Monday, November 24, 2003
Hey everyone I hope you liked the last chapter. Sorry it to a while to type what I wanted to put down. Well here is the next chapter.
Just incase some of ya'll don't know:
' ' means thoughts for example Sarah thought, 'Why does he act that way.'
" " means accually talking for example Sarah Said, "Why do you act that way."
I just thought I should tell you so you don't get it mixed up. *The boy in the last chapter his name will be DeJay Talia the girl with the puppy dog face her name will be Phan Talia. Oh ya they're twins. ***************
He everyone sorry for not posting sooner. I have tried to type down what I thought but when I read it over........ I didn't like it very much. I mean don't get me wrong or anything I liked it but I had second thoughts. Well instead of listening to me blabber on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on *takes deep breath* and on and on and on and on and on and on and................................... ************ LAST TIME ON 'CAN'T YOU SEE'
'I just wanna be alone. But for some strange reason...... I want him to stay with me.' She kept her head down.
"Um." he thought aloud. He looked over to Kaoru and then over to them not being able to decide.
Kaoru stood up and," Here I will decide for you!" She grabbed her tray in her hands and walked over to the trash can to empty it. She then turned around and walked out to wait for the bell to ring. ****************
~~WARNING LOTS A FLIRTING~~
Chapter 4
Kenshin looked over at the door with sorrow in his eyes. "Kaoru." Kenshin whispered.
"Oh, leave her be Kenshin my man." DeJay said while slapping him on the back. "Why would anyone wanna be friends with her anyways.
(A/N: As you can see Kenshin is popular.)
"Kenshin?" Phan said while coming up behind him and hugging him. "What Phan?" Kenshin said looking at the tile. "Why were you going to sit with her instead of m- US!" Phan said keeping her position behind him. She stood up on her tiptoes to see his face.
This took Kenshin by surprised,"I, um, um, I-" *Luckly a Teacher comes up.* "Okay kids if you are going to be acting like that then take it outside the cafeteria. Esspecially you Ms.Talia."
"Oh sorry Mrs.Tojku." Phan said. "Come on let's go outside KenKen- San." Phan smiled.
"KenKen-San?" DeJay was confused.
"Call me by my name Phan!" Kenshin said Sharply.
"But Kenshin."She pouted ,"You don't like me, do you!?" She started fake crying.
"Oh, know Phan it isn't that." He softly said. "Y-you would. Rather be w-ith.That g-girl K-aoru. Ri-right?" She said running outside happy with the performance she just made.
Kenshin yelled after her, "PHAN! COME BACK!" He yelled thinking the whole thing was really real.
"Okay?" DeJay said being confused with all this not understanding a thing.
"Mr.Kenshin Shinta Himura! Don't yell in the Cafeteria unless you want Detention. This is your one and only warning!"
"But,but?" She gave him a glare. "Yes, Mrs.Tojku." He looked down at the tile again.
'This just isn't my day. Is it.' He walked over to the trash cans with DeJay following him.
"Kenshin?"
"What is it DeJay I am not in the mood."
"Oh, nevermind then." He said sadly.
"No,no what is it. Sorry."
"Do you like Kaoru or something?"
*Shocked* He jolted his head up. "NO! I mean no. Ew why would I like her?" He stared at DeJay.
"Oh good. At first I thought you liked her because you seemed to be I dunno attracted to her." He stared over towards him. "I mean you were going to sit next to her and not sit with us.
"OKAY,okay, I get it for gosh sakes!" Kenshin sharply said.
"Whoa you really scared me. I was all like,........I dunno scared for you man. Losing your reputation over a girl."
Kenshin and DeJay walked outside.
******Kaoru******
Kaoru sat down in a corner by herself. 'Why do they act that way about me. Why what did I do.'
Just then a girl came walking by with black hair and blonde spots in it with the front section put up in tiny pony-tails. "Hello." She said standing next to Kaoru with a accent and a small smile.
