I'm back and I want to reply to some reviews that I got. Here we go:
Dan Heron: Thanks for reviewing (you and Wisteria Fox are the only two that review this story)! Like I said before, don't worry, I've got a logical explanation why she turned evil (BTW, I don't consider racism a logical explanation).
Wisteria Fox: Thanks also for reviewing (like I said before, only you and Dan Heron reviewed)! Thanks for the compliment (I'm glad I'm getting better!).
Enough said, let the story begin (I know, lame, but it was the only thing I could think of other than "Let's get this show on the road!")
Disclaimer: I only own Manticore and Zinthosians.
Raven came in and saw what the other Titans were doing. "I guess I won't delay it any longer!" They looked at her, confused. She said her incantation and tied them all up, which included knocking them out.
Raven (in her disguise, which made her look like a black robot with purple eyes and no mouth) dragged the other Titans and Manticore to Slade's lair and dropped them on the floor in front of Slade. "Can I use your machines now?" she asked.
"You're missing one titan."
"Why would I kidnap myself?" Raven asked as she pulled off her disguise.
Slade was amazed (believe it or not). "You betrayed the other titans?"
"How could you Raven?" Manticore asked, She and the Titans had woken up.
"Because you lied to me. You never told me about the fact that you were one of them. The first time you came to the tower, I thought maybe it was make-up or something. But now I know that you lied to me for 16 years!" Raven was getting madder by the second.
After 3 light bulbs blew up, BB said, "Calm down Raven! Geesh, this is so not like her!"
"It isn't." Manticore said mysteriously. She changed into something that looked just like her except the colors were backwards (her cape was green, her diamond was red, her belt had gems with white lions with wings in front of a orange background, and her hair was purple (skin the same)). Her eyes turned purple as she said, "Zinthos, Metrion, Azarath!" Her let out a yellow aura, which caused Raven's to disappear when it did.
The titans looked at Manticore as she said, "Zinthosians. They're just like Azarathians, except their powers cancel out ours, as well as ours cancel out theirs. Some also have shape-shifting abilities." She freed the other titans and turned to normal. She lunged at Raven. Raven moved out of the way and they kept fighting until raven fell to the ground. Her hood fell off, but only Manticore saw what was under it. "It all makes sense." She said.
Raven put her hood up the way it had been before as Manticore changed into something they didn't recognize and teleported them to Titans tower.
After they reached the tower, Manticore changed into her regular self and said, "Keep her busy, and DON'T LET HER GO INTO HER ROOM!!!" as she ran towards Raven's room. BB followed, but the other titans were too busy to notice him. Raven was attacking them.
BB followed Manticore and saw her digging in Raven's stuff. "Where in the world did she...Ah, here it is!" She said, as she picked up Raven's mirror.
"Manticore, what are you doing?!?!" BB said without thinking.
"I'm going to solve our little Raven problem." BB felt sure she was going to go in Raven's mind and kill her.
"Don't do it!!!" He screamed.
"Don't worry, just don't let Raven touch this mirror. You have no idea..."
"Don't worry yourself. We already know about her mind-mirror thing."
"All right. Go help the other Titans, now!" She said as she looked in the mirror. Then, she disappeared.
BB picked up the mirror, put it in his pocket, and ran down to where the other titans were fighting Raven. Starfire hit her with a starbolt and knocked her to the ground. Her hood flew off again, but this time, the other Titans saw what she was hiding. BB and Cy recognized it.
Under Raven's hood was another pair of eyes. Both pairs became red.
Ah, that explains a lot! But what is Manticore doing in Raven's mind? How will the titans get Raven back to normal? I love leaving you ppl on cliffhangers:)! Please review!
Dan Heron: Thanks for reviewing (you and Wisteria Fox are the only two that review this story)! Like I said before, don't worry, I've got a logical explanation why she turned evil (BTW, I don't consider racism a logical explanation).
Wisteria Fox: Thanks also for reviewing (like I said before, only you and Dan Heron reviewed)! Thanks for the compliment (I'm glad I'm getting better!).
Enough said, let the story begin (I know, lame, but it was the only thing I could think of other than "Let's get this show on the road!")
Disclaimer: I only own Manticore and Zinthosians.
Raven came in and saw what the other Titans were doing. "I guess I won't delay it any longer!" They looked at her, confused. She said her incantation and tied them all up, which included knocking them out.
Raven (in her disguise, which made her look like a black robot with purple eyes and no mouth) dragged the other Titans and Manticore to Slade's lair and dropped them on the floor in front of Slade. "Can I use your machines now?" she asked.
"You're missing one titan."
"Why would I kidnap myself?" Raven asked as she pulled off her disguise.
Slade was amazed (believe it or not). "You betrayed the other titans?"
"How could you Raven?" Manticore asked, She and the Titans had woken up.
"Because you lied to me. You never told me about the fact that you were one of them. The first time you came to the tower, I thought maybe it was make-up or something. But now I know that you lied to me for 16 years!" Raven was getting madder by the second.
After 3 light bulbs blew up, BB said, "Calm down Raven! Geesh, this is so not like her!"
"It isn't." Manticore said mysteriously. She changed into something that looked just like her except the colors were backwards (her cape was green, her diamond was red, her belt had gems with white lions with wings in front of a orange background, and her hair was purple (skin the same)). Her eyes turned purple as she said, "Zinthos, Metrion, Azarath!" Her let out a yellow aura, which caused Raven's to disappear when it did.
The titans looked at Manticore as she said, "Zinthosians. They're just like Azarathians, except their powers cancel out ours, as well as ours cancel out theirs. Some also have shape-shifting abilities." She freed the other titans and turned to normal. She lunged at Raven. Raven moved out of the way and they kept fighting until raven fell to the ground. Her hood fell off, but only Manticore saw what was under it. "It all makes sense." She said.
Raven put her hood up the way it had been before as Manticore changed into something they didn't recognize and teleported them to Titans tower.
After they reached the tower, Manticore changed into her regular self and said, "Keep her busy, and DON'T LET HER GO INTO HER ROOM!!!" as she ran towards Raven's room. BB followed, but the other titans were too busy to notice him. Raven was attacking them.
BB followed Manticore and saw her digging in Raven's stuff. "Where in the world did she...Ah, here it is!" She said, as she picked up Raven's mirror.
"Manticore, what are you doing?!?!" BB said without thinking.
"I'm going to solve our little Raven problem." BB felt sure she was going to go in Raven's mind and kill her.
"Don't do it!!!" He screamed.
"Don't worry, just don't let Raven touch this mirror. You have no idea..."
"Don't worry yourself. We already know about her mind-mirror thing."
"All right. Go help the other Titans, now!" She said as she looked in the mirror. Then, she disappeared.
BB picked up the mirror, put it in his pocket, and ran down to where the other titans were fighting Raven. Starfire hit her with a starbolt and knocked her to the ground. Her hood flew off again, but this time, the other Titans saw what she was hiding. BB and Cy recognized it.
Under Raven's hood was another pair of eyes. Both pairs became red.
Ah, that explains a lot! But what is Manticore doing in Raven's mind? How will the titans get Raven back to normal? I love leaving you ppl on cliffhangers:)! Please review!