First of all I want to thank the people who've reviewed my story..
Secondly, I'm thinking of writing this story only in Rory's point of view, or I could do it in Tristan's...Y'all tell me what you want, and I'll work on it.
Third, to the reviewer Kay, I'll try to make it more clear and I appreciate the suggestion...But from my point of view - life is chaos, whether we like it or not...Usually there is more than one conversation going on at time...in my story I try to make it seem as chaotic as real life... it may be confusing, but if you could give me some suggestions, I'll try to make it better..
And lastly if you could give some ideas of where you want me taking this story, I'd greatly appreciate it..
Thanks y'all
- Darragh -
Secondly, I'm thinking of writing this story only in Rory's point of view, or I could do it in Tristan's...Y'all tell me what you want, and I'll work on it.
Third, to the reviewer Kay, I'll try to make it more clear and I appreciate the suggestion...But from my point of view - life is chaos, whether we like it or not...Usually there is more than one conversation going on at time...in my story I try to make it seem as chaotic as real life... it may be confusing, but if you could give me some suggestions, I'll try to make it better..
And lastly if you could give some ideas of where you want me taking this story, I'd greatly appreciate it..
Thanks y'all
- Darragh -
