Yin-yang 2
Hello, to all. If you are someone who has read the first story, then skip this paragraph and go
to the next. If, however, you are new to this, then allow me to enlighten you. *Cough* You are
reading the story 'Yin-yang 2.' This is not an L/G story. It is a very different kind of fan fiction. The
basic story line of the original, Yin-yang, is as follows:
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A young man has just moved to Hillridge. His name is Eric James McKader. He is the son of
Spencer and Elizabeth McKader and the younger sibling of Angela McKader. Three years prior to
the beginning, him and his mother are walking down the street, coming from a meeting with his
sensei about his next belt. However, fate intervenes, and 6 good for nothing rapists drag him and his
mother into a dark alley. She is raped by three at a time, while the other three hold Eric down and
force him to watch by gunpoint. When they are through, they leave them both to die. Eric watches
helplessly as his mother slips into the endless abyss known as death, whilst he escapes with minor
injuries. A week later, he watches his mother buried at the cemetery of her hometown, Hillridge.
Shortly after, he is met by his favorite cousin, Kate Sanders. She attempts to try and cheer him up,
but only ends up infuriating him. He assumes that she is rubbing the fact that she has a mother in his
face, and severs all ties with her. At that point in time, the old Eric McKader dies and is buried
alongside his mother. He is replaced by a new Eric McKader that does not talk and seems to hate
everyone and everything. However, his sister and father know better.
He and his family move to Hillridge, to try and help Eric confront his anger toward himself
for not being able to save his mother, and therefore kill his belief that her death was his fault.
However this was never disclosed to him. It was a joint decision made by his father and sister.
Soon after his arrival, he meets a girl named Elizabeth McGuire. He is at first uninterested
and doesn't care about her. But after a series of fate, once again, he saved her from a similar death as
his mother. She soon thinks that he is not all he seems to be, and attempts to try and get him to open
up.
She almost succeeds, but then two people go and screw it up. David Gordon, and Nick
Mayer. David had moved away from Hillridge after he had cheated on Lizzie with Claire while
drunk at a party. He did not mean for it to happen, but then that's the power of alcohol. As Lizzie
said when she found out: "You wasted your virginity on a slut. I wanted our first time to be with
each other. But now that isn't possible. Goodbye."
Nick Mayer had been an old friend of Eric's. Much like Lizzie and Miranda. But after Eric's
mom died, Eric stopped caring about anything. Nick, like Lizzie, had tried to get Eric back to
normal. But his attempts were met with violence, and Eric eventually attacked him when he got fed
up. Nick had taken the outburst too seriously and vowed to kill Eric. He tracked Eric down to
Hillridge and drove there with a girl that Eric had deep feelings for. Her name was Carla Sturbin
and had almost been Eric's first girlfriend. But, of course, when his mom died, he got all weird and
she eventually became bitchy toward him. Her purpose now was to distract Eric and Give Nick the
upper hand. She was unaware of this though.
Eric had been asked by Lizzie to teach the style of martial arts he had learned to her. He
decided with the help of his old teacher and friend, Sensei Tetsujin Moriyama, to not only teach her,
but also open a dojo for him and his students to train in. He started in the gym and had only two
classes before he received a letter from his sensei to come to Japan and have a High Councillor
christen his new dojo so that he could train properly and become an official sensei. He returns three
months later with the councillor member and with the newfound knowledge that he is in love Lizzie.
He also finds out that Kate, who is one of his students, is being abused by her step-father.
Because Eric is not totally heartless, he goes over to her house just as she is receiving her usual
beating. He defeats her step-father and calls the police. He is convicted and sentenced not on just
charges of child abuse, but also drug trafficking and other crimes. He hangs himself three months in
to his sentence.
Then, just two days before the 3rd year anniversary of Eric's mother's death, his sister
committed suicide from extreme depression caused by the deaths of two close friends. Eric was
devastated, but he didn't show it. The next day, while at school, Nick revealed himself to Eric and
proceeded to fight him in hand to hand combat. Nick knew that because Eric's sister had just died,
he would have emotional baggage during the fight and would therefore be thrown off balance
mentally. It seemed that the end had come for Eric. He was losing badly. Then Lizzie showed up and
somehow empowered Eric with a new energy. He pummeled Nick into the ground. It seemed that he
had won. But then Nick pulled out a gun and shot Eric narrowly missing his heart. Both men are
transported to the hospital. Eric was unconscious and in critical condition for three days, while Nick
was being treated for a broken arm. Nick escaped from the hospital before the police could put him
in custody. Eric woke up and heard the news about Nick. He was also told that his house and
himself would be put under protection until the police could find and arrest Nick. Eric knew that if
Nick could not get to him, he would use his own friends to lure him out. So he had his friends placed
in his house for their protection as well. He went to the funeral of his sister the next day. While there,
he revealed to Lizzie that he was in love with her. As it turned out, she loved him back.
Not soon after, Eric received a call from Nick, saying that he had Carla and would kill him
if they didn't talk. Eric reluctantly agreed and headed to the waterfront warehouse he was told to go
to.
Instead of talking however, Eric and Nick ended up fighting each other in hand to hand
combat again. This time though, Eric was the winner. Nick was arrested and Eric went back to a
normal life. That is until 5 years later...
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Wow. That went longer than I meant it to be. Well, that was the re-introductory chapter.
This was just to remind you of what happened and if you are new to the story, to tell you what
happened before this story. It would be better if you read the first story before you read this, though.
But you don't have to if you don't want to. It's just recommended. Till next time... kikiki...
mamama... kikiki... mamama...
