Title: Once is Not Enough
Summary: Lorelai is pregnant and meets a man that she likes.
Note: The reviews on my other fan fic, "Coffee" encourge me to write another story. Also, should I continue this one? I am having a bad feeling that it's not good. :(
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"What's your name, hon?" The old assistant asked, while peering over her big rimmed glasses.
"Lorelai Gilmore." Lorelai replied with a smile.
"Is anybody going to be with you?"
"Chris should be here, soon."
"Okay, hon. Have a seat."
Lorelai was seventeen and eight months pregnant. She sat down, thinking it'll be hard to get back up.
She sighed and then smiled at the man she sat beside. He nodded and nervously drummed his fingers against the arm rest.
"Are you nervous?" Lorelai asked him as he kept drumming his fingers on the arm rest.
"Yeah, my sister is expecting a baby soon." He stopped drumming his fingers and linked both of his fingers together.
"Oh, really? I am expecting a girl next month."
"Yeah, I can tell." He said, motioning to her big belly.
She laughed and rubbed her balloon size belly.
"You look too young to be having a child."
She looked at him and then nodded.
"I'm seventeen. Going to be eighteen in a couple months."
He nodded but didn't say anything else.
The old assistant got up and told Lorelai Dr. Kelli is expecting her now.
"Are you the father?"
"N-"
"Come on." The old lady said to both of them.
"But he's--" Lorelai said, while pointing at him. She had a grip on her arm. Which cause her to stop talking.
She rushed both of them into the doctor's office and closed the door.
Lorelai laid back on the table, she looked at him. Smiling.
He turned the door knob.
"Where are you going? Apparently, your the father." She laughed.
He looked at the young girl before him.
"I'm kidding."
"Yeah, I knew that."
Suddenly the door opened and a young boy came in.
He walked to her, kissing her forehead.
"Chris, where have you been?"
She reached for his hand.
"Working, I came here as quick as I could."
She smiled and his eyes stared at the man that was by the door. He then looked at her.
"Who is he?"
She shrugged.
"A guy."
"Do you know him?"
"No, apparently he's the father."
Chris looked at her.
"Your kidding, right?"
"Why does everybody take me seriously?"
The door open again, and Dr. Kelli came in.
"How are we doing?" She asked, looking down at her clipboard.
"Goo-"
"Uh, I better go." The man said, walking out the door.
"Thanks for keeping me company!" Lorelai called out before he closed it.
Dr. Kelli repeated herself.
"How are we doing?
"Good, but everything cramps. My legs, my back and my ankles are 10 times bigger than the original size!"
Dr. Kelli laughed.
"That is what happens when a woman gets pregnant."
Lorelai nodded.
"Anything else bothering you?"
She hesitated for a minute. "No."
"Okay, let's take a look at the baby."
Lorelai lifted up her shirt and it revealed an over size belly.
"It's getting bigger, and bigger--" Lorelai's voice was cut off by the sound of a heart beat.
"See there," Kelli said, pointing to the monitor. "There's the head."
"Awww, what a pretty big head she has!"
"There are her toes and fingers." Dr. Kelli pointed out.
"Look honey, she has your nose!" Chris stated, pointing to wear the nose was.
"She has your ears!" Lorelai said, smiling up at him.
"She's going to be one beautiful girl."
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With the diagram in her hand, she was being wheeled away by Chris. She saw the man in front of the big window where it showed all the newborns.
"Oh, honey. Wait a minute."
She got up from the wheel chair and walked next to him.
He crossed his arms across his chest. He looked at her when she appeared beside him.
"How did it go?" He asked her.
"Good, did she have her baby?"
He nodded and pointed to the baby.
"He's so cute!"
He nodded, again.
"How do you know it's a 'he'?" He asked her.
"Well, the girls have a pink hat and the boys have a blue hat."
"Oh, I see."
She looked at the other babies.
She whispered to him.
"Your nephew is the cutest baby in the room. I hope the other babies don't give him the ugliness."
He looked at her, and then nodded.
"I hope not, either."
She look back at the baby.
She read the name that was written in front of his crib.
"Jessica."
"Yeah, they messed up on the name. His name is Jess."
"Oh, Thank Goodness! I would feel sorry for that kid at school. Teasing him because he had a girl's name!"
He laughed for the first time.
She laughed with him.
"So, what's your name?" He asked her, curious.
"Lorelai, yours?"
"Luke."
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Is it good? Should I continue? What do you think?
