Motoko's Journal.2
~~~~~~Author's notes ((hehe))~~~~
Tokyo fox : thanks for the suggestion, I just did 1 POV in the 1st
chappie cuz I don't want it to be full of Motoko's POVs, and I
usually do Motoko's POV in a very long matter
Mia: thanks you were the first person to review!
((Arigato, tu sya, Salamat and thank you))
And for the other ppl, THANKS!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Motoko's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I was holding my bag tightly on the way to school, I must looked
like a idiot
When I started writing on the journal I felt so addictive ((Can't
think of another synonym for this)) and so attached to the book that
I felt that it is my only friend.
I'm very eager to write on it, but disappointed because I'm too busy
practicing
"Motoko!" I saw Shinobu running towards me, "Yes?" I looked back,
she breathed deeply and pause for a minute before she spoke.
"Are you going to be home late?" she asked me, "I'm going to be a
little late, so If it's already dinner, no need to wait for me" I
said, "Oh okay, bye" she hurried away.
When I entered the class, "It's Motoko-sempai" I heard 3 girls
whispering, I sat on my table then they kept following me.
"You guys are creeping me out" I said under my breath
Then the teacher entered, "Good Morning" she said, then she opened
her book and began the lesson
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kitsune's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kyle keeps talking and talking. I'm getting bored
"Ok" I kept repeating the same word over and over again, "I'm dizzy,
I need rest" I mumbled, he looked at me then said "Okay" then he
left.
"At last peace and quiet" I whispered to myself, Many guys have
tried talking to me and courting me, but they can't fool me.
They only like my body, I was like that last year but seem that I've
change "Sake." I stretched my arms!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Motoko's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The class was dismissed after the bell rang, "Time for practice" I
glance around.
As I walk towards the gym building I saw the 3 girls again, I ran.
"I can't lose them" I breathed heavily! So I just continued
practicing as they were at the benches screaming my name.
But I noticed a guy, "He must be from another school, cause I
haven't seen him before" I said to myself, He was staring eagerly a
me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Troy's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay I'm here. she is so cool, I'm from another school but she seems
the only other school that has a great potential in swordsmanship.
I know my brother is also great, but she seem different, Brother is
the greatest swordsman in our school he won many battles that other
schools challenged!
I was sited near Motoko-sempai's bag, Then I noticed a violet thing.
I peeked inside and took it out, "A book?!" I said to myself, Motoko
was never a book lover.
"Journal, I am not good with writing I prefer fighting." I read but.
Silence befall the surroundings, I glanced around and saw Motoko
glaring at me!
"I'm in deep trouble, I'm dead." I mumbled to myself, then she
charged towards me,punched me on the face and All I know was I
blacked out.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Motoko's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"That Imbecile!" I shouted at the wall I sat down on a bench and
took the time to write.
Journal,
That imbecile, a guy went to our practicing area and sat beside my
bag he was glancing at my bag. Then the most annoying thing is He
read the first page of you!
I knew he wasn't studying in our school cause I never seen him
before, He was always following me to our practices, But reading you
was the last straw! I had enough
I kicked his face and punched him, I was about to kill him but the
people around told me not to.((sorry if too Barbaric))
It's like opening and looking at a women's closet, He is like a
pervert he reads private things! Secrets, everything!
He deserves to be killed! He's reading my journal!!!!!
I just want to go home relax and sit on the hot springs!
Got to go! Ja ne!
-MOTOKO
I closed the book.
I stood up and began to head towards home but suddenly someone pass
through and bumped me and I almost fell!!!
"Hey! You! You almost made me fall off the water!" I shouted, he
looked at me seriously he was going to apologized but.
I did the most dumb thing
"I've had it! A guy read my diary and I punched and kicked him! Now
you almost let me fall!" I spit it out of my mouth, he stared at me
then his facial features hardened and he's maroon eyes glowed.
"So you are the one that almost killed my little brother" he barked,
I flinched a bit but returned back to normal
"Well! He peeked inside a woman's bag, and read her foremost private
diary!" I snapped, he pause for a minute.
"It is still not alright to beat up my brother!" he pulled my arm,
"Ouch!" I glared at him, "Reading private stuff is very serious!" I
bite the mysterious guy,
"Maybe that's what you taught your brother to do! To peek at women's
bags!" I held my sword.
"I challenge you to a battle with sword fighting!!!!" he pointed at
me, "I accept!" I replied.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hey how did you like this one? Who is this mysterious guy?
Is Motoko going to win in this challenge?
Is this chappie good? Plz review! My first Love hina fic!
Ja ne!
Sorry if there is wrong grammer or spelling!
