I've made a slight change to the format of my theatrical trailers to make them easier to visualize. From now on, visual images will just be written in and my dialogue will be done a little differently. For example-(from my Mariel of Redwall one)
V.O- And a hero will be born
Mariel runs into Fort Blagegirt. She turns around to look at Durry
Mariel of Redwall
"We'll see who gets Gabool"
Coming soon.
I'm sure you'll catch on quickly. Thanks.
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The scene shows Matthias looking at the tapestry of Martin.
Mortimer "The days of warriors are over, my son."
Matthias looks at the abbot. Cuts to a close of Matthias's face.
V.O- An evil presence
Cluny's horse cart races over the woodland trail. Cuts to a close of Cluny, laughing insanely. The moonlight reflects on his poison barbed tail. Matthias, Constance, and the others watch from the side of the trail.
Matthias "Who was that rat."
Abbot(V.O)- "Cluny the Scrouge"
V.O- War is here
A volley of slingstones fly over the walls. Constance grabs a mace and chain and throws it at back at the rats.
Matthias reads the poem.
Methuselah "Matthias! This poem speaks of you."
Matthias "Where is Martin's sword?"
V.O- Now, it's a race of time for Matthias
Matthias runs, with vermin hard on his heels.
V.O- To save the abbey he loves.
Shows Matthias, attacked by many sparrows
Jess Squirrel slowly climbs up the abbey wall.
Bull Sparra sees Matthias and attacks him. Matthias screams as his beak lodges into his shoulder and knocks the sparra unconscious. Slowly, they begin to fall of the roof.
Jess looks up to see Matthias falling.
"MATTHIAS!"
Shows Matthias, in Asmodeus's den, inching for the sword. Amodeus's eyes flicker and he hisses, creeping towards Matthias.
V.O- Even in the most dire situations.
The abbot, bound tightly, is shoved before Cluny.
Cluny "Kneel to me, old one."
Abbot "I will *never* kneel to one consumed by evil.
Cluny "Then you will die!
Cluny looks up and gasps when he sees Matthias.
Redwall-The Movie
Matthias "Time to die, rat!"
Coming soon.
