Okay, this chapter is short, I KNOW, but I'm leaving in an hour and a
half and I really wanted to put up a chap to get the plot line goin'. (
Don't know why I bother. DOESN'T ANYONE UNDERSTAND WHAT'S GOING ON?
ANYBODY?!?) Oh well. If you're confused there's going to be a summary of
the story at the beginning of every chapter if you care to read it. Enjoy.
Summary: Inuyasha was killed by Naraku right in front of Kagome, and his spirit was taken by Kikyo into hell. Inuyasha's hell is that he thinks that Kagome had died, and there was nothing he could do to stop it. Kagome fled to her era, but has now returned to the Sengoku Jidai, ( Inuyasha's time) to put him to rest, and Kikyo is brooding over her life while she watches Inuyasha in hell. .
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Kikyo gazed at Inuyasha through the bars of his hell. It was odd, she thought. She had never imagined
hell to be like this. To be trapped in a nightmare for eternity... not pleasant. He was asleep, of course, like all
of the others, floating inside the small cell, just one of so many that lined the halls of hell. He was trapped in
his own mind. She wondered what he dreamed...what his hell was like. She had no idea how long she had
been here, watching him.... She thought about her own life sometimes... She had been a good person when
she was alive... But Naraku had destroyed that. ..She was not the empty shell that Urasue had made of earth
and clay... She hated Urasue for daring to disturb her rest... The shell that she created was only an
embodiment of all of the anger that had not been resolved in death... Her spirit remained inside of Kagome...
but her soul was trapped here. It was ironic that she, in life, had been the protector of the jewel of four
souls... That's what she was, torn into four pieces: Her soul, resting inside of Kagome, Her body, wandering
earth, Her life, now over, and her spirit, being tortured here... watching Inuyasha's slumbering spirit, wracked
with nightmares of hell... his breathing....slow and even.... his breathing. his breathing . And now as she
watched him, she realizes. Inuyasha was breathing.
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So how was that for a chapter? Not bad for thirty minutes hard work. ^_^ Oh well don't worry I'll post more on Monday. ( well I'll write it on Monday don't know about posting ) well, have a good weekend. Here's your review responses. If you have anything you like/love/hate with a passion/don't understand, just click that little button down there that says 'go', and write it down, and I will answer down there. Thank you.
CrystallineX- (eyes cookie hungrily, then reaches through computer screen and eats it) mmmm crunch crunch I like your review. See you guys? She says that I can update whenever I want! And I ate her cookie! mmmmmmmmmm.... thank you for your *sweet* review ^_^
Mustard Yellow Sunshine- someday i'm going to find out the inspiration for your interesting penname. ( it must have been your bi-polary-ness) I could recommend some lovely medication for your particular problem, but I got into trouble the last time I prescribed medication. oh well. I hope you keep your perky. (bows)
Sarah- SHE GETS IT! SHE UNDERSTOOD MY STORY!!!! SHE GETS A WHOLE BAG OF COOKIES!!!!!! : ) : ) : ) !!!!!!!! (on second thought just look at all those cookies...... crunch)
blahblahHOBO- another compelling screename..... now, there is a summary in chapter seven, but here you go..... INUYASHA dead. KAGOME alive. Inuyasha just thinks she dead cause he's in hell. Thanks for the review!
Summary: Inuyasha was killed by Naraku right in front of Kagome, and his spirit was taken by Kikyo into hell. Inuyasha's hell is that he thinks that Kagome had died, and there was nothing he could do to stop it. Kagome fled to her era, but has now returned to the Sengoku Jidai, ( Inuyasha's time) to put him to rest, and Kikyo is brooding over her life while she watches Inuyasha in hell. .
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Kikyo gazed at Inuyasha through the bars of his hell. It was odd, she thought. She had never imagined
hell to be like this. To be trapped in a nightmare for eternity... not pleasant. He was asleep, of course, like all
of the others, floating inside the small cell, just one of so many that lined the halls of hell. He was trapped in
his own mind. She wondered what he dreamed...what his hell was like. She had no idea how long she had
been here, watching him.... She thought about her own life sometimes... She had been a good person when
she was alive... But Naraku had destroyed that. ..She was not the empty shell that Urasue had made of earth
and clay... She hated Urasue for daring to disturb her rest... The shell that she created was only an
embodiment of all of the anger that had not been resolved in death... Her spirit remained inside of Kagome...
but her soul was trapped here. It was ironic that she, in life, had been the protector of the jewel of four
souls... That's what she was, torn into four pieces: Her soul, resting inside of Kagome, Her body, wandering
earth, Her life, now over, and her spirit, being tortured here... watching Inuyasha's slumbering spirit, wracked
with nightmares of hell... his breathing....slow and even.... his breathing. his breathing . And now as she
watched him, she realizes. Inuyasha was breathing.
.
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.
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.
.
.
.
So how was that for a chapter? Not bad for thirty minutes hard work. ^_^ Oh well don't worry I'll post more on Monday. ( well I'll write it on Monday don't know about posting ) well, have a good weekend. Here's your review responses. If you have anything you like/love/hate with a passion/don't understand, just click that little button down there that says 'go', and write it down, and I will answer down there. Thank you.
CrystallineX- (eyes cookie hungrily, then reaches through computer screen and eats it) mmmm crunch crunch I like your review. See you guys? She says that I can update whenever I want! And I ate her cookie! mmmmmmmmmm.... thank you for your *sweet* review ^_^
Mustard Yellow Sunshine- someday i'm going to find out the inspiration for your interesting penname. ( it must have been your bi-polary-ness) I could recommend some lovely medication for your particular problem, but I got into trouble the last time I prescribed medication. oh well. I hope you keep your perky. (bows)
Sarah- SHE GETS IT! SHE UNDERSTOOD MY STORY!!!! SHE GETS A WHOLE BAG OF COOKIES!!!!!! : ) : ) : ) !!!!!!!! (on second thought just look at all those cookies...... crunch)
blahblahHOBO- another compelling screename..... now, there is a summary in chapter seven, but here you go..... INUYASHA dead. KAGOME alive. Inuyasha just thinks she dead cause he's in hell. Thanks for the review!