Terribly sorry, mates, this isn't a chapter, but more of a plea for help…
I tried uploading this before, but I found out that putting a link to another website in your chapters is a no no and it. So, I am sorry for that.
First of all, I need help!!! I can't do everything at once!! I first wrote this, and it wasn't canonical enough. So I fixed it, but then Victoria became too Mary Sue-ish. And also, as someone said, Jack Sparrow is out of character. HELP!!!
Secondly, my next chapter is going to be a fencing lesson. My fencing lessons don't actually start until April, so until then, I have no idea how to make it good and non-cliché. Also, I need your opinion-when do you want them to actually fall in love?? Being a hopeless romantic myself, I, as you all have seen, can't control myself if my life depended on it. In fact, as soon as I started writing this, I already had the romantic part planned out, and of course, Jack is out of character. SO HeLP ME!!
I also want to know how much longer this should be before I reach the end. And to give you a fair warning, it might not be such a happy ending, but that's why I shall sequelize!! I will only write more, though, if you all help me! So, if you don't mind, click that lil' button in the corner and review me some help!!
And I'd also be much obliged if you would review my story on fictionpress, because I have to turn it in for a grade in my Creative Writing class.
http(colon)//www(dot)fictionpress(dot)com/~obsessedstalker
There, just replace the (dots) and (colons) with the actual symbols. My story is Opposites Attract. Thank you loves!! ^_~