Goner
chapter one
Ryou Bakura opened his eyes. The day was young, and Ryou had a feeling that this day was not
going to be like most days.. He had not been feeling too well, and he hadn't spoken to his Jami
for quite awhile, not that his Jami wanted him to. Nowadays he felt distant and remote from his
Jami.
Suddenly Ryou felt a disgusting rush to his head. He jumped off his bed and rushed to the sink,
since it was the closest thing there, and well...vomited away. He felt very light headed, and
couldn't help but notice it was blood that he puking, although it was quite ironic since it didn't
look like he had much blood at all. He slid down into the floor, hardly able to breath. He couldn't
find out what was wrong with him, or why he felt so debilitated. He could hardly keep his eyes
open. He now was bent over. He started to sweat like mad. He thought he was going to die. All
was going through his mind was goodbye world, hello hell. His hand clutched his chest, where
his heart was, only because it was beating incredibly fast. A few more breathes, and he suddenly
lost consciousness.
Ryou opened his eyes, not knowing where he was. But when he looked around, he noticed he
was in the hospital, and even weirder was that there was a man he had never met before at his
side. The man had a tan, and Ryou couldn't really figure out what colour the hair was because he was wearing a hat. Yes, he was also wearing a dark long coat. Jami no Bakura felt something strange about this man, and noticed he was quite interested in Ryou, so Jami decided to keep a heavy look out. Ryou could hardly talk, but managed to ask the person who he was. The man suddenly looked down, at Ryou.
" that was a close one." said the man, not answering Ryou's question. "It's a good thing you're
still alive. Your friend is waiting for you at the door, shall I go get her?"
Ryou nodded his head. He didn't like being alone in hospitals, and his jami could care less.
When he looked ahead of him, he saw Miho Nozaka enter the room.
"Ryou!" she cried as she went to hug him.
"H–hi.cough" as Ryou coughed he could feel a burning pain in his throat.
He couldn't remember the last time he's seen her, it's been just ever so long. Maybe she was just
in town and heard the news. Yup, she was a real friend.
"Oh Ryou, don't bother talking...it seems like you're in real pain." And that was true. She gave
him a gentle friendly hug. Ryou patted her back. But he still had a lot in his mind. Who was that
man? Did he just decide to go in Ryou's house and bring him to the hospital? If not, then who
brought him here? How did Miho find out about him?
"How d-did you cough..erm..how did you get here Miho?" he asked.
"I was just in town..."she said, smiling.
"Well, im glad you could make it here." said Ryou, smiling back. Although, he was still just ever so curious as to how she found out about him being in the hospital. He sat up, and felt a bit better. He wasn't surprised to see only Miho. His other so called "friends" probably decided to play that card game. As time passed by, Miho left, and his Jami wanted to escape from this place like mad! So he took over Ryou's body. He decided to jump out the window, and just run. he knew that "man" was somewhere close by. He could sense him, and in a way, that scared him the most...no...what scared him the most is that Bakura felt that, that "man" knew he could sense him. Soon, he felt very uncomfortable of his surrounding. That "man" was close by. A bit too close. He felt a hand on his shoulder. It was 'him'.
"Ah...."said the man, smiling a devilish smile. "You must be....the other side." the man did not look at Bakura in the eyes, but he looked at the millennium ring, which contained the Jami's spirit.
"Don't touch me!" said Bakura, rather furiously. He just knew that there was something wrong with this guy, and that all should fear him. "Who the hell are you?!"
"What you see is what you get! Nothing more to say."
"Im not joking around here! Your name!" and at that moment, the stranger jumped into the air, and disappeared with a puff of smoke. Bakura stepped back, shaken, and decided to go back into his soul room for now.
Ryou suddenly found himself in the middle of nowhere, well....somewhere..., but he didn't know where. He understood though..why he was there. He was taken over by the soul, the very soul that is trapped inside the millennium ring. Ryou knew that the only thing to do was to let it go. He managed to get a taxi, and get away with a free ride home. (He must be so proud of himself.)
Once he got home, he had felt something from his Jami he had never ever felt before in his life (from his Jami.) Which was fear, and what was amazing, his jami wanted to speak with him. He saw a sort of shadow from his jami.
"Baka!"
"What! W-what did I do?!"
"Hmph...why don't you stick of for your self! Don't you sense this uncomfortable feeling from that man?!"
"Oh, you mean....but no..I don't! And why all of a sudden, after the great silent treatment, you decide to talk to me!"
"I don't want that man to get a hold of 'the ring'."
"Oh, I see! This is for your sake!"
Bakura knew that this would be the outcome of the conversation.
