Comfort
Shu This is the last chapter of Comfort. I had fun writing it. Enjoy!
Disclaimer: No I don't own DBZ/GT.. (even though im sure we all wish we do.)
text goes here = This type of talking are thoughts
text goes here = This type of talking.. is just normal talking
(text goes here) = This type of talking.. is just me butting in to make a little note.
Ages: Pan 18/ Bra 17/ Trunks 31/ Goten 30 No one else really matters.
In this chapter there's going to be a lot of talking, so I sort of changed the format to this.
Person 1: (talking here) Person 2: (talking here)
Chapter 10 – FOOD DISPENSER
The closet door was open ajar. Two beady little eyes were watching Chi-chi and Bulma as they were making breakfast. Everyone else was asleep. Drool was slowly dripping from the creature's mouth.
Creature: I'm Hungry!!!!! The creature could smell the delicious pancakes. There were easily over 10000 of them on the table. He used his light speed to fly in and grab 30 at a time. Bulma and Chi-chi were too busy to notice them missing. The savage creature hungrily scarfed down the pancakes. Next he would use his ki to make the pancakes float INTO the closet! But Chi-chi was too fast! She swung her broom and smacked the creature on the head!
Goku: (Walks out of the closet) "Damn Chi-chi. That hurt." Chi-chi: "Maybe next time you won't steal pancakes." Bulma: "How many did you take?" Goku: "Only about 40!" Bulma: "Damn. You're worse then when Trunks was younger." Trunks: (Walks into the kitches) "What about me?" Bulma: "Nothing. Eat some pancakes." Trunks: (Takes the plate of pancakes and goes to the living room) Bulma: "Ugh... There were over 10000 panckes here. Chi-chi, keep cooking, I'll be back.
3 Hours Later
Goku/Pan/Bra/Gohan/Trunks: "FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!" Vegeta: "Where is Bulma?" Bulma: (Jumps into the kitchen. "For now on we eat outside. Follow me!"
Everyone follow Bulma outside only to se a giant machine. Bulma presses a button and all of a sudden the machine starts spurting out breakfast meals at random. In gigantic properties.
Goku: "OH MY GOD!! Bulma!" (Runs to Bulma) "MARRY ME!!!" Chi-Chi: "Whaaaat!?!?!" (Smacks Goku in the head) Vegeta: "HOW DARE YOU!!!" Trunks: "Uh... How do we stop the machine?" Bulma: "I knew I forgot something!"
The machine continued to spurt out breakfast in enormous amounts. Goku was forced to eat all the food. Things continued this way until....
Vegeta: "BIG BANG ATTACK!!!!" (Vegeta fired his big bang attack directly at the Food Dispenser) Goku: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (Goku powered up to SSJ4 and started his attack) JUBEI! KA-ME-HA-ME-HA!!!!
(For those of you who hvaen't seen DBGT (Dragonball GT) yet, the Jubei form is 10 Ka-me-ha-me-ha's put together to make maximum damage. It's Goku's most powerful attack in his SSJ4 form.)
Vegeta: O.O ..... .;;;; Goku: "Why!?!?! Why did you do it!!?? She never hurt you!! She made me soo happy!! Why??" Vegeta: "She got in the way of our training. In the end you would have fallen in love with her! I had to do it For the survival of the Saiyan Race. Bulma: "Goku will you stop I? You're destroying my yard. I can make another dispenser. It's very simple. This time I'll even put a STOP button on it. Goku: "NO! It's not the same. Not without Betsy!" Bulma: (Sweatdrops) Betsy!?
The tears in his eyes turn into flames
Vegeta: -.-;;; Goku: (Powers up) "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Vegeta: "Damnit, he's angry..." (Powers up) "AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!"
The earth trembled and quaked as the two most powerful saiyans (Shu: FUCK ALL YOU GOHAN FREAKS) powered up to the Rage Form.
Goten: "Trunks, did you see it?" Trunks: "Yeah, I did. Now we know how to use it too!" Trunks/Goten: "AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!"
Lightning thundered all around. The ground opened up in many places as magma flowed all around the four Enraged saiyans.
Chi-Chi: (Gigantic Sweatdrop) "It's jus a food dispenser!" Goku: xX "Just a food dispenser!?!?!?!? I don't know who you are anymore!!!" Vegeta & Goku: "Jubei!! – Final!! – Kameha – Flash!! – Me-HAAA!!!" Goten & Trunks: "Fu-sion-HA!!"
In a gigantic blinding beam of faslkf light (I don't like being descriptive -.-) everyone but the newly transformed being was blinded.
