Awesome! I got - how many reviews? - Well, it's three, but still, I HAVE
READERS WHO ENJOY IT!
Saridaru-Chan: I'm really happy you enjoy my fics :D And I put all these little fancy things to separate the Hogwarts bit from the Skies of Arcadia bit, but ff.net took it out. And the autopilot thing I put in because i recently re-watched Spaceballs (good movie, go ahead and watch it if you haven't) and the guy teleporting back and forth between neighboirng rooms kinda stuck with me.
Silver Chaotic of Randomia: Harry gets too much attention, so halfway, I agree with you. the other half is there saying "Oh, but he is the one who kills Voldemort!" to which the other half responds "Oh blah, Dumbledore can do that easy as pie." I wish you good luck on your crossover, and I shall read it when it is posted.
AozoraMiyako Shuki: ff.net did this weird thing and copied the story twice, then made a story out of it, but it was twice as long so I had to delete it, then fix it nd put it back up. Im sorry if it caused you any trouble. and if you always wanted to do a hp/soal cross, why don't you? You told me it's that plot problem, but remember: the sky's the limit. If your scared people might laugh, go for humor and give 'em a reason to laugh!
I shall try to separate things using letters rather than fancy characters. oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Ch 2: Still Day One, At Hogwarts oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
The whole stadium gasped. From across the field, Ron couldn't tell if it was because Harry caught THE SNITCH ("Again..."), because the Head Girl was nearly impaled by the Head Boy on his broomstick, or the fact that several people appeared in mid-air, one of which had cut Harry like crazy.
For Vyse, time stood still. One second he was attacking Baltor; the next, a young teenage boy riding a broomstick. He was hovering in the air for a while, while everyone was silent around him. Beside him, Aika muttered, "Great, just great, I didn't get to see that knothole." and with that word - "knothole" - Vyse, Aika, Fina, Gilder, Drachma, and Enrique fell, their weapons being held by Cupil and Willy, who were descending nervously.
Instinctively, Ginny waved her wand and a great big air-filled landing appeared to soften the fall.
(Sorry, but that's just not right. Let me fix that.)
Instinctively, Ginny barked out a laugh and, amusedly, both teams watched the small party fall SPLAT! onto the ground, the big old ugly guy with the mechanical arm landing on top of all of them.
Crickets were heard.
Then the students slowly fixed their attention to Harry, who was tap dancing on top of the scoreboard to get their attention ("Yoohoo! I caught THE SNITCH! We won the game! I got two more scars! Now I can give one to both Hermione and Ron so they won't be left out!"). THE SNITCH was wearing a top hat and was holding Harry's cane while Harry did several advanced steps to gain the teachers' attention.
Below, a nerd yelled, "Hey, it's not Ireland, aye?"
Then, Gilder reached an astounding theory and pulled a small book out of his pocket. Fina noticed Vyse's nose was broken from the fall and cast Curia, which got everyone's attention("Hey! I'm up here!"More tap dancing was heard). And a weird looking person stepped onto the filed, wearing robes. With a shock, Drachma realized everyone in the stadium was wearing robes.
"Aren't they gonna get hot wearing black?" Fina conked Vyse behind the head.
"Obviously, we're not in Arcadia anymore, dumbo."
Morea and Milly Foster landed beside them and poked Cupil with their broomsticks.
"He's so solid!"
"I KNOW!"
"Hey, Solid, are you a pet?"
"Can we buy you for, like, twelve Galleons?"
"Ah HA!" Everyone on the pitch jumped as Gilder, who was flipping through his book, stabbed his finger at the large castle structure in the distance.
Aika slammed her elbow into his gut, "Tell us what marvelous news you've found, Sherlock."
While all this was happening, Sam Vargas was juggling the Quafffle, aiming, and-
"DOY!" Willy dropped like a stone, his beak shattered.
Gilder, being absolutely ignorant to the bird, was calmly explaining to Aika(and everyone in the stadium who was leaning forward with intense interest.) about the book he was reading.
Fina nodded. "And we are where?"
"On the set of Harry Potter, The Prisoner of Azkaban, the movie, to be released in theatres in June!" Gilder punched the air triumphantly.
Ginny coughed and stepped forward bravely. "Actually, Mr...uh...Gunguy, it is four years after the whole Azkaban thing. And this is NOT a set. This is the real thing."
Kellie Neilson poked the top of Enrique's boots, which were jutting out in a an utmost disturbing manner.
"Mr. High Boots?" Enrique shrieked and blindly waved his rapier about. Kellie screamed and ducked.
A lot of the students were getting bored, and the majority of them were making their way back to their common rooms. The few remaining were Hagrid, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle, Kellie, Sam, Madam Hooch, Professer Dumbledore, Professer McGonnagal, Morea, Milly, and Harry.
Not to mention Vyse, Aika, Fina, Gilder, Drachma, and Enrique.
Cupil and Willy don't count because they're unconcious.
Harry leaped down from the scoreboard("I don't think that's a good idea, Harry..." muttered Ginny.) and got himself squashed. THE SNITCH cringed and weeped for it's friend.
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AN: Sorry it's not that long. My sense of humor got kicked down a notch by realizing I was late for chinese school today. My ears are still ringing.
