, maybe I will... the story that is, NOT this fan fic.
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Sota looked up from his video game, "Mom!! LOOK OUT!!" He yelled, a little to late. Kagome's mom screamed and swerved, trying to avoid the trucker. She crashed, tumbling around and around and around until--
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they ran into a fence post. Sota cried out in agony as the window cracked on his head. He coughed out a little blood, and then everything started going fuzzy. He heard his mom scream, and then a terrible sound as if bones were breaking.. and then he heard Gramps yell.. and then everything went into a solitary silence, and his pain went away as he slid int the never ending darkness, seeking light.
Sota only barely noticed when the docters started yelling out orders.. something about breathing.. and maybe make it... bit Sota was to much in his state of pain to really listen to what they were saying. Then he heard a voice.. and familiar voice.. someone.. no.. Kagome!! My sister...
She was saying something. But he coudn't quite make it out. She sounded so terrified. That was one of the only times he had ever heard he like that. There was another.. but he was too secluded to think of it.. to remember.
Then.. Inuyasha! Could it really be? Inuyasha came! But he was slowly slipping.. he couldn't... but.. he.. he much fight.. if.. if only... "Sister..."
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Kagome hugged herself, she was so terrified that something might've happened.. to.. but no.. that was not a dream.. Kagome sighed. She knew that there was no way for her to go back to normal.. even though Inuyasha had suggested it many a time.
She was startled out of her state when the phone rang. Just then a small light of hope rose up within her. She ran to the phone and picked it up, "Hello??"
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"SOTA!!!" Kagome said, terrified. She wouldn't.. no.. couldn't loose him.. HE was all she had left, "SOTA!!! PLEASE!! WAKE UP!!" Kagome started to go in, but Inuyasha stopped her, "Kagome... you won't be able to do anything.. he'd dead." Kagome shook her head fearcly.
"He's breathing again!! We thought we'd lost him!!" One of the docters yelled, indicating that Sota was, indeed, alive.. barely.
"Sota!!" Kagome ran over. "Sister.." She gasped as Sota exhaled, and was silent once more..
"SSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!"
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sighs Was it good?
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Sota looked up from his video game, "Mom!! LOOK OUT!!" He yelled, a little to late. Kagome's mom screamed and swerved, trying to avoid the trucker. She crashed, tumbling around and around and around until--
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they ran into a fence post. Sota cried out in agony as the window cracked on his head. He coughed out a little blood, and then everything started going fuzzy. He heard his mom scream, and then a terrible sound as if bones were breaking.. and then he heard Gramps yell.. and then everything went into a solitary silence, and his pain went away as he slid int the never ending darkness, seeking light.
Sota only barely noticed when the docters started yelling out orders.. something about breathing.. and maybe make it... bit Sota was to much in his state of pain to really listen to what they were saying. Then he heard a voice.. and familiar voice.. someone.. no.. Kagome!! My sister...
She was saying something. But he coudn't quite make it out. She sounded so terrified. That was one of the only times he had ever heard he like that. There was another.. but he was too secluded to think of it.. to remember.
Then.. Inuyasha! Could it really be? Inuyasha came! But he was slowly slipping.. he couldn't... but.. he.. he much fight.. if.. if only... "Sister..."
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Kagome hugged herself, she was so terrified that something might've happened.. to.. but no.. that was not a dream.. Kagome sighed. She knew that there was no way for her to go back to normal.. even though Inuyasha had suggested it many a time.
She was startled out of her state when the phone rang. Just then a small light of hope rose up within her. She ran to the phone and picked it up, "Hello??"
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"SOTA!!!" Kagome said, terrified. She wouldn't.. no.. couldn't loose him.. HE was all she had left, "SOTA!!! PLEASE!! WAKE UP!!" Kagome started to go in, but Inuyasha stopped her, "Kagome... you won't be able to do anything.. he'd dead." Kagome shook her head fearcly.
"He's breathing again!! We thought we'd lost him!!" One of the docters yelled, indicating that Sota was, indeed, alive.. barely.
"Sota!!" Kagome ran over. "Sister.." She gasped as Sota exhaled, and was silent once more..
"SSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!"
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sighs Was it good?