Note: I'm back!! That was fun! I had a great time!Thanks for being patient oh yeah and uh... nervous laugh I can't believe no one noticed or it least didn't say anything about how I kept say tenseiga for the names of all the swords!! I don't think I even used the name tetsusaiga even once!!! I feel so stupid lol I'm sorry guys really, anyways bare with me we're bringing this to a close but not just yet... thanks for those who stuck with me like glue. Anyways here it goes chapter seven!!!! THANKS AGAIN!!! Oh yeah and if you go to my site on fiction press your more then welcome to read my stuff but be WARNED on some of the things I write it can get stupid lol
Oh yeah and while looking over the reviews I found that someone FINALLY! Found my not mistake... but HUGE piece of how and why souta is still young. Don't worry I purposely did that and was wondering when someone would hit me for that one lol. If you continue reading you'll find out just why Souta is younger than Rin. Also Sesshomaru is it least 200 years old. Or it least that's what I hear (I don't know for sure) is it because demon life spans are longer than humans? And if that's true than why are Rin and Shippo close to the same age? ALL THIS WILL BE ANSWERED DON'T WORRY!!!!!!
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Rin felt power burn and tear through her bones. She winced sealing her eyes tighter. She didn't want to open them she knew that would only get her distracted. Shippo took a step back completely taken aback, 'this girl can't be human.'
Her whole body seemed to have glowed. Her clothes and skin alike started to shift from a bright gold shine down to a soft blue light. Tenseiga glowed a bright and powerful light its tip still resting against the ground. Shippo's senses went nuts first he smelled her scent mingling in the power and now it was as if she WAS the power. His whole body tensed suddenly feeling both fear of what was to happen to her and fear of what was happening to his own self. He suddenly wanted to grab her warm body and pulling her away from this.
As Rin fought all the burning pain it took just to bring the ones she loved back. Shippo fought his instincts demanding him to encircle her waist breaking her away from this, what his demon instincts called danger.
Shippo jumped a little at the sound of Rin's yelp. Her eyes still remained close her hands tightened around the tenseiga and the power continued to brush over her.
"Sess...Sess...Sesshomaru" Rin squeaked as she pushed the power through the sword. Shippo eventually had to turn his head, just looking at the light made him wince. Shippo's mind debated back and forth as to why it was so hard for Rin to focus, why was she concentrating really hard? Is it because she is human so it's harder to control the power of tenseiga?
Shippo's eyes bounced from the ground back at the blinding light then to the ground again. 'Will she die if she keeps this up? If she does then... I'm the one to blame.' That's when Shippo shot his head back up at Rin. He ignored the light as he ran forward reaching out a hand. Rin's energy didn't let Shippo make it far; before he had even reached a foot within distance Rin's bright energy shoved him back. It didn't burn him or leave him marks it simply pushed him roughly back.
The second Shippo landed he jumped to his feet trying a second time. He again, didn't make it far. This continued for quite some time trying to save Rin from what his instincts told him was 'danger.'
Rin's whole figure started to change. Her hair went from dark pretty brown to a heavy blue. Her eyes that once shimmered dark deep brown now slowly tainted green darker and darker. Shippo didn't stop he continued to body slam into what now became a barrier trying his hardest to reach the one inside. "Rin! RIN!"
He yelled as he slashed his claws the way inuyasha use to against the barrier wall. Rin grew weak feeling as her energy seemed to have drained. Rin shivered preparing herself for her legs to give way. Even as she fell to her knees inside the warm barrier she still refused to let go of tenseiga. "I don't understand" She breathed rapidly as her fingers loosened from tenseiga's handle. "Why can't I bring... Sesshomaru back?"
Even though Rin wanted to cry tears stubbornly refused to fall. "Sesshomaru, I failed you" Rin bowed her head. 'I can't see the demons, I can't control tenseiga's power, I'm worthless.'
A flash back of Sesshomaru, and Jaken trickled across Rin's mind. It was in the days of when she was so much brighter. She wasn't cold and careless like her warm Sesshomaru acted. She was happy, hyper, and joyful. She played with HUGE smiles on her face, she never got bored never, she could always entertain herself by doing something. Even if that meant irritating the hell out of Jaken by singing or dancing.
Then the days of growing without anybody came. She turned older and started to dread on the past. Mother, father, older brother, and even Sesshomaru all seemed to have left. Rin's bow deepened.
"Why tenseiga, why won't you work?"