Review please? Maybe until I get around 8 I'll update. Depends.
Saridaru-Chan: I'm really happy you enjoy my fics :D And I put all these little fancy things to separate the Hogwarts bit from the Skies of Arcadia bit, but ff.net took it out. And the autopilot thing I put in because i recently re-watched Spaceballs (good movie, go ahead and watch it if you haven't) and the guy teleporting back and forth between neighboirng rooms kinda stuck with me.
Silver Chaotic of Randomia: Harry gets too much attention, so halfway, I agree with you. the other half is there saying "Oh, but he is the one who kills Voldemort!" to which the other half responds "Oh blah, Dumbledore can do that easy as pie." I wish you good luck on your crossover, and I shall read it when it is posted.
AozoraMiyako Shuki: ff.net did this weird thing and copied the story twice, then made a story out of it, but it was twice as long so I had to delete it, then fix it nd put it back up. Im sorry if it caused you any trouble. and if you always wanted to do a hp/soal cross, why don't you? You told me it's that plot problem, but remember: the sky's the limit. If your scared people might laugh, go for humor and give 'em a reason to laugh!
I shall try to separate things using letters rather than fancy characters. oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Ch 2: Still Day One, At Hogwarts oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
The whole stadium gasped. From across the field, Ron couldn't tell if it was because Harry caught THE SNITCH ("Again..."), because the Head Girl was nearly impaled by the Head Boy on his broomstick, or the fact that several people appeared in mid-air, one of which had cut Harry like crazy.
For Vyse, time stood still. One second he was attacking Baltor; the next, a young teenage boy riding a broomstick. He was hovering in the air for a while, while everyone was silent around him. Beside him, Aika muttered, "Great, just great, I didn't get to see that knothole." and with that word - "knothole" - Vyse, Aika, Fina, Gilder, Drachma, and Enrique fell, their weapons being held by Cupil and Willy, who were descending nervously.
Instinctively, Ginny waved her wand and a great big air-filled landing appeared to soften the fall.
(Sorry, but that's just not right. Let me fix that.)
Instinctively, Ginny barked out a laugh and, amusedly, both teams watched the small party fall SPLAT! onto the ground, the big old ugly guy with the mechanical arm landing on top of all of them.
Crickets were heard.
Then the students slowly fixed their attention to Harry, who was tap dancing on top of the scoreboard to get their attention ("Yoohoo! I caught THE SNITCH! We won the game! I got two more scars! Now I can give one to both Hermione and Ron so they won't be left out!"). THE SNITCH was wearing a top hat and was holding Harry's cane while Harry did several advanced steps to gain the teachers' attention.
Below, a nerd yelled, "Hey, it's not Ireland, aye?"
Then, Gilder reached an astounding theory and pulled a small book out of his pocket. Fina noticed Vyse's nose was broken from the fall and cast Curia, which got everyone's attention("Hey! I'm up here!"More tap dancing was heard). And a weird looking person stepped onto the filed, wearing robes. With a shock, Drachma realized everyone in the stadium was wearing robes.
"Aren't they gonna get hot wearing black?" Fina conked Vyse behind the head.
"Obviously, we're not in Arcadia anymore, dumbo."
Morea and Milly Foster landed beside them and poked Cupil with their broomsticks.
"He's so solid!"
"I KNOW!"
"Hey, Solid, are you a pet?"
"Can we buy you for, like, twelve Galleons?"
"Ah HA!" Everyone on the pitch jumped as Gilder, who was flipping through his book, stabbed his finger at the large castle structure in the distance.
Aika slammed her elbow into his gut, "Tell us what marvelous news you've found, Sherlock."
While all this was happening, Sam Vargas was juggling the Quafffle, aiming, and-
"DOY!" Willy dropped like a stone, his beak shattered.
Gilder, being absolutely ignorant to the bird, was calmly explaining to Aika(and everyone in the stadium who was leaning forward with intense interest.) about the book he was reading.
Fina nodded. "And we are where?"
"On the set of Harry Potter, The Prisoner of Azkaban, the movie, to be released in theatres in June!" Gilder punched the air triumphantly.
Ginny coughed and stepped forward bravely. "Actually, Mr...uh...Gunguy, it is four years after the whole Azkaban thing. And this is NOT a set. This is the real thing."
Kellie Neilson poked the top of Enrique's boots, which were jutting out in a an utmost disturbing manner.
"Mr. High Boots?" Enrique shrieked and blindly waved his rapier about. Kellie screamed and ducked.
A lot of the students were getting bored, and the majority of them were making their way back to their common rooms. The few remaining were Hagrid, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle, Kellie, Sam, Madam Hooch, Professer Dumbledore, Professer McGonnagal, Morea, Milly, and Harry.
Not to mention Vyse, Aika, Fina, Gilder, Drachma, and Enrique.
Cupil and Willy don't count because they're unconcious.
Harry leaped down from the scoreboard("I don't think that's a good idea, Harry..." muttered Ginny.) and got himself squashed. THE SNITCH cringed and weeped for it's friend.
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
AN: Sorry it's not that long. My sense of humor got kicked down a notch by realizing I was late for chinese school today. My ears are still ringing.
Review please? Maybe until I get around 8 I'll update. Depends.