Kaoru looked up at her and examied the way she was dressed. "Hi." Kaoru said not to nicely.
The girl noticed but didn't really seem to mind. She kept the smile on her face and retorted, "Are you new here to this school? My name is Kilita. What is yours?" She sat down looking at Kaoru.
"Yes, I am knew to the school. My name is Kaoru." She said feeling more comfortable.
"So what class do you have next? And what locker are you?" Kilita questioned.
"Ummmm let me see.........," Kaoru stood up to get her schedule out of her pocket. "I have Science, Mr. Gentaro, Room 17 next. And for my locker it is number 71."
"That is..........." Just then the Bell rang for the next class.
"HEY KILITA COME ON! WALK WITH ME!!" One of Kilita's friends yelled.
"Hang on Harro I, "She turned around only to find I huge crowd blocking her veiw, "have to talk to someone." She said softly, "Okay I'm coming!" She yelled.
Kaoru walked by herself to her locker 71 to find that she was a bottom one. "Okay lets see here." She took out her schedule again to see her cobination, "2-16-34." She said aloud.
"Oh so now I know your combiation and your locker number." Kaoru turned around to see .........
Phan walked into the bathroom carring her books. "He everyone!" She said smiling one of her sweet smiles to the girls.
"Hey Phan!" One of her girl-friends yelled.
"Yo Sumiko!" She smiled.
"So have you yet?" She questioned with a just-dying-know-face.
"Know I haven't yet." She frowned.
"Ahhh, why!!" Sumiko quetily yelled.
"Because I am still trying to find the right moment to make my move!"
"It has taken this long for you to." She put her hands on her hips.
"SuSu,"
"OH DON'T SUSU ME!"She threw her hands in the air.
"SuSu, SuSu, it has only been 4 days." She glared at Sumiko.
"I know, but I can't take the suspense, it-it- is just killing me!"
"Okay, okay. I will do it at the dance if not then before." Phan smiled at her friend. (A/N: I haven't set a date or chapter for the dance so please bare w/ me.)
"Okay good!" She squeled........................
Kenshin turned around by his locker to hear a girl call his name.
"K-Kenshin wait for me!" Rose called.
Rose was a girl about 5'3 with long blackish-brown hair with red highlights in it. She was a big flirt but not as big as one as Phan. She was semi-shy but not really.
"Huh? Oh, hey Rose." Kenshin smiled looking partly down at her.
"Well someone doesn't seem very happy to see me." She gave a small fake whimper.
"No it isn't you Rose." He said.
"Oh well then what is it?" She sounded concerned.
"I can't tell you." Now he sounded serious.
"Oh you know me. I won't tell anybody. You know me when I say I'm 'mhp', I'm 'mhp'." She said copying Sid off of 'Ice Age'.
That made Kenshin laugh.
"See you can trust me." She said elbowing him in the side giggling while so.
"I don't wanna talk about it okay? Sorry." He kinda glared at Rose making his eyes turn amberish color.
Rose noticing the sudden change, "Whoa don't get all mad at me now okay? I'm sorry, just forget I ever asked.
He went nack to normal. "No, no, I am the one who should be apoligizing. Sorry I never should have made it into such a big deal."
"Ya, tell me about it." She said aloud.
"Hey, what is that supposed to mean." he said starting to walk off with his books for American History.
"It means,....hmmmmm how should I put this........ that you make such a big deal out of eveything she laughed.
"I do not make a big deal out of everything." He said sort of loud that some sixth grade girls turned around to look at him, then back and started to giggle and talk.
"Well I guess I will talk to you later. Bye." He said stopping in front of his class...........
"Ya okay. Well c-ya lata then. Idios Amigo!" She wave while turning around.
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Well I hope you like that chapter. Did I make it longer than the others. Oh ya I want your honest opinion. If I don't get that many Reviews for it I will Remove it.