Rin looked out from the corner of her eye to see... Shippo... yes Shippo banging against the barrier she somehow created. "Shippo?" Rin squinted against the barriers light focusing so she had better view as to what the annoying fox was doing. She watched as he threw himself into the force field crying out wildly against it. Rin frowned "fool" she muttered. She then looked out to see the field of which all was lost. Still no sign of demons to slash at, "Why, why can't I use tenseiga?" Rin held tenseiga's blade up rotating it to study its features.
"Tenseiga allow me to use you, and I shall bring back your master." Tenseiga continued to glow but Rin didn't feel the pulse she was hoping for. 'Does tenseiga not like me?' Rin thought as she stared at the blade. It wasn't long before Rin felt her strength return allowing her to rise to her feet. She hadn't even tried and she was able to rise.
Rin pointed the blade out in front of herself again closing her eyes. 'Please Tenseiga'
Shippo had, had enough he couldn't stand his senses screaming at him anymore this was something he had to do. He braced tetsusaiga in front of him shielding his eyes 'please tetsusaiga.' Shippo hoped that this wouldn't hurt the one inside but it would it least break that damn barrier. He knew it was bad... it was already making Rin change.
'Please' both Rin and Shippo thought at the same time then pulled back throwing there swords forward hoping to slash there targets.
Shippo's heart thumped widely as he yelled the legendary words "Kaze no Kizu!"
Rin hesitated as she through the invisible slash "Return the souls!"
Both keepers of the swords tensed as the powers glided. Tenseiga's invisible slash left the barrier and through the field. Tetsusaiga's yellow blinding light scratched against Rin's barrier. Rin felt her barrier shake, fear rose at her, and without think not even knowing why she did it... she rose her hand up towards the wall "stay out!" she screamed. Not knowing why she screamed, not even knowing if anyone was trying to come in to say 'stay out' in the first place.
Rin's barrier reflected tetsusaiga's power pushing it away into the field. Shippo frowned seeing that the barrier reflected the attack. Rin's eyes widened in surprise at her sudden words that she had no control over.
A crackling sound is what brought both Shippo and Rin back to reality. A blackish blue light mixed hungrily with an orangish yellowish red light. Both powers blanketing the land started to mix widely into a whirl wind.
'What the hell?' Shippo thought as he watched the powers roll together. Rin's barrier faded until only she was left standing in the grass staring in front of her at the unusual scene before her. The powers collided, mixed, and spun growling angrily at one another. That's when... a light, huge, and bright rolled out into the sky. First it soared up, up, up then burst. The whole gray sky lit up yellow a very bright yellow.
Rin screamed falling back and shielding her eyes with her arm. Shippo gasped with a small yelp as an unknown forced threw him to a tree crushing him into it.
All was quiet
Nothing was seen..................................nothing
Note: I was going to stop it here but I bet most of you if not ALL of you are kind of like........stare.......huh? So I'll continue a little bit further.
Shippo's eyes rolled everything so blurry and out of focus. 'What happened' his mind question as he by reflex sniffed the air. The smell of smoke thick strong black smoke but known to be seen. The smell of energy and wind, then the smell of (her) the girl he couldn't help but act friendly towards lingered about in his nose. His stomach sunk when everything came into focus. The soft grass now poky and stiff, the tree trunks ash color some a charcoal color. Shippo's instincts bit at him wildly, 'where's Rin?' he gasped as he jumped to his feet.
He jogged a little ways looking frantically around. He wanted to call for her but didn't as he raced through the open land. His heart pounded and ached for her as he rushed around. He could use his nose to find her if he had the patients.
That's when a moan came from the woods. Shippo turned to see a once graceful tender looking body now lying limply against a boulder. 'So much she has been through and now this.' Shippo rushed to her side but didn't get to close. Her scent was the same but there was something wild about her features.
Her hair blue really dark blue almost black. Her eyes a dark green and her skin pale snow white. Shippo studied both body and smell but she seemed the same in scent wise anyway.
'Did she become a demon?' Shippo thought as he pondered the thought of Rin transforming, 'no that's not possible.'
Rin started to moan a little before fluttering her eyes open. It took her awhile to adjust her eyes; she saw an outline of someone familiar... Shippo? She thought as she focused that's when he came into full view Shippo stared down with a worried expression. "Shippo... what happened?" Rin sat up only to lay herself back down. Her head went dizzy and suddenly her stomach started to turn.
"I'm not sure... I don't remember." Shippo leaned down helping Rin up on a pair of wobbly legs. Rin swayed trying to keep herself from vomiting. She leaned against Shippo for support making Shippo blush only slightly before scooping her up bridal style. It didn't surprise her that much in fact she was thankful that he was carrying her.