Hello, to all. If you are someone who has read the first story, then skip this paragraph and go
to the next. If, however, you are new to this, then allow me to enlighten you. *Cough* You are
reading the story 'Yin-yang 2.' This is not an L/G story. It is a very different kind of fan fiction. The
basic story line of the original, Yin-yang, is as follows:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A young man has just moved to Hillridge. His name is Eric James McKader. He is the son of
Spencer and Elizabeth McKader and the younger sibling of Angela McKader. Three years prior to
the beginning, him and his mother are walking down the street, coming from a meeting with his
sensei about his next belt. However, fate intervenes, and 6 good for nothing rapists drag him and his
mother into a dark alley. She is raped by three at a time, while the other three hold Eric down and
force him to watch by gunpoint. When they are through, they leave them both to die. Eric watches
helplessly as his mother slips into the endless abyss known as death, whilst he escapes with minor
injuries. A week later, he watches his mother buried at the cemetery of her hometown, Hillridge.
Shortly after, he is met by his favorite cousin, Kate Sanders. She attempts to try and cheer him up,
but only ends up infuriating him. He assumes that she is rubbing the fact that she has a mother in his
face, and severs all ties with her. At that point in time, the old Eric McKader dies and is buried
alongside his mother. He is replaced by a new Eric McKader that does not talk and seems to hate
everyone and everything. However, his sister and father know better.
He and his family move to Hillridge, to try and help Eric confront his anger toward himself
for not being able to save his mother, and therefore kill his belief that her death was his fault.
However this was never disclosed to him. It was a joint decision made by his father and sister.
Soon after his arrival, he meets a girl named Elizabeth McGuire. He is at first uninterested
and doesn't care about her. But after a series of fate, once again, he saved her from a similar death as
his mother. She soon thinks that he is not all he seems to be, and attempts to try and get him to open
up.
She almost succeeds, but then two people go and screw it up. David Gordon, and Nick
Mayer. David had moved away from Hillridge after he had cheated on Lizzie with Claire while
drunk at a party. He did not mean for it to happen, but then that's the power of alcohol. As Lizzie
said when she found out: "You wasted your virginity on a slut. I wanted our first time to be with
each other. But now that isn't possible. Goodbye."
Nick Mayer had been an old friend of Eric's. Much like Lizzie and Miranda. But after Eric's
mom died, Eric stopped caring about anything. Nick, like Lizzie, had tried to get Eric back to
normal. But his attempts were met with violence, and Eric eventually attacked him when he got fed
up. Nick had taken the outburst too seriously and vowed to kill Eric. He tracked Eric down to
Hillridge and drove there with a girl that Eric had deep feelings for. Her name was Carla Sturbin
and had almost been Eric's first girlfriend. But, of course, when his mom died, he got all weird and
she eventually became bitchy toward him. Her purpose now was to distract Eric and Give Nick the
upper hand. She was unaware of this though.
Eric had been asked by Lizzie to teach the style of martial arts he had learned to her. He
decided with the help of his old teacher and friend, Sensei Tetsujin Moriyama, to not only teach her,
but also open a dojo for him and his students to train in. He started in the gym and had only two
classes before he received a letter from his sensei to come to Japan and have a High Councillor
christen his new dojo so that he could train properly and become an official sensei. He returns three
months later with the councillor member and with the newfound knowledge that he is in love Lizzie.
He also finds out that Kate, who is one of his students, is being abused by her step-father.
Because Eric is not totally heartless, he goes over to her house just as she is receiving her usual
beating. He defeats her step-father and calls the police. He is convicted and sentenced not on just
charges of child abuse, but also drug trafficking and other crimes. He hangs himself three months in
to his sentence.
Then, just two days before the 3rd year anniversary of Eric's mother's death, his sister
committed suicide from extreme depression caused by the deaths of two close friends. Eric was
devastated, but he didn't show it. The next day, while at school, Nick revealed himself to Eric and
proceeded to fight him in hand to hand combat. Nick knew that because Eric's sister had just died,
he would have emotional baggage during the fight and would therefore be thrown off balance
mentally. It seemed that the end had come for Eric. He was losing badly. Then Lizzie showed up and
somehow empowered Eric with a new energy. He pummeled Nick into the ground. It seemed that he
had won. But then Nick pulled out a gun and shot Eric narrowly missing his heart. Both men are
transported to the hospital. Eric was unconscious and in critical condition for three days, while Nick
was being treated for a broken arm. Nick escaped from the hospital before the police could put him
in custody. Eric woke up and heard the news about Nick. He was also told that his house and
himself would be put under protection until the police could find and arrest Nick. Eric knew that if
Nick could not get to him, he would use his own friends to lure him out. So he had his friends placed
in his house for their protection as well. He went to the funeral of his sister the next day. While there,
he revealed to Lizzie that he was in love with her. As it turned out, she loved him back.
Not soon after, Eric received a call from Nick, saying that he had Carla and would kill him
if they didn't talk. Eric reluctantly agreed and headed to the waterfront warehouse he was told to go
to.
Instead of talking however, Eric and Nick ended up fighting each other in hand to hand
combat again. This time though, Eric was the winner. Nick was arrested and Eric went back to a
normal life. That is until 5 years later...
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Wow. That went longer than I meant it to be. Well, that was the re-introductory chapter.
This was just to remind you of what happened and if you are new to the story, to tell you what
happened before this story. It would be better if you read the first story before you read this, though.
But you don't have to if you don't want to. It's just recommended. Till next time... kikiki...
mamama... kikiki... mamama...