Reviewer response time, Sory i didn't do it in the last chappie, but i was kinda sidetracked.
MiromotoYuuske - I'n sorry bot the jumpiness, it will ger way better when i start writing it again, you have to remember, i wrote this a year ago, and i have been spoiling you all because i have taken a creativ writing class since then, Thanks for the review
Ebony Fox - Sorry bout the errors, but that is a common occourence since i am operating on an updated DOS system, which means the word check doesn't work, as you can really tell. Thanks for the review
Little-angel-no-one-els - Wow, you liked it... cool... I think you can ecome better than me, so there.. dont deflate yourself like that. K? Anywayz, I look forward to your reviews, as always, you are really inspiring. Thankies.
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Inu-Ken-Yu
Part One Chapter 2
Inuyasha drew Tetsaiga and jumped onto the roof of the shrine. "Naraku!" Yuuske and the others joined him. "Naraku, what do you want?"
Naraku flew out of nowhere to float beside the shrine.
"What do I always want Dog Boy?" Naraku sent a hoard of wasps at the 8.
Inuyasha used cutting wind.
Yuuske and Inuyasha attacked together while Hiei and Kuwabara drew their swords and stood at ready. Yahiko jumped down and began to drag Kenshin towards the house.
Sanoske stood, seething with anger. "That was Kenshin....Nobody hurts my family and gets away with it. You will pay."
Sano jumped at naraku. Naraku dissapeared and turned to dust. His mocking laughter hung in the air.
The shrine's roof groaned under the weight and collapsed under the few that were left on the roof. Inuyasha cursed the air.
"Naraku...I'll get you."
"Where is Kenshin, he was on the porch?" Inuyasha and Yuuske started digging through the rubble.
"Over here!" they head Hiei yell. Hiei, seeing the shrine fall toward Yahiko and Kenshin had used his speed to pull them to saftey. "I thought you were supposed to be the hero." he scoffed.
Inuyasha jumped over and landed beside Hiei and the just arrived Kurama.
"Is he ok?"
"I dont know..." Kurama knelt and picked up Kenshin to carry him inside when Kagome yelled from above and fell out her window on the second floor.
Inuyasha and Hiei jumped into the air to catch Kagome as she tumbled. Inuyasha caught her and flew back into the window. something hit him from behind and the world went black.
Hiei hearing Inuyasha'a startled cry put on an extra burst of energy and landed on the sill only to be pushed out again as Naraku flew out the window with Kagome and Kauru in a cloud of bees.
"Damn." Yahiko and Sanouske both ran after the cloud but ended only in short winding themselves.
Botan ran out the door. "He said that if you want them back, then give him the key to the portal." she looked devastated.
"But what is the key?" Kurama didn't think he wanted to know the answer.
"Batthosai the Man Slayer." she looked at Kenshin and sighed, "His soul was the thing that defeated her the last time, and his love for the soul of Kauru."
"Never!" Sanouske shouted "We'll never give him up!"
"If he is to ever awaken then we will need to get him to the Kilia Mountains." Inuyasha sighed "Kurama and I will go." Meanwhile he secretly prayed that Shippou had survived to Kagome's time, if he hadn't, the Batthosai would die in three days.
END CHAPTER TWO! ;P
Author's notes
Ok, so the chapter is short, so what, It's better than nothing!
First, I'm nowhere near sure if Kagome's well has a porch, I just put it in because I thought it could use a little country to it.
Second, Naraku did not go through the well, he survived, The details will be explained and examined thouroughly in next chapter.
Third, This is not a politically correct fan-Fic this is something out of the warped and twisted minds of Scarlet, Fear, and Sarah Night
Fourth, As I have said before, These characters are not mine, but the story line is totally original.
And Finally, my lawyer is now suing us for our unpayment of fees. In total the amount that will be forefitted is a whopping 50 cents.
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