On The Trail Of A Spy
By Esteban T. Rodriguez
Author's notes: I originally wrote this for an assignment in LA, but I got such a good mark that I thought I'd submit it. Let me know how it is, please! My first fic, "Imperfection" in the 007 category didn't get reviewed!!!
I ran through the darkness of night. My loyalty was about to be tested now as I made a daring defection form the Russian Security force to the Special Executive for Counterintelligence, Terrorism, Revenge and Extortion or SPECTRE as they were known. Behind me, I heard the crowd stampede out of the concert hall Then, I saw him coming. Alone, my target with that occult swagger and those cold steely gray eyes. I preformed a quick inventory of my ammunition. One sniper rifle round and a fully loaded Smith & Wesson 29 (This is a classic gun that Auric Goldfinger uses and is seen used by Bond in Die Another Day.) to unload on this enemy of my new employer. I crouched down under the seclusion of trees and took out my AR-7 sniper rifle. Too bad. This man was very handsome. Who ever his lady was, I was about to break her heart... An owl hooted nearby, causing my finger to pull the trigger reflexively. My arm couldn't handle the sudden jolt of the recoil and the shot missed. The man took out his own gun. A Beretta .25 with a silencer. He turned to me and fired. I rolled out of the way just in time and took out my Smith & Wesson. This man had prudence to travel armed. The cover of night wouldn't disclose my position anytime soon, but it was my hypothesis that he would use this to his advantage. I stood, straining to see where he was. A twig snapped behind me. I turned and fired, only to hear the shot ricochet off an ancient oak. Then, the man darted out from behind a tree. I fired again, but the man rolled and fired. I gasped in pain as James Bond's bullet hit home in my chest.
The End
Well? How was it? Reviews would be accepted.
By Esteban T. Rodriguez
Author's notes: I originally wrote this for an assignment in LA, but I got such a good mark that I thought I'd submit it. Let me know how it is, please! My first fic, "Imperfection" in the 007 category didn't get reviewed!!!
I ran through the darkness of night. My loyalty was about to be tested now as I made a daring defection form the Russian Security force to the Special Executive for Counterintelligence, Terrorism, Revenge and Extortion or SPECTRE as they were known. Behind me, I heard the crowd stampede out of the concert hall Then, I saw him coming. Alone, my target with that occult swagger and those cold steely gray eyes. I preformed a quick inventory of my ammunition. One sniper rifle round and a fully loaded Smith & Wesson 29 (This is a classic gun that Auric Goldfinger uses and is seen used by Bond in Die Another Day.) to unload on this enemy of my new employer. I crouched down under the seclusion of trees and took out my AR-7 sniper rifle. Too bad. This man was very handsome. Who ever his lady was, I was about to break her heart... An owl hooted nearby, causing my finger to pull the trigger reflexively. My arm couldn't handle the sudden jolt of the recoil and the shot missed. The man took out his own gun. A Beretta .25 with a silencer. He turned to me and fired. I rolled out of the way just in time and took out my Smith & Wesson. This man had prudence to travel armed. The cover of night wouldn't disclose my position anytime soon, but it was my hypothesis that he would use this to his advantage. I stood, straining to see where he was. A twig snapped behind me. I turned and fired, only to hear the shot ricochet off an ancient oak. Then, the man darted out from behind a tree. I fired again, but the man rolled and fired. I gasped in pain as James Bond's bullet hit home in my chest.
The End
Well? How was it? Reviews would be accepted.