- Nicz
~~~~~~Author's notes ((hehe))~~~~
Tokyo fox : thanks for the suggestion, I just did 1 POV in the 1st
chappie cuz I don't want it to be full of Motoko's POVs, and I
usually do Motoko's POV in a very long matter
Mia: thanks you were the first person to review!
((Arigato, tu sya, Salamat and thank you))
And for the other ppl, THANKS!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Motoko's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I was holding my bag tightly on the way to school, I must looked
like a idiot
When I started writing on the journal I felt so addictive ((Can't
think of another synonym for this)) and so attached to the book that
I felt that it is my only friend.
I'm very eager to write on it, but disappointed because I'm too busy
practicing
"Motoko!" I saw Shinobu running towards me, "Yes?" I looked back,
she breathed deeply and pause for a minute before she spoke.
"Are you going to be home late?" she asked me, "I'm going to be a
little late, so If it's already dinner, no need to wait for me" I
said, "Oh okay, bye" she hurried away.
When I entered the class, "It's Motoko-sempai" I heard 3 girls
whispering, I sat on my table then they kept following me.
"You guys are creeping me out" I said under my breath
Then the teacher entered, "Good Morning" she said, then she opened
her book and began the lesson
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kitsune's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kyle keeps talking and talking. I'm getting bored
"Ok" I kept repeating the same word over and over again, "I'm dizzy,
I need rest" I mumbled, he looked at me then said "Okay" then he
left.
"At last peace and quiet" I whispered to myself, Many guys have
tried talking to me and courting me, but they can't fool me.
They only like my body, I was like that last year but seem that I've
change "Sake." I stretched my arms!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Motoko's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The class was dismissed after the bell rang, "Time for practice" I
glance around.
As I walk towards the gym building I saw the 3 girls again, I ran.
"I can't lose them" I breathed heavily! So I just continued
practicing as they were at the benches screaming my name.
But I noticed a guy, "He must be from another school, cause I
haven't seen him before" I said to myself, He was staring eagerly a
me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Troy's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay I'm here. she is so cool, I'm from another school but she seems
the only other school that has a great potential in swordsmanship.
I know my brother is also great, but she seem different, Brother is
the greatest swordsman in our school he won many battles that other
schools challenged!
I was sited near Motoko-sempai's bag, Then I noticed a violet thing.
I peeked inside and took it out, "A book?!" I said to myself, Motoko
was never a book lover.
"Journal, I am not good with writing I prefer fighting." I read but.
Silence befall the surroundings, I glanced around and saw Motoko
glaring at me!
"I'm in deep trouble, I'm dead." I mumbled to myself, then she
charged towards me,punched me on the face and All I know was I
blacked out.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Motoko's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"That Imbecile!" I shouted at the wall I sat down on a bench and
took the time to write.
Journal,
That imbecile, a guy went to our practicing area and sat beside my
bag he was glancing at my bag. Then the most annoying thing is He
read the first page of you!
I knew he wasn't studying in our school cause I never seen him
before, He was always following me to our practices, But reading you
was the last straw! I had enough
I kicked his face and punched him, I was about to kill him but the
people around told me not to.((sorry if too Barbaric))
It's like opening and looking at a women's closet, He is like a
pervert he reads private things! Secrets, everything!
He deserves to be killed! He's reading my journal!!!!!
I just want to go home relax and sit on the hot springs!
Got to go! Ja ne!
-MOTOKO
I closed the book.
I stood up and began to head towards home but suddenly someone pass
through and bumped me and I almost fell!!!
"Hey! You! You almost made me fall off the water!" I shouted, he
looked at me seriously he was going to apologized but.
I did the most dumb thing
"I've had it! A guy read my diary and I punched and kicked him! Now
you almost let me fall!" I spit it out of my mouth, he stared at me
then his facial features hardened and he's maroon eyes glowed.
"So you are the one that almost killed my little brother" he barked,
I flinched a bit but returned back to normal
"Well! He peeked inside a woman's bag, and read her foremost private
diary!" I snapped, he pause for a minute.
"It is still not alright to beat up my brother!" he pulled my arm,
"Ouch!" I glared at him, "Reading private stuff is very serious!" I
bite the mysterious guy,
"Maybe that's what you taught your brother to do! To peek at women's
bags!" I held my sword.
"I challenge you to a battle with sword fighting!!!!" he pointed at
me, "I accept!" I replied.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hey how did you like this one? Who is this mysterious guy?
Is Motoko going to win in this challenge?
Is this chappie good? Plz review! My first Love hina fic!
Ja ne!
Sorry if there is wrong grammer or spelling!
- Nicz