You people are really getting me down why wont you review your gonna drive
me into depression or something. Please review. Or I'll start writing small
small small chapters.
After working for ten minutes the group managed to get into a near by bunker and secure themselves. "I cant believe we lost Teddy" Kyle said near tears Hey all I'm not going to keep writing as frequently if I don't see some reveiws. My Inuyasha story is getting tons of reviews so I think ill write for it instead. Oh it's called Silver Shadow if you're interested in reading. In conclusion REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW.
Disclaimer- for all you know I do own starcraft.
Resting inside their newly made shelter the three soldiers were breathing heavily. "How could we have left Teddy out there." Kyle muttered to nobody in particular. Raynor looked over at Kyle and , they seemed really upset. "You guys cant beat each other up about this, we need to keep our heads up. You never know when we might be attacked." Raynor cautioned the group while continuing rubbing his gun clean. So the three sat around a small radio they had found in the bunker and waited hoping a rescue squad would come soon. A little while later Raynor flipped off the radio. "Okay then I think you two should get to sleep, I'll keep first watch." Raynor told them. The others silently agreed and Raynor was left staring up at the ski through the watch hole in there bunker. "I hope that help arrives soon. It's going to be hell if we have to go back to the base alone" he thought.
Kyle woke at the sound of a gun shot. What's going on he thought flipping the dark lens on his helmet off. The sight he saw was something horrible. Teddy was standing above his long time friend and partner . There were huge slimy tentacles jutting out of the marine suit that Teddy had been wearing when had been killed. "No stop." Kyle yelled, but he was to late was dead and now Teddy was turning toward him. Kyle reached around in the dirt trying to find his gun but it was nowhere to be seen.
Raynor was out setting up the distress beacon when he was hit hard in the head. With his helmet off Raynor went out like a blown light bulb. He didn't awaken until he heard gun shots in the bunker. Running to the bunker he saw dead and Kyle trying to find his gun. Standing directly above Kyle was none other than an infested terran. Sweat dripped down his hot face as he beheld the sight before him but his reflexes as a trained veteran kicked in and he fired three shots a rifle he had donned earlier into the infested terrans back. The creature twitched dropped the gun it was holding and fell to the floor. As it hit the floor the ceiling of the bunker was blown off. "Die vermin." Screamed a GE (GE stands for genetically enhanced) hydralisk from the other side of the bunker while sending a streamed of acid at Raynor. The Marshal barely dogged the stream of acid. Hauling himself to his feet he saw an overlord pick up the infested one and the hydralisk just before it made it's escape into the smoke at enhanced speeds. Raynor stared off after listening to the weeping of Kyle and hoping more than ever that they would be rescued soon.
Well I think that was a good chapter but unfortunately you people don't support me so seriously don't expect another chapter this week because I'll have my hands full with Silver Shadow. You brought it upon yourselves. turns around and walks away from computer
After working for ten minutes the group managed to get into a near by bunker and secure themselves. "I cant believe we lost Teddy" Kyle said near tears Hey all I'm not going to keep writing as frequently if I don't see some reveiws. My Inuyasha story is getting tons of reviews so I think ill write for it instead. Oh it's called Silver Shadow if you're interested in reading. In conclusion REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW.
Disclaimer- for all you know I do own starcraft.
Resting inside their newly made shelter the three soldiers were breathing heavily. "How could we have left Teddy out there." Kyle muttered to nobody in particular. Raynor looked over at Kyle and , they seemed really upset. "You guys cant beat each other up about this, we need to keep our heads up. You never know when we might be attacked." Raynor cautioned the group while continuing rubbing his gun clean. So the three sat around a small radio they had found in the bunker and waited hoping a rescue squad would come soon. A little while later Raynor flipped off the radio. "Okay then I think you two should get to sleep, I'll keep first watch." Raynor told them. The others silently agreed and Raynor was left staring up at the ski through the watch hole in there bunker. "I hope that help arrives soon. It's going to be hell if we have to go back to the base alone" he thought.
Kyle woke at the sound of a gun shot. What's going on he thought flipping the dark lens on his helmet off. The sight he saw was something horrible. Teddy was standing above his long time friend and partner . There were huge slimy tentacles jutting out of the marine suit that Teddy had been wearing when had been killed. "No stop." Kyle yelled, but he was to late was dead and now Teddy was turning toward him. Kyle reached around in the dirt trying to find his gun but it was nowhere to be seen.
Raynor was out setting up the distress beacon when he was hit hard in the head. With his helmet off Raynor went out like a blown light bulb. He didn't awaken until he heard gun shots in the bunker. Running to the bunker he saw dead and Kyle trying to find his gun. Standing directly above Kyle was none other than an infested terran. Sweat dripped down his hot face as he beheld the sight before him but his reflexes as a trained veteran kicked in and he fired three shots a rifle he had donned earlier into the infested terrans back. The creature twitched dropped the gun it was holding and fell to the floor. As it hit the floor the ceiling of the bunker was blown off. "Die vermin." Screamed a GE (GE stands for genetically enhanced) hydralisk from the other side of the bunker while sending a streamed of acid at Raynor. The Marshal barely dogged the stream of acid. Hauling himself to his feet he saw an overlord pick up the infested one and the hydralisk just before it made it's escape into the smoke at enhanced speeds. Raynor stared off after listening to the weeping of Kyle and hoping more than ever that they would be rescued soon.
Well I think that was a good chapter but unfortunately you people don't support me so seriously don't expect another chapter this week because I'll have my hands full with Silver Shadow. You brought it upon yourselves. turns around and walks away from computer