It's not mean
A/N: thanks for the reviews. I have read Sevenwaters trilogy and it's very good. I might read it one more time. It was sad I know, I was thinking about that part when the castle went in smoke it might have been too much, but it will fits into the story. I in this chapter I will be introducing a main character. This story is not going to be anything like Sevenwaters trilogy I just like the main character.
Sevenwaters
Chapter five
The setting sun was stretching across the forest waking every living creator up.
But in a large dark sea green castle laying in black satin coffin. Was laying the last high ranking vampire, Dearg. It's been to long since he had heard his real name so he goes by Dearg it means red-blood-sucker in Ireland. He has been in this coffin four about eight years after the last vampire hunt.
The vampire hunt is a ceremony for all of the young men to show there respect to the gods and goddess because what they know vampires were scent to kill all the humans by the under lord that rules hell. When they found a vampire it would take about ten men to take down one vampire. Then after they took they prey they would do one of theses things.
Tie them up and burn to a tree. If it was a woman and child they would put them into a glass house so when the sun came it would kill them fast or if you were a fighter it would take a long and painful time to kill you. The last one would be to stab a stake into the heart of the vampire and put them into a coffin with locks on it. After every vampire killing or hunt they would have a big festive in the lords castle.
Dearg was the last vampire left in Ireland. He was mostly a lord to the vampires, he was the strongest out of all of them, and he would help them in bad times. He was a happy person with a family and heirs.
But now things have changed his family was killed right in front of his eyes while he couldn't do anything. The sun killed his family the memories of how the screamed for him to come and save them. His family could see him tied up fighting to save them, but all he did see them burn in the suns heat. That was the first time he cried in his life. Cries of pain cry of sorrow.
After the screams were over all he could hear was the laughter of the crowed that was watching him and his family go through all this pain.
He lost hope
After that day he put up no fight to get away. When they put him in this coffin, that he is laying in today, they drove a wooden cross though his broken heart. With one last painful scream his heart would beat no more.
It had been day's scents the castle was burned down. They have been wondering the forest for days not knowing what to do.
Hiei was wandering about going home, if he could. He wanted to bring her back home with him, but she would probably say no.
They have been going no where but just walking around.
"Where are you taking us?" Hiei said sounding very bored.
"Don't you take that tone with me?" Sorcha said playful.
"Yes mother." whispered Hiei
"What was that?" Sorcha said turning around and walking towards him.
"Huh" Hiei was backing up because she had those crazy eyes on him.
Hiei was up against a tree with Sorcha pointing at him and telling him not to talk back to her that way. Hiei jumped up into the tree and lifted Sorcha on the ground looking up at him.
"hn" then Sorcha lifted him and started down the path they been taking. She was walking with her head up in the air and with her eyes up at the sky.
The sun was going down fast tonight. The moon was whole that night the first time that they been out there. Sorcha stopped and looked around and not to fare behind her was Hiei walking like nothing happened.
Sun was down now and they were looking for some place to sleep. They headed a little further ahead. Sorcha was in front and stopped all of a sudden and looked back at Hiei with a confused look on her face.
"Did we take a wrong turn somewhere?" she said to Hiei in a scared voice.
"What do you mean?" He looked where she was just looking.
"So" he said simply to her "We could stay there for tonight." then with that said he stated to walk to this sea green castle in the middle of no where.
"It's probably hunted, Hiei." She said running to catch up with him.
Hiei stated to laugh at what she said. "You are worse then Karwabara." he told her that just made her look more confused and Hiei laughed even harder.
"Stop laughing at me, Hiei." she said in a cute confused way that Hiei had to do what she said.
Hiei and Sorcha stopped at the door for a few seconds before Hiei pushed the doors opened to reveal a very old place with cobwebs all around the dark marble wall and floors.
They both stepped in the old castle looking around again to see any living beings in the castle. The stairs in the castle had velvet crimson rug on it. They where pictures on the walls with what looked like a family of five happy people init. It had elegant woman and a very handsome man with what looked like three kids an older brother a middle boy and a small baby girl.
"Come." Hiei said in a quite demanding voice.
Hiei was all ready up the stairs and was looking down at Sorcha. Sorcha did not want to be down stairs by herself so she walks a little faster to Hiei. Hiei saw this and could not help but smirk at her. But that smirk did not stay long because she was glaring at him now.
