Hey, y'all. I just wanted to say that my first chapter was revised due to a mistake pointed out by multicolouredsaz. I stared my story with May first for Mia's journal, and I TOTALLY forgot that that is her birthday! I hope y'all can forgive me for my boo-boo! And thanks for pointing it out for me! (now do y'all see how important reviews are?) so R & R please so I can catch any other mistakes I might have made and so I can get some ideas! I love ya'll dearly! And get yr mind outta the gutter!