??????????: "Vegeta! Goku! Fuse and fight us!"
Vegeta & Goku: "Gotenks!?" ??????????: "The name is Gotenks Rage!" Vegeta & Goku: "Oh shi—"
In a second beam of blinding light Gogeta Rage appeared.
Gotenks Rage: "You geezers have been trying to get to Rage form all this time. But you didn't even know how powerful your own sons are! We will surpass you!!" Gogeta Rage: "Bring it on shorty!!"
Gotens R. powered up. But instead of his energy being emitted, FLAMES were emitted. Gotenks charged at Gogeta and threw flames into his eyes. Gogeta dodged the attack and countered with a bolt of electricity going straight through Gotenk's body. He snapped, crackled and popped on his way down.. (Shu: MMmmmmm Rice krispies... ahhhhh)
Gohan: (Shivered) "God damn! That had to hurt!"
Gotenks rebound from the attack and flames burst into Gogeta's hair.
Gogeta: "YOU BASTARD! You burned my hair!" Gotenks: "PAY MORE ATTENTION THEN!!"
Gogeta grabbed Gotenks' hair and ripped out a huge chunk of it.
Gotenks: "AHHH!!! THAT HURT YOU JERK!!!" Gogeta: (Smirked) "Maybe YOU should pay more attention." Gotenks: "That's it! 'Flames of Hell!'"
Gotenks had two gigantic fireballs in each hand. He started to spin extremely fast until he made a flaming tornado. Gogeta got sucked into it. Screams could be heard from the tornado. Gogeta hit the ground. The tornado turned upwards and drove straight down into Gogeta's back. Gogeta's shirt quickly burned off. Gogeta crossed his arms across his face and soon there were 6 of himself.
Gogeta 1 – Final Flash Gogeta 2 – Ka-me-ha-me-ha Gogeta 3 – Jubei K-me-ha-me-ha Gogeta 4 – Big Bang Gogeta 5 – Gallit Gun Gogeta 6 – Kaio-ken
Gogeta 1/2/3/5 formed a square around Gotenks. Gogeta 4 floated above Gotenks, with his hands ready. Gogeta 6 flew into the sky and powered up.
Gotenks: "What the hell is this?" Gogeta 1: "FINAL FLASH!!" Gogeta 2: "KA-ME-HA-ME-HA!!!" Gogeta 3: "JUBEI-KA-ME-HA-ME-HA!!" Gogeta 5: "GALLIT GUN!!" Gogeta 6: "KAIO-KEN!!"
Gogeta 6 charged at Gotenks. The 4 beams kept Gotenks in place while slowly wearing him out. Gogeta 6 hit Gotenks in the head from above and knocked him into the ground. The 4 beams continued to force Gotenks into the ground.
Gogeta 4: "BIG-BANG ATTACK!!!"
Gogeta 6 flew into the air and slowly started to build up his power for a Spirit Bomb. Gogeta 1/2/3/5 released their beams and let them explode. Then they flew into Gogeta 6's spirit bomb making it half the size of the sun. The big bang exploded and Gogeta 4 then flew into the spirit bomb to make it even bigger. Gotenks had fallen into a hole in the ground because of the impact from all the attacks. He had finally climbed out.
Gotenks: (Looks up at the Spirit Bomb) "Ouch...."
The spirit bomb was launched at Gotenks and it exploded taking the Earth with it.
THE END?
Shu Just to clear a few things up for you. First of all, Bob didn't die from Vegeta's attack from Rage mode. He and all th eother evil in the world died when Gogeta Rage used his spirit bomb. And the earth couldn't have been destroyed because it is made up of Pure Energy. Gotenks also didn't get hurt because of the same reason. Goku eventually got oer the food dispenser because Bulma made him a smaller more portable version of it. Vegeta ended up perfecting the Rage form and eventually surpassed Goku. Goten and Trunks trained in their Gotenks Rage form everyday. They also perfected it but was no match for Geogeta Rage. They did however put the 'Flames of Hell' and 'Gogeta Combo' together to make an even stronger attack. And what of Pan and Bra? Well....
Meanwhile in Bra's Bedroom
Pan is laying in bed anked and Bra is on top of her, also naked. Bra kisses Pan and slowly runs her tongue over her neck.
Pan: "Ahh... Bra.. go lower..." Bra: "Hai..."
Shu I decided against the Lemon.. But I hope you like the ending anyway... I doubt I'd come out with a 'sequel'. I'm currently working on a different story on Don't expect it anytime soon though. In a few months just do a search for my author name 'Shusays' You'll find it.. BYEE!!!!!
