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KyLewin:Heheh, constipated. Thanks for your advice on the spell check thingy, i've found me one, so there shouldent be as meny spelling mistakes.. Hopefully.
BrizzleTH:Ha!Well i have got a spell checker!And i am still writing!So your wrong!All of you!Wrong!!HAHAHAHAH!!ahemsorry about that.. I'm on a little bit of a sugar high.. Glad you like it.
wish i was there:Thanks, and i'll try to finish this one off soon.
Note, this is partially a songchap, to wierd Al yankovic's Constipated.
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Not the babysitter!
Chapter 4
'Uble bubble toilet trouble.'
"Uhhhhhhhhnnnn. Haaddddgggggge!!!"Mandy could be heard straining in the bathroom, and Trunks and Goten look at each other quickly, an unusual look on Goten's face."I wonder what's going on in there.."He said, looking down the hall to the bathroom."Well then lets go check it out!"Trunks said, jumping off the couch, and going down the hall, followed by Goten."Mandy!Mandy!Are you OK?"Trunks asked, stood by the door. Goten stood in front of the door"Are the constipation guys in there?!"Goten asked, watching the door.
/Why'd you have to go and make me so constipated? 'Cause right now I'd do anything to just get my bowels evacuated In the bathroom ... I sit and I wait and I strain And I sweat and I clench and I feel the pain Oh, should I take laxatives or have my colon irrigated? No no no
"Err, no guys, I'm fine, just having a little toilet trouble.."She said, pausing the strain for a minute, and looking over at the door"Damn all this cheese!"She murmured in a hiss, looking from side to side"Eeeeeeghhhhhh!!"Mandy closed her eyes. "Toilet trouble?"Goten asked, as they returned to the living room."Your toilet must be busted, Goten.."Trunks said, sitting back down on the couch, with a 'parp'"Hey, maybe we should-"Goten cut short, before running back to the bathroom door"Hey Mandy, if the toilets busted, I can fix it, I've done it before!"
"No, no! Its fine!"She insisted, looking over at the door again"You don't, worry about-"She paused"me Goten, I'll be fine. You and,"She paused again"Trunks go play."Goten shrugs, then walks back down the hall, and sitting down on the armchair"She said its working, but she said she didn't need any he-"Goten was interrupted by a loud"UUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!"From the bathroom."I think those con guys are trying to get mandy's money now.."Goten said, looking down the hall."HAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHEEEEE!!"Came from the door"Trunks, this is getting f-" "UGHHHH!!!" "reaky.."Goten said, looking back at Trunks, who was fast asleep on the couch.
"Hmmm.."Goten thought, before skidding on his knee's, to a loose floorboard, near the door. Under here, he had seen his father's hidden stash of lighters. Of cause, his father didn't smoke, he was glad of that, but they would come in handy for a prank he was going to pull on Trunks. Goten sniggered, before getting a small peice of paper, and rolling it up. He slipped the end of the paper into Trunk's mouth, and lit the other end, before tossing the lighter back under the floorboard, then putting the board back in place, and sitting back on the armchair quickly, with a fast 'parp'.'Ugghhhhhgigigigi!!!'Came from the bathroom, as Trunks flinched, opening his eye's slowly"Ahhhh!"He jumped out of his seat, nearly hitting the celing"Get it out, get it out, get it out!!"He said, running around in a circle, watching the flame as it drew ever closer to his lips.
Goten sat giggling madly on the armchair, watching Trunks. The giggling was almost inaudible at one point by an almost deafening 'SPLUSH!' "OW YEAH!!"Mandy yelled, jumping off the toilet seat
--missing scene--
Goten and Trunks stared weirdly at the hallway, the makeshift cig in Trunks' mouth was a thing of the past, as Mandy slowly walked out of the bathroom, and down the hall. With a smile, and a sigh of relief, Mandy smiles at the boys"Hey."She said simply, before half skipping, half walking to the kitchen to get a soda "Would you guys like a drink?" "Soda!" They both called in unison. She smiled at the two, as she got three cans. She returned to the living room, and handed them two cans."Well, your parents told me to wait outside from 10:20, so, bye guys.."Mandy said, giving Goten and Trunks a farewell kiss on the forehead, before walking outside. After a few minutes, they could hear talking from outside, and then the jingling of change, and the folding of paper.
Trunks and Goten both stood next to each other, glancing from side to side, before over at the door, as their parents walked in"Boys, why is Mandy such a mess?"Chi-chi asked, still looking behind, as Goku ITed Mandy home, before turning to face the boys"WHAT THE-!?!?!?"She said, staring wide eyed at the mess. Goten and Trunks look at each other, before both saying in unison
"Oops."
--Fin--
Thanks guys, for all your support. All the reviews really got me raring to go, so i typed this chapter in about 2 hours, one session. So thanks. Be sure to look out for my next one. I haven't quite decided what it's gonna be, but the first chapter will be out next Wednesday, i promise!