Shippo walked easily through the woods not sure where he was going but he decided to allow his feet to take him wherever. They ended up near a river bed. Setting Rin down carefully by the bank Shippo walked over to the water for a nice LONG drink.
Sorry to end it here leaving you all confused but... I don't know I just wanted to let you all know that I'm back so I'm submitting a new chapter.
Oh yeah and while looking over the reviews I found that someone FINALLY! Found my not mistake... but HUGE piece of how and why souta is still young. Don't worry I purposely did that and was wondering when someone would hit me for that one lol. If you continue reading you'll find out just why Souta is younger than Rin. Also Sesshomaru is it least 200 years old. Or it least that's what I hear (I don't know for sure) is it because demon life spans are longer than humans? And if that's true than why are Rin and Shippo close to the same age? ALL THIS WILL BE ANSWERED DON'T WORRY!!!!!!
Changes
Rin felt power burn and tear through her bones. She winced sealing her eyes tighter. She didn't want to open them she knew that would only get her distracted. Shippo took a step back completely taken aback, 'this girl can't be human.'
Her whole body seemed to have glowed. Her clothes and skin alike started to shift from a bright gold shine down to a soft blue light. Tenseiga glowed a bright and powerful light its tip still resting against the ground. Shippo's senses went nuts first he smelled her scent mingling in the power and now it was as if she WAS the power. His whole body tensed suddenly feeling both fear of what was to happen to her and fear of what was happening to his own self. He suddenly wanted to grab her warm body and pulling her away from this.
As Rin fought all the burning pain it took just to bring the ones she loved back. Shippo fought his instincts demanding him to encircle her waist breaking her away from this, what his demon instincts called danger.
Shippo jumped a little at the sound of Rin's yelp. Her eyes still remained close her hands tightened around the tenseiga and the power continued to brush over her.
"Sess...Sess...Sesshomaru" Rin squeaked as she pushed the power through the sword. Shippo eventually had to turn his head, just looking at the light made him wince. Shippo's mind debated back and forth as to why it was so hard for Rin to focus, why was she concentrating really hard? Is it because she is human so it's harder to control the power of tenseiga?
Shippo's eyes bounced from the ground back at the blinding light then to the ground again. 'Will she die if she keeps this up? If she does then... I'm the one to blame.' That's when Shippo shot his head back up at Rin. He ignored the light as he ran forward reaching out a hand. Rin's energy didn't let Shippo make it far; before he had even reached a foot within distance Rin's bright energy shoved him back. It didn't burn him or leave him marks it simply pushed him roughly back.
The second Shippo landed he jumped to his feet trying a second time. He again, didn't make it far. This continued for quite some time trying to save Rin from what his instincts told him was 'danger.'
Rin's whole figure started to change. Her hair went from dark pretty brown to a heavy blue. Her eyes that once shimmered dark deep brown now slowly tainted green darker and darker. Shippo didn't stop he continued to body slam into what now became a barrier trying his hardest to reach the one inside. "Rin! RIN!"
He yelled as he slashed his claws the way inuyasha use to against the barrier wall. Rin grew weak feeling as her energy seemed to have drained. Rin shivered preparing herself for her legs to give way. Even as she fell to her knees inside the warm barrier she still refused to let go of tenseiga. "I don't understand" She breathed rapidly as her fingers loosened from tenseiga's handle. "Why can't I bring... Sesshomaru back?"
Even though Rin wanted to cry tears stubbornly refused to fall. "Sesshomaru, I failed you" Rin bowed her head. 'I can't see the demons, I can't control tenseiga's power, I'm worthless.'
A flash back of Sesshomaru, and Jaken trickled across Rin's mind. It was in the days of when she was so much brighter. She wasn't cold and careless like her warm Sesshomaru acted. She was happy, hyper, and joyful. She played with HUGE smiles on her face, she never got bored never, she could always entertain herself by doing something. Even if that meant irritating the hell out of Jaken by singing or dancing.
Then the days of growing without anybody came. She turned older and started to dread on the past. Mother, father, older brother, and even Sesshomaru all seemed to have left. Rin's bow deepened.
"Why tenseiga, why won't you work?"
Rin looked out from the corner of her eye to see... Shippo... yes Shippo banging against the barrier she somehow created. "Shippo?" Rin squinted against the barriers light focusing so she had better view as to what the annoying fox was doing. She watched as he threw himself into the force field crying out wildly against it. Rin frowned "fool" she muttered. She then looked out to see the field of which all was lost. Still no sign of demons to slash at, "Why, why can't I use tenseiga?" Rin held tenseiga's blade up rotating it to study its features.
