Ok, this is my first fanfic. And it is very short, and not very descriptive, so constuructive critisisim would be appreciated. Mabye I'll make a better version of this fanfic later.
Disclaimer: I do not own RK or any of the characters. And I am not grown up, and I have never lived in Japan.
Eyes.
You can tell a lot about a person from looking at their eyes. It's helped me in many ways. When I was little, I could always tell if I liked a teacher or not. Then and now I can tell if a person is lying by looking into their eyes. The story I am about to tell you is from when I was a young girl in Japan.
I was walking to the busy marketplace to buy some tofu for my kassan. When I got there, I saw a boy who was younger than me, I haven't, and will never forget his face. His eyes. I will never be able to forget his eyes. They were a dark violet in color. His eyes were vivid and deep, like they held many mysteries. They made him seem like he was more than what he appeared to be. His eyes seemed kind, but dangerous at the same time. I bet I could have found out a lot about him from looking into his eyes, but he seemed like someone who liked to keep things to himself.
I couldn't tell what the boy was doing there in the marketplace. It seemed like he was out of place here.
Suddenly, an older boy stole my money while I was thinking. I didn't know what to do. The boy with the violet eyes suddenly seemed angry, his eyes turned a shade of amber. He caught up to the older boy and got into a fight. I was scared for the boy with violet eyes, but he seemed okay. When he got my money from the older boy, he walked over and gave it back to me.
I asked him if he was okay. All he said was: "I am fine. But you should pay more attention to what is gong on around you, that you should." Then he gave me a kawaii smile and walked away.
And that is the story of the boy with violet eyes. I have never seen him since. But I knew he would make a great swordsman and friend.
So that's my fanfic. I'm working on a better YYH fanfic at the moment. And I'm trying to make it more descriptive. So mabye you can check that one out. Please review.