Hiei turned around not wanting to meet her stare anymore and started to walk down the hall to a big pair of doors at the end of the hall.
Hiei opened the doors and was surprised of what he saw. There was a coffin in the middle of the room. That's all that he could see in the door so he took small steps towards the only thing he could see.
"Hiei, where are you?" said a frightened voice coming from the entrance.
"Stay, Sorcha." Hiei called out from the chamber in front of Sorcha.
Hiei was at the coffin and was going to open it but there were locks on it. Hiei had no problem and just opened the coffin and the locks just came off. He was expecting there to be a corps but it was a perfectly male body. The male look like to be around his twenties.
The person in the coffin had long wave jet black hair, very pale skin, and was about what Hiei could tell maybe six feet tall. If he was that tall he would be taller when any Irish man he has ever seen. This man had on black and crimson suit.
Hiei saw then when he was looking at him that he had a wooden cross in his chest. 'That had to hart.' Hiei was surprised by what he was doing; he was reaching for the wooden cross. He was trying to stop himself before he grabbed the cross.
Too late he had his hand on the wooden cross and was now pulling out the cross. The cross came out quite easy. Then when it was free he dropped the cross and then what happen next even freak Hiei out.
The creator that has been "dead" for eight years was given his life back. The creator knows what was happening same one has just given his life back. He was not going to wait any longer then he already has.
The first thing that came to his mind was revenge for his family's humiliation. But it was no stupid human that had let him go it was a demon. 'Why would a demon do this we have been enemies for centuries?'
He slowly got up and looked around for this creator. His planning to kill me with a sword weakling. He did a graceful leap in the air and landed on the floor without making a noise. 'They send a boy to kill me, that's so sad.' he took one step forward and stopped 'but I am hungry. He smirked evil at Hiei and started to walk towards him.
'What the hell' Hiei was getting scared?
I think this is the longest chapter I have written so fare. This took me a long time I mean an lllloooonnggg time. So be nice and review. I feel good about this chapter. I did make up the beginning that's the thing that took me the longest. R&R hehe
A/N: thanks for the reviews. I have read Sevenwaters trilogy and it's very good. I might read it one more time. It was sad I know, I was thinking about that part when the castle went in smoke it might have been too much, but it will fits into the story. I in this chapter I will be introducing a main character. This story is not going to be anything like Sevenwaters trilogy I just like the main character.
Sevenwaters
Chapter five
The setting sun was stretching across the forest waking every living creator up.
But in a large dark sea green castle laying in black satin coffin. Was laying the last high ranking vampire, Dearg. It's been to long since he had heard his real name so he goes by Dearg it means red-blood-sucker in Ireland. He has been in this coffin four about eight years after the last vampire hunt.
The vampire hunt is a ceremony for all of the young men to show there respect to the gods and goddess because what they know vampires were scent to kill all the humans by the under lord that rules hell. When they found a vampire it would take about ten men to take down one vampire. Then after they took they prey they would do one of theses things.
Tie them up and burn to a tree. If it was a woman and child they would put them into a glass house so when the sun came it would kill them fast or if you were a fighter it would take a long and painful time to kill you. The last one would be to stab a stake into the heart of the vampire and put them into a coffin with locks on it. After every vampire killing or hunt they would have a big festive in the lords castle.
Dearg was the last vampire left in Ireland. He was mostly a lord to the vampires, he was the strongest out of all of them, and he would help them in bad times. He was a happy person with a family and heirs.
But now things have changed his family was killed right in front of his eyes while he couldn't do anything. The sun killed his family the memories of how the screamed for him to come and save them. His family could see him tied up fighting to save them, but all he did see them burn in the suns heat. That was the first time he cried in his life. Cries of pain cry of sorrow.
After the screams were over all he could hear was the laughter of the crowed that was watching him and his family go through all this pain.
He lost hope
After that day he put up no fight to get away. When they put him in this coffin, that he is laying in today, they drove a wooden cross though his broken heart. With one last painful scream his heart would beat no more.
It had been day's scents the castle was burned down. They have been wondering the forest for days not knowing what to do.
Hiei was wandering about going home, if he could. He wanted to bring her back home with him, but she would probably say no.
