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Chapter 2.....
"Thank you....."
The voice of gratitude flew with the wind.... mixing into the air ..fading away to humans ears.. but demons for miles could have heard it... one in particular...
Did that come from nearby?.. Strange......He didnt sense anything close. There was a loud thud from kicking Jaken into the tree. The pathetic servant had lost his ward once again. Such a simple task and he failed. ...I need a new servant... He looked at the batterd toad demon. ....But good help is hard to find these days.. mental sigh
Sniffing the air around him the lord of the Western Lands turned in the direction of the well. Following the scent of daisies. Once there he came across his ward in a human female's arms.
...That scent...cherry blossems and jasmine...pleasing to the nose but the smell of dirt and bones.... She's the hanyou's female...but why is she here alone? where is the halfbreed?.... Sniffing in slight disgust of Kagome's choice of friends and of Kikyo's and Inu Yasha's scent on her, he smelt fresh tears... I dont want anything to do with this...
"Rin..."
Kagome looked at the small child.. She's been holding her for about an hour now. Rocking the small girl in her lap, running her hands through her hair. ....She reminds me of Shippou...
"Is pretty lady still sad?" Rin asked. "No, not anymore because of you..hey....... What are you doing here? Its dangerous for you to go into the forest at night. Dont you think your mother and father will worry?" As Kagome asked that, Rin remotely stiffened. "Rin dont have parents. Rin is lost and cant find Sesshomaru-sama."
....So her name is Rin... and she's an orphan, like Shippou... WAIT did she just say Sesshomaru??....
"Rin..."
At the sound of his voice Kagome froze. Rin on the other hand jumped down and squealed.
"Sesshomaru-sama!! Rin was soooo Lost!! But Rin found Pretty Lady and she was crying so Rin hugged her and then she hugged Rin back and now Sesshomaru-sama found RIN!!!
Kagome's uneasiness went away and sweatdropped from all of Rin's babbling but slowly turned around to face them both. She let a light gasp escape her lips at the sight she saw. Sesshomaru was standing there in the moonlight tall and proud, GLARING AT HER. He would have been enchantingly beautiful if he wasnt staring at her like she was Jaken.
....WHAT DID I DO??..... She was about to say that some people have staring problems but he cut her off. "Silence wench Im in no mood for your female bickering." That riled Kagome up. Forgetting about her emotional turmoil and that Sesshomaru was a dangerous Taiyoukai, Kagome threw a rock at him.
"WENCH!" The rock that Kagome threw hit him in the armor which irritated him greatly. He would have killed her already if it wasnt for Rin standing there...looking ready to giggle. "MY NAME ISNT WENCH! ITS KAGOME!!" Her loud voice was booming in his ears now. That bitch dare yell at me? Is she really so foolish and want to die so badly.
He was about to say that but... "KAGOME-NE-CHAN HAS SUCH A PRETTY NAME!! IT MATCHES KAGOME-CHAN BECAUSE KAGOME-CHAN IS SOO PRETTY!! RIGHT SESSHOMARU-SAMA??" Rin yelled out which made Sesshomaru's ears twitch again.
"I find Jaken more attractive than this human bit-wench." ...thats a lie because you know that Jaken will never look good as long as he is alive or dead.... and she isnt half bad looking either...mental slap.. I need to relax.... "Rin go to Jaken and stay with him." "But I want to stay with Kagome-chan!"she whined.
The insult of Jaken being better looking then HER!! And that he was about to call her a bitch made her eyes twitch ..OH MY GODD!!... That riled her up even more. She was beyond pissed. But Rin's next question cut her mood for a little while.
"Can Kagome-chan come with us?" That got the Taikoukai dissed. His ward taking a liking to his hanyou half-brother's wench sounded like trouble. "No Rin-chan, I dont think I will go." Kagome whispered softly. "Oh..okay..Kagome..."Sounding sad and dissapointed Rin started to walk into the forest behind Sesshomaru. Kagome felt bad so she thought of the only thing that came to her mind. "But maybe I can visit you.." Kagome said trying to make Rin a little happy. It worked.
"YAAAAYY!" Rin ran and hugged Kagome and then she ran off, looking for Jaken. "You shouldnt make promises you cant keep, not when you are about to die." Sesshomaru growled out.
"Well if you think Jaken is more better looking then me maybe you keep him as a sex-slave! HAHA! HIM BETTER THEN ME?? I KNOW IM NOT THE PRETTIEST THING OUT THERE, BUT YOU MUST HAVE BAD TASTE IN WOMEN AND MEN!! I never thought you were the Gay type Sesshomaru. Evil, yes, homicidal, yes, but gay??, ewwwww...!" Kagome made a tsk tsk sound and then was about to walk out until her pinned her to the wall. ....I knew i should have kept my mouth shut!!...Kagome thought as an afterthought. ...Im dead... The only thing that came to her mind was...
"SIT!'' Kagome screamed but then shut tup once she realized it wasnt Inu Yasha. ....Did i really say that to Sesshomaru?... Inu Yasha.. While im about to die, you're probably fucking Kikyo arent you?... Tears started to fall down her cheeks.
...pathetic...is she crying for her life?..how weak.. He let her go but to his suprise she didnt slump down. She slanted on him and started to cry on his armor. She rubbed her face into his tail and held on to him. ...What is she doing?...
"SESSHOMARU!!!........."
Authors corner.. hello again people.. yeah this chapter totally sucked to me. Im not even thinking of a story! Im just typing it out. LOL.. but yeah... Anyways. Review and tell me what you think!! and yes you have to tell me if my story sucks and that i should quit!! sighs.... ja ne
REVIEW PEOPLE!!! PLEASE??? PRETTY PLEASE!!???
