Fooly Cooly Saga
Problems With Organizations
Chapter One
Thanks for reading my 2nd fan-fic. I thought of this idea 'bout a week ago. I just thought it was a really good idea. Please let me know what you think.
…About four years ago…
"Haruuuuuukoooooo…Mom wants you to do the dishe…"
"Haruko?"
A golden-haired teenager opened the door to her older sister, Haruko's room. Everything was just like it had been earlier that morning, except there was a messily scrawled note on the desk…
"I went to find The Pirate King. Don't look for me."
Yours Truly,
Haruko"
Shivers went through Excel's body. She knew Haruko wasn't coming back. When Haruko had made up her mind about something that was it. No one could change it. For the past year, Haruko had been talking of some strange organization called "The Galaxy Space Police Brotherhood." Nobody knew much about it. Well not the details anyways. (Haruko couldn't dispense that information.) What they did know was that they were after Medical Mechanica, some sinister organization on Earth..
Everyone had warned her against going, but now, it was too late.
Through various mishaps, both Excel and Haruko were in serious trouble.
Excel, currently on Earth, found herself in the grips of Lord Ill Palazzo, (Leader of their organization A.C.R.O.S.S.) trying in various ways with the help of her comrade Hyatt and their emergency food source (Mince) to take over their city, and next the world. The only problem: The A.C.R.O.S.S. headquarters were located in some underground sewer.
Haruko, currently on the run from The Galaxy Space Police Brotherhood was bouncing from Earth to Mars wreaking havoc wherever she went.
…Present Day…
"Hail Ill Palazzo!!!"
"That is quite enough of your nonsense Excel. Would you like to taste the fruits of your labor?"
"Yes my favorite superior, Mr. Ill Palazzo!"
Palazzo pulled the lever, plunging Excel into a large pit of water. The water this time was filled with piranhas, which took quite a liking to Excel.
"Well Hyatt, would you like to receive you're mission for the day?"
"Yes, Lord Ill Palazzo."
"This operation, the brain child of me, Lord Ill Palazzo, involves…"
"Thank you Lord Ill Palazzo…"
An exasperated Excel climbs out of the "water dungeon".
"You are more than welcome Excel."
"Today's plan involves, infiltrating the city bakery. When A.C.R.O.S.S. gets control of this city, one must know the art of bread baking."
"May I ask why Lord Ill Palazzo?"
"No you may not, Excel. This plan is clandestine, you know hush, hush. But thank you for your concern."
And with that, Palazzo pulled the lever to the "pit of doom."
Haruko: "Hmmmm…super spicy curry bread…"
Well, that's all of chapter one. Please review!