They have been going no where but just walking around.
"Where are you taking us?" Hiei said sounding very bored.
"Don't you take that tone with me?" Sorcha said playful.
"Yes mother." whispered Hiei
"What was that?" Sorcha said turning around and walking towards him.
"Huh" Hiei was backing up because she had those crazy eyes on him.
Hiei was up against a tree with Sorcha pointing at him and telling him not to talk back to her that way. Hiei jumped up into the tree and lifted Sorcha on the ground looking up at him.
"hn" then Sorcha lifted him and started down the path they been taking. She was walking with her head up in the air and with her eyes up at the sky.
The sun was going down fast tonight. The moon was whole that night the first time that they been out there. Sorcha stopped and looked around and not to fare behind her was Hiei walking like nothing happened.
Sun was down now and they were looking for some place to sleep. They headed a little further ahead. Sorcha was in front and stopped all of a sudden and looked back at Hiei with a confused look on her face.
"Did we take a wrong turn somewhere?" she said to Hiei in a scared voice.
"What do you mean?" He looked where she was just looking.
"So" he said simply to her "We could stay there for tonight." then with that said he stated to walk to this sea green castle in the middle of no where.
"It's probably hunted, Hiei." She said running to catch up with him.
Hiei stated to laugh at what she said. "You are worse then Karwabara." he told her that just made her look more confused and Hiei laughed even harder.
"Stop laughing at me, Hiei." she said in a cute confused way that Hiei had to do what she said.
Hiei and Sorcha stopped at the door for a few seconds before Hiei pushed the doors opened to reveal a very old place with cobwebs all around the dark marble wall and floors.
They both stepped in the old castle looking around again to see any living beings in the castle. The stairs in the castle had velvet crimson rug on it. They where pictures on the walls with what looked like a family of five happy people init. It had elegant woman and a very handsome man with what looked like three kids an older brother a middle boy and a small baby girl.
"Come." Hiei said in a quite demanding voice.
Hiei was all ready up the stairs and was looking down at Sorcha. Sorcha did not want to be down stairs by herself so she walks a little faster to Hiei. Hiei saw this and could not help but smirk at her. But that smirk did not stay long because she was glaring at him now.
Hiei turned around not wanting to meet her stare anymore and started to walk down the hall to a big pair of doors at the end of the hall.
Hiei opened the doors and was surprised of what he saw. There was a coffin in the middle of the room. That's all that he could see in the door so he took small steps towards the only thing he could see.
"Hiei, where are you?" said a frightened voice coming from the entrance.
"Stay, Sorcha." Hiei called out from the chamber in front of Sorcha.
Hiei was at the coffin and was going to open it but there were locks on it. Hiei had no problem and just opened the coffin and the locks just came off. He was expecting there to be a corps but it was a perfectly male body. The male look like to be around his twenties.
The person in the coffin had long wave jet black hair, very pale skin, and was about what Hiei could tell maybe six feet tall. If he was that tall he would be taller when any Irish man he has ever seen. This man had on black and crimson suit.
Hiei saw then when he was looking at him that he had a wooden cross in his chest. 'That had to hart.' Hiei was surprised by what he was doing; he was reaching for the wooden cross. He was trying to stop himself before he grabbed the cross.
Too late he had his hand on the wooden cross and was now pulling out the cross. The cross came out quite easy. Then when it was free he dropped the cross and then what happen next even freak Hiei out.
The creator that has been "dead" for eight years was given his life back. The creator knows what was happening same one has just given his life back. He was not going to wait any longer then he already has.
The first thing that came to his mind was revenge for his family's humiliation. But it was no stupid human that had let him go it was a demon. 'Why would a demon do this we have been enemies for centuries?'
He slowly got up and looked around for this creator. His planning to kill me with a sword weakling. He did a graceful leap in the air and landed on the floor without making a noise. 'They send a boy to kill me, that's so sad.' he took one step forward and stopped 'but I am hungry. He smirked evil at Hiei and started to walk towards him.
'What the hell' Hiei was getting scared?
I think this is the longest chapter I have written so fare. This took me a long time I mean an lllloooonnggg time. So be nice and review. I feel good about this chapter. I did make up the beginning that's the thing that took me the longest. R&R hehe