Chapter 2.....
"Thank you....."
The voice of gratitude flew with the wind.... mixing into the air ..fading away to humans ears.. but demons for miles could have heard it... one in particular...
Did that come from nearby?.. Strange......He didnt sense anything close. There was a loud thud from kicking Jaken into the tree. The pathetic servant had lost his ward once again. Such a simple task and he failed. ...I need a new servant... He looked at the batterd toad demon. ....But good help is hard to find these days.. mental sigh
Sniffing the air around him the lord of the Western Lands turned in the direction of the well. Following the scent of daisies. Once there he came across his ward in a human female's arms.
...That scent...cherry blossems and jasmine...pleasing to the nose but the smell of dirt and bones.... She's the hanyou's female...but why is she here alone? where is the halfbreed?.... Sniffing in slight disgust of Kagome's choice of friends and of Kikyo's and Inu Yasha's scent on her, he smelt fresh tears... I dont want anything to do with this...
"Rin..."
Kagome looked at the small child.. She's been holding her for about an hour now. Rocking the small girl in her lap, running her hands through her hair. ....She reminds me of Shippou...
"Is pretty lady still sad?" Rin asked. "No, not anymore because of you..hey....... What are you doing here? Its dangerous for you to go into the forest at night. Dont you think your mother and father will worry?" As Kagome asked that, Rin remotely stiffened. "Rin dont have parents. Rin is lost and cant find Sesshomaru-sama."
....So her name is Rin... and she's an orphan, like Shippou... WAIT did she just say Sesshomaru??....
"Rin..."
At the sound of his voice Kagome froze. Rin on the other hand jumped down and squealed.
"Sesshomaru-sama!! Rin was soooo Lost!! But Rin found Pretty Lady and she was crying so Rin hugged her and then she hugged Rin back and now Sesshomaru-sama found RIN!!!
Kagome's uneasiness went away and sweatdropped from all of Rin's babbling but slowly turned around to face them both. She let a light gasp escape her lips at the sight she saw. Sesshomaru was standing there in the moonlight tall and proud, GLARING AT HER. He would have been enchantingly beautiful if he wasnt staring at her like she was Jaken.
....WHAT DID I DO??..... She was about to say that some people have staring problems but he cut her off. "Silence wench Im in no mood for your female bickering." That riled Kagome up. Forgetting about her emotional turmoil and that Sesshomaru was a dangerous Taiyoukai, Kagome threw a rock at him.
"WENCH!" The rock that Kagome threw hit him in the armor which irritated him greatly. He would have killed her already if it wasnt for Rin standing there...looking ready to giggle. "MY NAME ISNT WENCH! ITS KAGOME!!" Her loud voice was booming in his ears now. That bitch dare yell at me? Is she really so foolish and want to die so badly.
He was about to say that but... "KAGOME-NE-CHAN HAS SUCH A PRETTY NAME!! IT MATCHES KAGOME-CHAN BECAUSE KAGOME-CHAN IS SOO PRETTY!! RIGHT SESSHOMARU-SAMA??" Rin yelled out which made Sesshomaru's ears twitch again.
"I find Jaken more attractive than this human bit-wench." ...thats a lie because you know that Jaken will never look good as long as he is alive or dead.... and she isnt half bad looking either...mental slap.. I need to relax.... "Rin go to Jaken and stay with him." "But I want to stay with Kagome-chan!"she whined.
The insult of Jaken being better looking then HER!! And that he was about to call her a bitch made her eyes twitch ..OH MY GODD!!... That riled her up even more. She was beyond pissed. But Rin's next question cut her mood for a little while.
"Can Kagome-chan come with us?" That got the Taikoukai dissed. His ward taking a liking to his hanyou half-brother's wench sounded like trouble. "No Rin-chan, I dont think I will go." Kagome whispered softly. "Oh..okay..Kagome..."Sounding sad and dissapointed Rin started to walk into the forest behind Sesshomaru. Kagome felt bad so she thought of the only thing that came to her mind. "But maybe I can visit you.." Kagome said trying to make Rin a little happy. It worked.
"YAAAAYY!" Rin ran and hugged Kagome and then she ran off, looking for Jaken. "You shouldnt make promises you cant keep, not when you are about to die." Sesshomaru growled out.
"Well if you think Jaken is more better looking then me maybe you keep him as a sex-slave! HAHA! HIM BETTER THEN ME?? I KNOW IM NOT THE PRETTIEST THING OUT THERE, BUT YOU MUST HAVE BAD TASTE IN WOMEN AND MEN!! I never thought you were the Gay type Sesshomaru. Evil, yes, homicidal, yes, but gay??, ewwwww...!" Kagome made a tsk tsk sound and then was about to walk out until her pinned her to the wall. ....I knew i should have kept my mouth shut!!...Kagome thought as an afterthought. ...Im dead... The only thing that came to her mind was...
"SIT!'' Kagome screamed but then shut tup once she realized it wasnt Inu Yasha. ....Did i really say that to Sesshomaru?... Inu Yasha.. While im about to die, you're probably fucking Kikyo arent you?... Tears started to fall down her cheeks.
...pathetic...is she crying for her life?..how weak.. He let her go but to his suprise she didnt slump down. She slanted on him and started to cry on his armor. She rubbed her face into his tail and held on to him. ...What is she doing?...
"SESSHOMARU!!!........."
Authors corner.. hello again people.. yeah this chapter totally sucked to me. Im not even thinking of a story! Im just typing it out. LOL.. but yeah... Anyways. Review and tell me what you think!! and yes you have to tell me if my story sucks and that i should quit!! sighs.... ja ne
REVIEW PEOPLE!!! PLEASE??? PRETTY PLEASE!!???