KyLewin:Heheh, constipated. Thanks for your advice on the spell check thingy, i've found me one, so there shouldent be as meny spelling mistakes.. Hopefully.
BrizzleTH:Ha!Well i have got a spell checker!And i am still writing!So your wrong!All of you!Wrong!!HAHAHAHAH!!ahemsorry about that.. I'm on a little bit of a sugar high.. Glad you like it.
wish i was there:Thanks, and i'll try to finish this one off soon.
Note, this is partially a songchap, to wierd Al yankovic's Constipated.
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Not the babysitter!
Chapter 4
'Uble bubble toilet trouble.'
"Uhhhhhhhhnnnn. Haaddddgggggge!!!"Mandy could be heard straining in the bathroom, and Trunks and Goten look at each other quickly, an unusual look on Goten's face."I wonder what's going on in there.."He said, looking down the hall to the bathroom."Well then lets go check it out!"Trunks said, jumping off the couch, and going down the hall, followed by Goten."Mandy!Mandy!Are you OK?"Trunks asked, stood by the door. Goten stood in front of the door"Are the constipation guys in there?!"Goten asked, watching the door.
/Why'd you have to go and make me so constipated? 'Cause right now I'd do anything to just get my bowels evacuated In the bathroom ... I sit and I wait and I strain And I sweat and I clench and I feel the pain Oh, should I take laxatives or have my colon irrigated? No no no
"Err, no guys, I'm fine, just having a little toilet trouble.."She said, pausing the strain for a minute, and looking over at the door"Damn all this cheese!"She murmured in a hiss, looking from side to side"Eeeeeeghhhhhh!!"Mandy closed her eyes. "Toilet trouble?"Goten asked, as they returned to the living room."Your toilet must be busted, Goten.."Trunks said, sitting back down on the couch, with a 'parp'"Hey, maybe we should-"Goten cut short, before running back to the bathroom door"Hey Mandy, if the toilets busted, I can fix it, I've done it before!"
"No, no! Its fine!"She insisted, looking over at the door again"You don't, worry about-"She paused"me Goten, I'll be fine. You and,"She paused again"Trunks go play."Goten shrugs, then walks back down the hall, and sitting down on the armchair"She said its working, but she said she didn't need any he-"Goten was interrupted by a loud"UUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!"From the bathroom."I think those con guys are trying to get mandy's money now.."Goten said, looking down the hall."HAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHEEEEE!!"Came from the door"Trunks, this is getting f-" "UGHHHH!!!" "reaky.."Goten said, looking back at Trunks, who was fast asleep on the couch.
"Hmmm.."Goten thought, before skidding on his knee's, to a loose floorboard, near the door. Under here, he had seen his father's hidden stash of lighters. Of cause, his father didn't smoke, he was glad of that, but they would come in handy for a prank he was going to pull on Trunks. Goten sniggered, before getting a small peice of paper, and rolling it up. He slipped the end of the paper into Trunk's mouth, and lit the other end, before tossing the lighter back under the floorboard, then putting the board back in place, and sitting back on the armchair quickly, with a fast 'parp'.'Ugghhhhhgigigigi!!!'Came from the bathroom, as Trunks flinched, opening his eye's slowly"Ahhhh!"He jumped out of his seat, nearly hitting the celing"Get it out, get it out, get it out!!"He said, running around in a circle, watching the flame as it drew ever closer to his lips.
Goten sat giggling madly on the armchair, watching Trunks. The giggling was almost inaudible at one point by an almost deafening 'SPLUSH!' "OW YEAH!!"Mandy yelled, jumping off the toilet seat
--missing scene--
Goten and Trunks stared weirdly at the hallway, the makeshift cig in Trunks' mouth was a thing of the past, as Mandy slowly walked out of the bathroom, and down the hall. With a smile, and a sigh of relief, Mandy smiles at the boys"Hey."She said simply, before half skipping, half walking to the kitchen to get a soda "Would you guys like a drink?" "Soda!" They both called in unison. She smiled at the two, as she got three cans. She returned to the living room, and handed them two cans."Well, your parents told me to wait outside from 10:20, so, bye guys.."Mandy said, giving Goten and Trunks a farewell kiss on the forehead, before walking outside. After a few minutes, they could hear talking from outside, and then the jingling of change, and the folding of paper.
Trunks and Goten both stood next to each other, glancing from side to side, before over at the door, as their parents walked in"Boys, why is Mandy such a mess?"Chi-chi asked, still looking behind, as Goku ITed Mandy home, before turning to face the boys"WHAT THE-!?!?!?"She said, staring wide eyed at the mess. Goten and Trunks look at each other, before both saying in unison
"Oops."
--Fin--
Thanks guys, for all your support. All the reviews really got me raring to go, so i typed this chapter in about 2 hours, one session. So thanks. Be sure to look out for my next one. I haven't quite decided what it's gonna be, but the first chapter will be out next Wednesday, i promise!