"Tenseiga allow me to use you, and I shall bring back your master." Tenseiga continued to glow but Rin didn't feel the pulse she was hoping for. 'Does tenseiga not like me?' Rin thought as she stared at the blade. It wasn't long before Rin felt her strength return allowing her to rise to her feet. She hadn't even tried and she was able to rise.
Rin pointed the blade out in front of herself again closing her eyes. 'Please Tenseiga'
Shippo had, had enough he couldn't stand his senses screaming at him anymore this was something he had to do. He braced tetsusaiga in front of him shielding his eyes 'please tetsusaiga.' Shippo hoped that this wouldn't hurt the one inside but it would it least break that damn barrier. He knew it was bad... it was already making Rin change.
'Please' both Rin and Shippo thought at the same time then pulled back throwing there swords forward hoping to slash there targets.
Shippo's heart thumped widely as he yelled the legendary words "Kaze no Kizu!"
Rin hesitated as she through the invisible slash "Return the souls!"
Both keepers of the swords tensed as the powers glided. Tenseiga's invisible slash left the barrier and through the field. Tetsusaiga's yellow blinding light scratched against Rin's barrier. Rin felt her barrier shake, fear rose at her, and without think not even knowing why she did it... she rose her hand up towards the wall "stay out!" she screamed. Not knowing why she screamed, not even knowing if anyone was trying to come in to say 'stay out' in the first place.
Rin's barrier reflected tetsusaiga's power pushing it away into the field. Shippo frowned seeing that the barrier reflected the attack. Rin's eyes widened in surprise at her sudden words that she had no control over.
A crackling sound is what brought both Shippo and Rin back to reality. A blackish blue light mixed hungrily with an orangish yellowish red light. Both powers blanketing the land started to mix widely into a whirl wind.
'What the hell?' Shippo thought as he watched the powers roll together. Rin's barrier faded until only she was left standing in the grass staring in front of her at the unusual scene before her. The powers collided, mixed, and spun growling angrily at one another. That's when... a light, huge, and bright rolled out into the sky. First it soared up, up, up then burst. The whole gray sky lit up yellow a very bright yellow.
Rin screamed falling back and shielding her eyes with her arm. Shippo gasped with a small yelp as an unknown forced threw him to a tree crushing him into it.
All was quiet
Nothing was seen..................................nothing
Note: I was going to stop it here but I bet most of you if not ALL of you are kind of like........stare.......huh? So I'll continue a little bit further.
Shippo's eyes rolled everything so blurry and out of focus. 'What happened' his mind question as he by reflex sniffed the air. The smell of smoke thick strong black smoke but known to be seen. The smell of energy and wind, then the smell of (her) the girl he couldn't help but act friendly towards lingered about in his nose. His stomach sunk when everything came into focus. The soft grass now poky and stiff, the tree trunks ash color some a charcoal color. Shippo's instincts bit at him wildly, 'where's Rin?' he gasped as he jumped to his feet.
He jogged a little ways looking frantically around. He wanted to call for her but didn't as he raced through the open land. His heart pounded and ached for her as he rushed around. He could use his nose to find her if he had the patients.
That's when a moan came from the woods. Shippo turned to see a once graceful tender looking body now lying limply against a boulder. 'So much she has been through and now this.' Shippo rushed to her side but didn't get to close. Her scent was the same but there was something wild about her features.
Her hair blue really dark blue almost black. Her eyes a dark green and her skin pale snow white. Shippo studied both body and smell but she seemed the same in scent wise anyway.
'Did she become a demon?' Shippo thought as he pondered the thought of Rin transforming, 'no that's not possible.'
Rin started to moan a little before fluttering her eyes open. It took her awhile to adjust her eyes; she saw an outline of someone familiar... Shippo? She thought as she focused that's when he came into full view Shippo stared down with a worried expression. "Shippo... what happened?" Rin sat up only to lay herself back down. Her head went dizzy and suddenly her stomach started to turn.
"I'm not sure... I don't remember." Shippo leaned down helping Rin up on a pair of wobbly legs. Rin swayed trying to keep herself from vomiting. She leaned against Shippo for support making Shippo blush only slightly before scooping her up bridal style. It didn't surprise her that much in fact she was thankful that he was carrying her.
Shippo walked easily through the woods not sure where he was going but he decided to allow his feet to take him wherever. They ended up near a river bed. Setting Rin down carefully by the bank Shippo walked over to the water for a nice LONG drink.
Sorry to end it here leaving you all confused but... I don't know I just wanted to let you all know that I'm back so I'm submitting a new chapter.