I have been thinking about removing my stories. What do you think?? =^.^=
Hey everyone I hope you liked the last chapter. Sorry it to a while to type what I wanted to put down. Well here is the next chapter.
Just incase some of ya'll don't know:
' ' means thoughts for example Sarah thought, 'Why does he act that way.'
" " means accually talking for example Sarah Said, "Why do you act that way."
I just thought I should tell you so you don't get it mixed up. *The boy in the last chapter his name will be DeJay Talia the girl with the puppy dog face her name will be Phan Talia. Oh ya they're twins. ***************
He everyone sorry for not posting sooner. I have tried to type down what I thought but when I read it over........ I didn't like it very much. I mean don't get me wrong or anything I liked it but I had second thoughts. Well instead of listening to me blabber on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on *takes deep breath* and on and on and on and on and on and on and................................... ************ LAST TIME ON 'CAN'T YOU SEE'
'I just wanna be alone. But for some strange reason...... I want him to stay with me.' She kept her head down.
"Um." he thought aloud. He looked over to Kaoru and then over to them not being able to decide.
Kaoru stood up and," Here I will decide for you!" She grabbed her tray in her hands and walked over to the trash can to empty it. She then turned around and walked out to wait for the bell to ring. ****************
~~WARNING LOTS A FLIRTING~~
Chapter 4
Kenshin looked over at the door with sorrow in his eyes. "Kaoru." Kenshin whispered.
"Oh, leave her be Kenshin my man." DeJay said while slapping him on the back. "Why would anyone wanna be friends with her anyways.
(A/N: As you can see Kenshin is popular.)
"Kenshin?" Phan said while coming up behind him and hugging him. "What Phan?" Kenshin said looking at the tile. "Why were you going to sit with her instead of m- US!" Phan said keeping her position behind him. She stood up on her tiptoes to see his face.
This took Kenshin by surprised,"I, um, um, I-" *Luckly a Teacher comes up.* "Okay kids if you are going to be acting like that then take it outside the cafeteria. Esspecially you Ms.Talia."
"Oh sorry Mrs.Tojku." Phan said. "Come on let's go outside KenKen- San." Phan smiled.
"KenKen-San?" DeJay was confused.
"Call me by my name Phan!" Kenshin said Sharply.
"But Kenshin."She pouted ,"You don't like me, do you!?" She started fake crying.
"Oh, know Phan it isn't that." He softly said. "Y-you would. Rather be w-ith.That g-girl K-aoru. Ri-right?" She said running outside happy with the performance she just made.
Kenshin yelled after her, "PHAN! COME BACK!" He yelled thinking the whole thing was really real.
"Okay?" DeJay said being confused with all this not understanding a thing.
"Mr.Kenshin Shinta Himura! Don't yell in the Cafeteria unless you want Detention. This is your one and only warning!"
"But,but?" She gave him a glare. "Yes, Mrs.Tojku." He looked down at the tile again.
'This just isn't my day. Is it.' He walked over to the trash cans with DeJay following him.
"Kenshin?"
"What is it DeJay I am not in the mood."
"Oh, nevermind then." He said sadly.
"No,no what is it. Sorry."
"Do you like Kaoru or something?"
*Shocked* He jolted his head up. "NO! I mean no. Ew why would I like her?" He stared at DeJay.
"Oh good. At first I thought you liked her because you seemed to be I dunno attracted to her." He stared over towards him. "I mean you were going to sit next to her and not sit with us.
"OKAY,okay, I get it for gosh sakes!" Kenshin sharply said.
"Whoa you really scared me. I was all like,........I dunno scared for you man. Losing your reputation over a girl."
Kenshin and DeJay walked outside.
******Kaoru******
Kaoru sat down in a corner by herself. 'Why do they act that way about me. Why what did I do.'
Just then a girl came walking by with black hair and blonde spots in it with the front section put up in tiny pony-tails. "Hello." She said standing next to Kaoru with a accent and a small smile.
