I did not use any of my own characters or places.
This is my first story and I need to know what i can do to make my stories better thanx;)
Will Sponge Bob Start a new job?
One sunny morning Sponge Bob started his regular routine at the Krusty Krab. First he went and got his hat, then cleaned the floor and tables so that they were spotless for the first customers, and then finally started taking orders from Squidward.
"Sponge Bob I need a double krabby patty, no cheese or lettuce, baked not fried, and then cut into small chunks." When Sponge bob was only literally two seconds into making the order, he realized that he couldn't finish what the customer had requested. Didn't Squidward realize that you can't bake on a grill? He went to talk to Squidward about the problem when he realized that his worst enemy was the one who made the order. Bubble Bass.
"Hello Sponge Bob," Bubble Bass said in a sneer voice
"What are doing here Bubble Bass? I thought that since the last time I found out about your pickle trick that you would never come back!" replied Sponge Bob. Sponge Bob was starting to get worried because he couldn't go through with the customer's request. I don't know what to do......I don't think that Mr. Krabs will take too kindly to this.........although it's Bubble Bass..?? Thought Sponge Bob.
"YOU CAN'T BAKE ON A GRILL MR. BASS!" yelled Sponge Bob.
"Well, just a moment then while I go talk to the owner of this crummy place!" he replied. He turned around and sauntered right over to where Mr. Krabs' office was, knocked on the door, and then barged in.
"I have a complaint to make about your Fry cook; he says that he can't make my order," He wined. Mr. Krabs' face went from a happy cheerful face to an angry steamed face.
"Are ya sure we are thinkin of the same Sponge Bob sir?" asked Mr. Krabs.
"The yellow squared sponge whose name is Sponge Bob, if that's the one you are talking about than yes we are talking about the same Sponge Bob," replied Bubble Bass sarcastically.
"I will be sure to talk to him for ya sir, just a moment." Mr. Krabs scuttled out of his office and into the kitchen where Sponge Bob was making Krabby Patties on the grill.
"Why couldn't you fulfill the costumers order?" asked Mr. Krabs.
"I don't have an oven sir," Mr. Krabs had a look on his face like he had just heard a big fat whale of a tale lie, so he said, "Sponge Bob you will make this order."
"But Mr- "Not another word Sponge Bob, I want this order to be fulfilled or else you can't kiss your job goodbye."
"MR. KRABS..." With that Mr. Krabs turned around and walked out of the kitchen. Sponge Bob was once again faced with the threat of Bubble Bass ruining his job. Will Sponge Bob be able to follow through with Bubble Bass's request or will he have to find a new job?