I shall put chapter 2 soon..please send me reviews! Please and thank-you.
chapter one
Ryou Bakura opened his eyes. The day was young, and Ryou had a feeling that this day was not
going to be like most days.. He had not been feeling too well, and he hadn't spoken to his Jami
for quite awhile, not that his Jami wanted him to. Nowadays he felt distant and remote from his
Jami.
Suddenly Ryou felt a disgusting rush to his head. He jumped off his bed and rushed to the sink,
since it was the closest thing there, and well...vomited away. He felt very light headed, and
couldn't help but notice it was blood that he puking, although it was quite ironic since it didn't
look like he had much blood at all. He slid down into the floor, hardly able to breath. He couldn't
find out what was wrong with him, or why he felt so debilitated. He could hardly keep his eyes
open. He now was bent over. He started to sweat like mad. He thought he was going to die. All
was going through his mind was goodbye world, hello hell. His hand clutched his chest, where
his heart was, only because it was beating incredibly fast. A few more breathes, and he suddenly
lost consciousness.
Ryou opened his eyes, not knowing where he was. But when he looked around, he noticed he
was in the hospital, and even weirder was that there was a man he had never met before at his
side. The man had a tan, and Ryou couldn't really figure out what colour the hair was because he was wearing a hat. Yes, he was also wearing a dark long coat. Jami no Bakura felt something strange about this man, and noticed he was quite interested in Ryou, so Jami decided to keep a heavy look out. Ryou could hardly talk, but managed to ask the person who he was. The man suddenly looked down, at Ryou.
" that was a close one." said the man, not answering Ryou's question. "It's a good thing you're
still alive. Your friend is waiting for you at the door, shall I go get her?"
Ryou nodded his head. He didn't like being alone in hospitals, and his jami could care less.
When he looked ahead of him, he saw Miho Nozaka enter the room.
"Ryou!" she cried as she went to hug him.
"H–hi.cough" as Ryou coughed he could feel a burning pain in his throat.
He couldn't remember the last time he's seen her, it's been just ever so long. Maybe she was just
in town and heard the news. Yup, she was a real friend.
"Oh Ryou, don't bother talking...it seems like you're in real pain." And that was true. She gave
him a gentle friendly hug. Ryou patted her back. But he still had a lot in his mind. Who was that
man? Did he just decide to go in Ryou's house and bring him to the hospital? If not, then who
brought him here? How did Miho find out about him?
"How d-did you cough..erm..how did you get here Miho?" he asked.
"I was just in town..."she said, smiling.
"Well, im glad you could make it here." said Ryou, smiling back. Although, he was still just ever so curious as to how she found out about him being in the hospital. He sat up, and felt a bit better. He wasn't surprised to see only Miho. His other so called "friends" probably decided to play that card game. As time passed by, Miho left, and his Jami wanted to escape from this place like mad! So he took over Ryou's body. He decided to jump out the window, and just run. he knew that "man" was somewhere close by. He could sense him, and in a way, that scared him the most...no...what scared him the most is that Bakura felt that, that "man" knew he could sense him. Soon, he felt very uncomfortable of his surrounding. That "man" was close by. A bit too close. He felt a hand on his shoulder. It was 'him'.
"Ah...."said the man, smiling a devilish smile. "You must be....the other side." the man did not look at Bakura in the eyes, but he looked at the millennium ring, which contained the Jami's spirit.
"Don't touch me!" said Bakura, rather furiously. He just knew that there was something wrong with this guy, and that all should fear him. "Who the hell are you?!"
"What you see is what you get! Nothing more to say."
"Im not joking around here! Your name!" and at that moment, the stranger jumped into the air, and disappeared with a puff of smoke. Bakura stepped back, shaken, and decided to go back into his soul room for now.
Ryou suddenly found himself in the middle of nowhere, well....somewhere..., but he didn't know where. He understood though..why he was there. He was taken over by the soul, the very soul that is trapped inside the millennium ring. Ryou knew that the only thing to do was to let it go. He managed to get a taxi, and get away with a free ride home. (He must be so proud of himself.)
Once he got home, he had felt something from his Jami he had never ever felt before in his life (from his Jami.) Which was fear, and what was amazing, his jami wanted to speak with him. He saw a sort of shadow from his jami.
"Baka!"
"What! W-what did I do?!"
"Hmph...why don't you stick of for your self! Don't you sense this uncomfortable feeling from that man?!"
"Oh, you mean....but no..I don't! And why all of a sudden, after the great silent treatment, you decide to talk to me!"
"I don't want that man to get a hold of 'the ring'."
"Oh, I see! This is for your sake!"
Bakura knew that this would be the outcome of the conversation.
I shall put chapter 2 soon..please send me reviews! Please and thank-you.