First up… Reviewers...
People who think this is bad, and a waste of time… why do you read it, when it seems you think it isn't worth your time? Why do you bother reviewing? If you don't like it, don't read, simple as that.
Next, I actually like Dilandau, WAY more than Van… I made this as a test to see how well I can keep the characters in shape. I don't call this mary-sue… I like to call it, experimentation.
And I didn't like Hitolemy in the story at all, she was… not what I'd call right… and that really annoyed me.
If you don't like, don't review, because it will probably be a waste of time, because I'm not going to care about bad reviews…
Disclaimer: I no own Escaflowne….
Chapter 5
One other Talent I have
In the hangar, was Escaflowne, "They stole Escaflowne from me!!" Van growled, I heard them the far off foot steps, "Quick Van, I hear people coming!" I said, Van jumped up and got into Escaflowne, I heard the foot steps quicken, getting louder, Escaflowne came to life, Van made it step forward, I heard the men come through the door, Escaflowne's hand lowered, "Hurry Marina, I'm not leaving without you!" I jumped up and flipped onto the hand, "Van, what do you think you are doing? Stealing the priceless suit we found?" I heard Allen's voice say, "I am taking back what's right fully mine, since I am Van, Van Fanel, King of Fanelia!" Van yelled, Allen flinched, "King, or not, you cannot take Marina with you, you cannot leave either," Allen yelled back, "It's our decision on what we do, Allen, I thank you kindly for your hospitality, but really, we need to…"Allen butted into my speech "Van did not help you on your quest, I know you are from the mystic moon, Marina, you want to get back there, and Van hasn't helped, has he, Van I challenge you, we fight, to see if you can leave, but, no matter who wins, Marina stays here!!" Allen yelled, he jumped up to a blue Guymelef and activated it. "Who says it's my quest to get home? I don't, I would rather stay here on Gaea, away from my family, away from everything that has harmed me!" I yelled, I had had it, no one, no one ever made decisions for me… no one took notice of what I said, I growled, and flipped off Escaflowne's hand, and landed perfectly, the men were slightly surprised and took a few steps back from me, "WHAT?" I yelled, I felt really pissed off now, the men whispered "Nothing…nothing at all…" and did nervous smiles, I rolled my eyes, "Well it HAS to be something, or you wouldn't be so nervous, sheesh, you're as bad at acting over stuff, as…as VAN is!" I stated, "HEY!!!" Van yelled, their faces blanked up, I laughed, "Look at yourselves, you look so funny!" they looked at each other and laughed, I smiled, "There, now this is much better!" I turned around, the fight was about to begin, I closed my eyes, since I didn't need to see what was going on. I heard the clang of sword on metal, I heard the swivel and parry of the swords, I heard the finishing clang, the fall of a suit, the cheer of men, Van had lost…
Short… yes… but next one will be good… I promise!