Heres chapter 5! Please R&R! And don't worry about criticism, I need to know what I'm doing wrong, so any advice would be great!
Note: I based this chapter on a song called 'Taking over me' by Evanescence.

Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters, all I own is the plotJ

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CHAPTER 5

Previously on Buffy the Vampire Slayer…sorry I just felt like saying that!
Anyway, in the last chapter we learnt about your past and a bit about you. So continuing on…
You leaned over the side of the boat, the sea spraying on your face. Maybe the life of a pirate wasn't as bad as you thought it would be. You looked over at Jack standing at the helm holding his compass in one hand and steering with the other you thought he looked quite handsome standing there. You paused for a second, you thought Jack was handsome? You laughed silently to yourself at this. It could never be possible, a pirate and a bar waitress, it just wasn't right. And besides, Jack wasn't the type of guy for you anyway, you're probably better off friends. You turned away from looking at Jack, to focus down at the water again. But as you looked down upon the crystal water you felt as though you were lying to yourself.

For the rest of the day you spent by yourself, trying to convince yourself you weren't falling for Jack. The day seemed to go by so fast, that you soon found yourself lying down in bed. You now shared a cabin with another woman of the crew-Anamaria. She was quite tall with shoulder length black hair and tanned skin. You had got to know her a bit through conversation, and she was quite nice. As you lay awake in bed, you tried so hard not to think of Jack. But it was if the thought wouldn't go away. You tossed and turned for what seemed like hours, you were so tired yet it was though you couldn't sleep. Giving up on sleeping you decided to get some fresh air. You slowly crept out of bed trying not to wake Anamaria, and went out on the deck.

But there was someone already on the deck, it was Jack. This really wasn't the person you wanted to see right now. You were about to turn around and go back to your cabin, but it was too late Jack had already seen you. "Ello luv, can't ye sleep?", you were still a little shaken with your thoughts on him, so you just slowly nodded in reply. He was standing at the side of the ship, so you walked over and joined him. "And what about you" you said in curiosity. "I can't sleep either". You nodded at this. There was silence for awhile, things felt awkward. He opened his mouth to say something, but paused. Finally he said something, "Well, luv I'm off to get some sleep. Night". At this you felt a little disappointed for some reason, but you where feeling tired now. "Goodnight" you said as you turned around and walked back to your cabin. As you climbed back into bed, a million thought raced through your head but now you were to tired to think. You closed your eyes and slowly drifted off into a deep sleep.
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And there you go! I tried to make this chapter a little longer, and a bit more detailed. I hope I have succeeded in this!
Thankyou for reading, I hope you enjoyed it! Chapter 6 will be up very very soon!