Shu This is the last chapter of Comfort. I had fun writing it. Enjoy!
Disclaimer: No I don't own DBZ/GT.. (even though im sure we all wish we do.)
text goes here = This type of talking are thoughts
text goes here = This type of talking.. is just normal talking
(text goes here) = This type of talking.. is just me butting in to make a little note.
Ages: Pan 18/ Bra 17/ Trunks 31/ Goten 30 No one else really matters.
In this chapter there's going to be a lot of talking, so I sort of changed the format to this.
Person 1: (talking here) Person 2: (talking here)
Chapter 10 – FOOD DISPENSER
The closet door was open ajar. Two beady little eyes were watching Chi-chi and Bulma as they were making breakfast. Everyone else was asleep. Drool was slowly dripping from the creature's mouth.
Creature: I'm Hungry!!!!! The creature could smell the delicious pancakes. There were easily over 10000 of them on the table. He used his light speed to fly in and grab 30 at a time. Bulma and Chi-chi were too busy to notice them missing. The savage creature hungrily scarfed down the pancakes. Next he would use his ki to make the pancakes float INTO the closet! But Chi-chi was too fast! She swung her broom and smacked the creature on the head!
Goku: (Walks out of the closet) "Damn Chi-chi. That hurt." Chi-chi: "Maybe next time you won't steal pancakes." Bulma: "How many did you take?" Goku: "Only about 40!" Bulma: "Damn. You're worse then when Trunks was younger." Trunks: (Walks into the kitches) "What about me?" Bulma: "Nothing. Eat some pancakes." Trunks: (Takes the plate of pancakes and goes to the living room) Bulma: "Ugh... There were over 10000 panckes here. Chi-chi, keep cooking, I'll be back.
3 Hours Later
Goku/Pan/Bra/Gohan/Trunks: "FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!" Vegeta: "Where is Bulma?" Bulma: (Jumps into the kitchen. "For now on we eat outside. Follow me!"
Everyone follow Bulma outside only to se a giant machine. Bulma presses a button and all of a sudden the machine starts spurting out breakfast meals at random. In gigantic properties.
Goku: "OH MY GOD!! Bulma!" (Runs to Bulma) "MARRY ME!!!" Chi-Chi: "Whaaaat!?!?!" (Smacks Goku in the head) Vegeta: "HOW DARE YOU!!!" Trunks: "Uh... How do we stop the machine?" Bulma: "I knew I forgot something!"
The machine continued to spurt out breakfast in enormous amounts. Goku was forced to eat all the food. Things continued this way until....
Vegeta: "BIG BANG ATTACK!!!!" (Vegeta fired his big bang attack directly at the Food Dispenser) Goku: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (Goku powered up to SSJ4 and started his attack) JUBEI! KA-ME-HA-ME-HA!!!!
(For those of you who hvaen't seen DBGT (Dragonball GT) yet, the Jubei form is 10 Ka-me-ha-me-ha's put together to make maximum damage. It's Goku's most powerful attack in his SSJ4 form.)
Vegeta: O.O ..... .;;;; Goku: "Why!?!?! Why did you do it!!?? She never hurt you!! She made me soo happy!! Why??" Vegeta: "She got in the way of our training. In the end you would have fallen in love with her! I had to do it For the survival of the Saiyan Race. Bulma: "Goku will you stop I? You're destroying my yard. I can make another dispenser. It's very simple. This time I'll even put a STOP button on it. Goku: "NO! It's not the same. Not without Betsy!" Bulma: (Sweatdrops) Betsy!?
The tears in his eyes turn into flames
Vegeta: -.-;;; Goku: (Powers up) "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Vegeta: "Damnit, he's angry..." (Powers up) "AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!"
The earth trembled and quaked as the two most powerful saiyans (Shu: FUCK ALL YOU GOHAN FREAKS) powered up to the Rage Form.
Goten: "Trunks, did you see it?" Trunks: "Yeah, I did. Now we know how to use it too!" Trunks/Goten: "AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!"
Lightning thundered all around. The ground opened up in many places as magma flowed all around the four Enraged saiyans.
Chi-Chi: (Gigantic Sweatdrop) "It's jus a food dispenser!" Goku: xX "Just a food dispenser!?!?!?!? I don't know who you are anymore!!!" Vegeta & Goku: "Jubei!! – Final!! – Kameha – Flash!! – Me-HAAA!!!" Goten & Trunks: "Fu-sion-HA!!"
In a gigantic blinding beam of faslkf light (I don't like being descriptive -.-) everyone but the newly transformed being was blinded.