Summary: Lorelai is pregnant and meets a man that she likes.
Note: The reviews on my other fan fic, "Coffee" encourge me to write another story. Also, should I continue this one? I am having a bad feeling that it's not good. :(
* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ *
"What's your name, hon?" The old assistant asked, while peering over her big rimmed glasses.
"Lorelai Gilmore." Lorelai replied with a smile.
"Is anybody going to be with you?"
"Chris should be here, soon."
"Okay, hon. Have a seat."
Lorelai was seventeen and eight months pregnant. She sat down, thinking it'll be hard to get back up.
She sighed and then smiled at the man she sat beside. He nodded and nervously drummed his fingers against the arm rest.
"Are you nervous?" Lorelai asked him as he kept drumming his fingers on the arm rest.
"Yeah, my sister is expecting a baby soon." He stopped drumming his fingers and linked both of his fingers together.
"Oh, really? I am expecting a girl next month."
"Yeah, I can tell." He said, motioning to her big belly.
She laughed and rubbed her balloon size belly.
"You look too young to be having a child."
She looked at him and then nodded.
"I'm seventeen. Going to be eighteen in a couple months."
He nodded but didn't say anything else.
The old assistant got up and told Lorelai Dr. Kelli is expecting her now.
"Are you the father?"
"N-"
"Come on." The old lady said to both of them.
"But he's--" Lorelai said, while pointing at him. She had a grip on her arm. Which cause her to stop talking.
She rushed both of them into the doctor's office and closed the door.
Lorelai laid back on the table, she looked at him. Smiling.
He turned the door knob.
"Where are you going? Apparently, your the father." She laughed.
He looked at the young girl before him.
"I'm kidding."
"Yeah, I knew that."
Suddenly the door opened and a young boy came in.
He walked to her, kissing her forehead.
"Chris, where have you been?"
She reached for his hand.
"Working, I came here as quick as I could."
She smiled and his eyes stared at the man that was by the door. He then looked at her.
"Who is he?"
She shrugged.
"A guy."
"Do you know him?"
"No, apparently he's the father."
Chris looked at her.
"Your kidding, right?"
"Why does everybody take me seriously?"
The door open again, and Dr. Kelli came in.
"How are we doing?" She asked, looking down at her clipboard.
"Goo-"
"Uh, I better go." The man said, walking out the door.
"Thanks for keeping me company!" Lorelai called out before he closed it.
Dr. Kelli repeated herself.
"How are we doing?
"Good, but everything cramps. My legs, my back and my ankles are 10 times bigger than the original size!"
Dr. Kelli laughed.
"That is what happens when a woman gets pregnant."
Lorelai nodded.
"Anything else bothering you?"
She hesitated for a minute. "No."
"Okay, let's take a look at the baby."
Lorelai lifted up her shirt and it revealed an over size belly.
"It's getting bigger, and bigger--" Lorelai's voice was cut off by the sound of a heart beat.
"See there," Kelli said, pointing to the monitor. "There's the head."
"Awww, what a pretty big head she has!"
"There are her toes and fingers." Dr. Kelli pointed out.
"Look honey, she has your nose!" Chris stated, pointing to wear the nose was.
"She has your ears!" Lorelai said, smiling up at him.
"She's going to be one beautiful girl."
* * *
With the diagram in her hand, she was being wheeled away by Chris. She saw the man in front of the big window where it showed all the newborns.
"Oh, honey. Wait a minute."
She got up from the wheel chair and walked next to him.
He crossed his arms across his chest. He looked at her when she appeared beside him.
"How did it go?" He asked her.
"Good, did she have her baby?"
He nodded and pointed to the baby.
"He's so cute!"
He nodded, again.
"How do you know it's a 'he'?" He asked her.
"Well, the girls have a pink hat and the boys have a blue hat."
"Oh, I see."
She looked at the other babies.
She whispered to him.
"Your nephew is the cutest baby in the room. I hope the other babies don't give him the ugliness."
He looked at her, and then nodded.
"I hope not, either."
She look back at the baby.
She read the name that was written in front of his crib.
"Jessica."
"Yeah, they messed up on the name. His name is Jess."
"Oh, Thank Goodness! I would feel sorry for that kid at school. Teasing him because he had a girl's name!"
He laughed for the first time.
She laughed with him.
"So, what's your name?" He asked her, curious.
"Lorelai, yours?"
"Luke."
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Is it good? Should I continue? What do you think?