Kaoru looked up at her and examied the way she was dressed. "Hi." Kaoru said not to nicely.
The girl noticed but didn't really seem to mind. She kept the smile on her face and retorted, "Are you new here to this school? My name is Kilita. What is yours?" She sat down looking at Kaoru.
"Yes, I am knew to the school. My name is Kaoru." She said feeling more comfortable.
"So what class do you have next? And what locker are you?" Kilita questioned.
"Ummmm let me see.........," Kaoru stood up to get her schedule out of her pocket. "I have Science, Mr. Gentaro, Room 17 next. And for my locker it is number 71."
"That is..........." Just then the Bell rang for the next class.
"HEY KILITA COME ON! WALK WITH ME!!" One of Kilita's friends yelled.
"Hang on Harro I, "She turned around only to find I huge crowd blocking her veiw, "have to talk to someone." She said softly, "Okay I'm coming!" She yelled.
Kaoru walked by herself to her locker 71 to find that she was a bottom one. "Okay lets see here." She took out her schedule again to see her cobination, "2-16-34." She said aloud.
"Oh so now I know your combiation and your locker number." Kaoru turned around to see .........
Phan walked into the bathroom carring her books. "He everyone!" She said smiling one of her sweet smiles to the girls.
"Hey Phan!" One of her girl-friends yelled.
"Yo Sumiko!" She smiled.
"So have you yet?" She questioned with a just-dying-know-face.
"Know I haven't yet." She frowned.
"Ahhh, why!!" Sumiko quetily yelled.
"Because I am still trying to find the right moment to make my move!"
"It has taken this long for you to." She put her hands on her hips.
"SuSu,"
"OH DON'T SUSU ME!"She threw her hands in the air.
"SuSu, SuSu, it has only been 4 days." She glared at Sumiko.
"I know, but I can't take the suspense, it-it- is just killing me!"
"Okay, okay. I will do it at the dance if not then before." Phan smiled at her friend. (A/N: I haven't set a date or chapter for the dance so please bare w/ me.)
"Okay good!" She squeled........................
Kenshin turned around by his locker to hear a girl call his name.
"K-Kenshin wait for me!" Rose called.
Rose was a girl about 5'3 with long blackish-brown hair with red highlights in it. She was a big flirt but not as big as one as Phan. She was semi-shy but not really.
"Huh? Oh, hey Rose." Kenshin smiled looking partly down at her.
"Well someone doesn't seem very happy to see me." She gave a small fake whimper.
"No it isn't you Rose." He said.
"Oh well then what is it?" She sounded concerned.
"I can't tell you." Now he sounded serious.
"Oh you know me. I won't tell anybody. You know me when I say I'm 'mhp', I'm 'mhp'." She said copying Sid off of 'Ice Age'.
That made Kenshin laugh.
"See you can trust me." She said elbowing him in the side giggling while so.
"I don't wanna talk about it okay? Sorry." He kinda glared at Rose making his eyes turn amberish color.
Rose noticing the sudden change, "Whoa don't get all mad at me now okay? I'm sorry, just forget I ever asked.
He went nack to normal. "No, no, I am the one who should be apoligizing. Sorry I never should have made it into such a big deal."
"Ya, tell me about it." She said aloud.
"Hey, what is that supposed to mean." he said starting to walk off with his books for American History.
"It means,....hmmmmm how should I put this........ that you make such a big deal out of eveything she laughed.
"I do not make a big deal out of everything." He said sort of loud that some sixth grade girls turned around to look at him, then back and started to giggle and talk.
"Well I guess I will talk to you later. Bye." He said stopping in front of his class...........
"Ya okay. Well c-ya lata then. Idios Amigo!" She wave while turning around.
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Well I hope you like that chapter. Did I make it longer than the others. Oh ya I want your honest opinion. If I don't get that many Reviews for it I will Remove it.
I have been thinking about removing my stories. What do you think?? =^.^=