??????????: "Vegeta! Goku! Fuse and fight us!"
Vegeta & Goku: "Gotenks!?" ??????????: "The name is Gotenks Rage!" Vegeta & Goku: "Oh shi—"
In a second beam of blinding light Gogeta Rage appeared.
Gotenks Rage: "You geezers have been trying to get to Rage form all this time. But you didn't even know how powerful your own sons are! We will surpass you!!" Gogeta Rage: "Bring it on shorty!!"
Gotens R. powered up. But instead of his energy being emitted, FLAMES were emitted. Gotenks charged at Gogeta and threw flames into his eyes. Gogeta dodged the attack and countered with a bolt of electricity going straight through Gotenk's body. He snapped, crackled and popped on his way down.. (Shu: MMmmmmm Rice krispies... ahhhhh)
Gohan: (Shivered) "God damn! That had to hurt!"
Gotenks rebound from the attack and flames burst into Gogeta's hair.
Gogeta: "YOU BASTARD! You burned my hair!" Gotenks: "PAY MORE ATTENTION THEN!!"
Gogeta grabbed Gotenks' hair and ripped out a huge chunk of it.
Gotenks: "AHHH!!! THAT HURT YOU JERK!!!" Gogeta: (Smirked) "Maybe YOU should pay more attention." Gotenks: "That's it! 'Flames of Hell!'"
Gotenks had two gigantic fireballs in each hand. He started to spin extremely fast until he made a flaming tornado. Gogeta got sucked into it. Screams could be heard from the tornado. Gogeta hit the ground. The tornado turned upwards and drove straight down into Gogeta's back. Gogeta's shirt quickly burned off. Gogeta crossed his arms across his face and soon there were 6 of himself.
Gogeta 1 – Final Flash Gogeta 2 – Ka-me-ha-me-ha Gogeta 3 – Jubei K-me-ha-me-ha Gogeta 4 – Big Bang Gogeta 5 – Gallit Gun Gogeta 6 – Kaio-ken
Gogeta 1/2/3/5 formed a square around Gotenks. Gogeta 4 floated above Gotenks, with his hands ready. Gogeta 6 flew into the sky and powered up.
Gotenks: "What the hell is this?" Gogeta 1: "FINAL FLASH!!" Gogeta 2: "KA-ME-HA-ME-HA!!!" Gogeta 3: "JUBEI-KA-ME-HA-ME-HA!!" Gogeta 5: "GALLIT GUN!!" Gogeta 6: "KAIO-KEN!!"
Gogeta 6 charged at Gotenks. The 4 beams kept Gotenks in place while slowly wearing him out. Gogeta 6 hit Gotenks in the head from above and knocked him into the ground. The 4 beams continued to force Gotenks into the ground.
Gogeta 4: "BIG-BANG ATTACK!!!"
Gogeta 6 flew into the air and slowly started to build up his power for a Spirit Bomb. Gogeta 1/2/3/5 released their beams and let them explode. Then they flew into Gogeta 6's spirit bomb making it half the size of the sun. The big bang exploded and Gogeta 4 then flew into the spirit bomb to make it even bigger. Gotenks had fallen into a hole in the ground because of the impact from all the attacks. He had finally climbed out.
Gotenks: (Looks up at the Spirit Bomb) "Ouch...."
The spirit bomb was launched at Gotenks and it exploded taking the Earth with it.
THE END?
Shu Just to clear a few things up for you. First of all, Bob didn't die from Vegeta's attack from Rage mode. He and all th eother evil in the world died when Gogeta Rage used his spirit bomb. And the earth couldn't have been destroyed because it is made up of Pure Energy. Gotenks also didn't get hurt because of the same reason. Goku eventually got oer the food dispenser because Bulma made him a smaller more portable version of it. Vegeta ended up perfecting the Rage form and eventually surpassed Goku. Goten and Trunks trained in their Gotenks Rage form everyday. They also perfected it but was no match for Geogeta Rage. They did however put the 'Flames of Hell' and 'Gogeta Combo' together to make an even stronger attack. And what of Pan and Bra? Well....
Meanwhile in Bra's Bedroom
Pan is laying in bed anked and Bra is on top of her, also naked. Bra kisses Pan and slowly runs her tongue over her neck.
Pan: "Ahh... Bra.. go lower..." Bra: "Hai..."
Shu I decided against the Lemon.. But I hope you like the ending anyway... I doubt I'd come out with a 'sequel'. I'm currently working on a different story on Don't expect it anytime soon though. In a few months just do a search for my author name 'Shusays' You'll find it.. BYEE!!!!!