Karana Belle: I was soo happy that at least SOME people reviewed. What's
wrong with all you others? Do you just don't love me!? Well here are the
reviewers!:
Captain Spam-- I want to read that new story when it comes out! I've read your story "Dating Game: Suikoden style" it was great! I love giraffes also they are soo cute. (So are penguins!)
Stupid Person--heheheheheheheheheheh * on for 12 hours*
Shorty140-- thank you! Is it really an interesting style of writing? I really hope you will like this story cause I wouldn't want to know what you would do if it was bad! And I love Yuber too!
MWPP and Lily-- my name isn't really Karana, but it was my nickname in fourth grade because we read Island of the Blue Dolphins. This is going to be a romance but it will take a while because Yuber is mean in the story. Does MWPP stand for Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs? Just wondering!
Sandra(ree-ree)--thanks pickle! That really is nice of you to say those things. Love ya sis! ^^
Karana: those are the ONLY reviews I got! Thank you to those that did review ( the few you are) I love you a bunch of penguins! (don't ask^^'')
Disclaimer: look at the prologue!!!
Unexpected Change of Heart
Chapter 1
A man with blue eyes, blonde hair, and black clothes walked into the thriving castle called Oceania. He looked around at the many things visible. There were flowers of every kind making a once bleak castle gorgeous. The children playing tag and hide-and-go-seek laughing, and carefree. The five-story castle rising above all else, vines starting to make their way up the side. The market place bustling with people of all ages: old, and young alike. The young girls flirting with the soldiers at the gate, women and mothers trying to sell freshly baked bread for some potch.
Yuber, blonde braid rustling in the wind, was here at this lovely castle on a mission. A mission to make people miserable. A mission to kill.
His plan was simple. He would lie low for a while and then kill off a couple people at a time and making it look like someone else did it. Quite simple indeed, well at least for someone who had graduated from the feared Killer's Guild.
The Killer's Guild. The school that teaches boys and men more than a thousand ways to torture or kill someone.
Yuber was yanked away from his lovely world of terror as he felt someone tug his pant leg. He brushed it aside, but obviously it wasn't enough to get this organism away, for it just tugged again.
He looked down to see a young girl, no older than six, with blonde hair and blue eyes. Yuber was disgusted to see that it was a child. 'Save me! There is a child here that is touching me!' Yuber was beginning to panic. He didn't like children, even at the Killer's Guild. I guess you could say that was his only weakness.
"Will you play with me, mister?" the young girl asked with a smile.
Yuber almost started hyperventilating at this ' Play with her? HELP! If I did that would mean there would obviously be other children and then I could have a greater risk of being contaminated and get a disease!' 'You were one once you know. I don't see what all the fuss is about!' another voice in his head said. 'I'm not listening to you! You're weird and I've never listened to you before so why start now?' 'Won't it help you with your plan if you play with them? Because it would be lying low and there would be less of a chance for them to suspect you!' 'You're right! Thanks!'
"What's your name?" Yuber smiled at the girl(how he can smile without looking evil? I don't know)
"Jessica, is my name." The girl smiled back. She then grabbed Yuber's hand. She didn't see him flinch though. Too bad for Yuber cause she might have let go!
Little did Jessica know that she was leading him to a 'torture chamber' or what Yuber thought was a torture chamber. But for him any room with children in it WAS a torture chamber....
Karana: Well, did you like it? Tell me in a review please! So review! Go Penguins!
Captain Spam-- I want to read that new story when it comes out! I've read your story "Dating Game: Suikoden style" it was great! I love giraffes also they are soo cute. (So are penguins!)
Stupid Person--heheheheheheheheheheh * on for 12 hours*
Shorty140-- thank you! Is it really an interesting style of writing? I really hope you will like this story cause I wouldn't want to know what you would do if it was bad! And I love Yuber too!
MWPP and Lily-- my name isn't really Karana, but it was my nickname in fourth grade because we read Island of the Blue Dolphins. This is going to be a romance but it will take a while because Yuber is mean in the story. Does MWPP stand for Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs? Just wondering!
Sandra(ree-ree)--thanks pickle! That really is nice of you to say those things. Love ya sis! ^^
Karana: those are the ONLY reviews I got! Thank you to those that did review ( the few you are) I love you a bunch of penguins! (don't ask^^'')
Disclaimer: look at the prologue!!!
Unexpected Change of Heart
Chapter 1
A man with blue eyes, blonde hair, and black clothes walked into the thriving castle called Oceania. He looked around at the many things visible. There were flowers of every kind making a once bleak castle gorgeous. The children playing tag and hide-and-go-seek laughing, and carefree. The five-story castle rising above all else, vines starting to make their way up the side. The market place bustling with people of all ages: old, and young alike. The young girls flirting with the soldiers at the gate, women and mothers trying to sell freshly baked bread for some potch.
Yuber, blonde braid rustling in the wind, was here at this lovely castle on a mission. A mission to make people miserable. A mission to kill.
His plan was simple. He would lie low for a while and then kill off a couple people at a time and making it look like someone else did it. Quite simple indeed, well at least for someone who had graduated from the feared Killer's Guild.
The Killer's Guild. The school that teaches boys and men more than a thousand ways to torture or kill someone.
Yuber was yanked away from his lovely world of terror as he felt someone tug his pant leg. He brushed it aside, but obviously it wasn't enough to get this organism away, for it just tugged again.
He looked down to see a young girl, no older than six, with blonde hair and blue eyes. Yuber was disgusted to see that it was a child. 'Save me! There is a child here that is touching me!' Yuber was beginning to panic. He didn't like children, even at the Killer's Guild. I guess you could say that was his only weakness.
"Will you play with me, mister?" the young girl asked with a smile.
Yuber almost started hyperventilating at this ' Play with her? HELP! If I did that would mean there would obviously be other children and then I could have a greater risk of being contaminated and get a disease!' 'You were one once you know. I don't see what all the fuss is about!' another voice in his head said. 'I'm not listening to you! You're weird and I've never listened to you before so why start now?' 'Won't it help you with your plan if you play with them? Because it would be lying low and there would be less of a chance for them to suspect you!' 'You're right! Thanks!'
"What's your name?" Yuber smiled at the girl(how he can smile without looking evil? I don't know)
"Jessica, is my name." The girl smiled back. She then grabbed Yuber's hand. She didn't see him flinch though. Too bad for Yuber cause she might have let go!
Little did Jessica know that she was leading him to a 'torture chamber' or what Yuber thought was a torture chamber. But for him any room with children in it WAS a torture chamber....
Karana: Well, did you like it? Tell me in a review please! So review! Go Penguins!