Sweet Revenge
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*ahem* Dear Flamer,
Thanks for your oh-so-kind review on how my story "sux". I don't care about what you think. This is my story, my creation and I'll share it with others as freely as I can. Of course, if you don't like it, you can always NOT READ MY STORY! You have a choice and I have a choice as well. I will have you know I have gotten over 300 reviews for this story so if I were you I would shut my sorry trap. Sorry if I have in any way insulted you, but YOU DESERVE IT. And now back to your regular program. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Whatcha gonna do about it little boy?" the man holding Saki sneered and
tightened his grip on her.
"This." Raven instinctively ducked as Kai swung a fist and punched the guy
straight on a pressure point.
The man howled as he stumbled back into the arms of his friends.
"No one calls me little and gets away with it," Kai smirked and crossed his arms.
The leader was a tall lean guy with a green mohawk who barked
nervously at his 4 other comrades,
"Go get him! What are you waiting for?!"
One man launched himself at Kai attempting to body slam him to the
ground. Kai nicely sidestepped sending the man tripping over his own two feet
and landing face first in the dirt. Another tried to strangle him from behind, but a
few well- placed kicks dislodged the bloke from his back. The third and fourth
assaulted him at the same time with a flurry of kicks and punches in which Kai
dodged most of them, but he also seemed unfazed by the ones that hit him.
Sending a roundhouse kick to one of the attackers head, he tripped the
other one and kicked both of them in the head for good measure.
He smirked, that was a good workout he hadn't had in a long time.
All the while, Raven had inched closer to a ladder by the side wall, and
when she saw Kai deliver the final blow, she efficiently clambered up the ladder
and ran along the rooftops.
No way in hell would he let some stupid urchin steal his wallet and get
away with it! Running after her, he was amazed at his own ability to actually stay
on the rooftops. This was actually fun. His mouth tightened into a scowl as he
remembered why he was doing this. When he caught up with her, there was
nothing on heaven or earth that would save her from him! Oh yes, revenge will
be sweet!
He heard the huffing and puffing of the leader behind him and sped up 'til
he was several meters behind the girl.
He had to admit that she was quick and fast, he'd give her that. But Kai
had never been bested by a girl before and he didn't intend to give it a first!
Her breathing came out nice and steady, perfect, she thought. She
thanked her lucky stars that her plan actually worked. She had never in her life
ran along rooftops. She had sat on them, but never ran at the speed she was
going now.
She momentarily slowed down to look back to see if Kai was still chasing
her. BIG MISTAKE! He was now a meter or two behind her and closing in fast.
Mustering all her courage, she leaped off the rooftop and landed lightly on
the ground. She gathered her breath and took off again. She thought of the
alleys in her head. It was vital that she memorized it and so she had. She heard
a loud boom behind her, signalling that Kai had jumped down also. Faster than a
speeding bullet, she took off again.
'Left, right, then right again.' She made the first turn with Kai practically breathing
down her neck. She made the second turn losing Kai a bit more and made the
third turn, into a dead end.
'Dammit! I should've turned left!' she mentally chastised herself.
The hopelessness of the situation dawned on her and she started to panic.
'No panic! NO PANIC! Just breath.' By the time she let go of the breath she
realized she had been holding Kai had found her.
'I can taste it now.' He grinned evilly, revenge tasting sweeter than it had in many
years.
'Okay, deny, deny, deny! If that doesn't work then my puppy dog face might
work.' She desperately thought of ways to get out of this. Unfortunately, all her
plans seemed to evaporate into thing air when he took a large step, coming face
to face with her.
She squared her shoulders and gritted her teeth preparing for the worse.
She had seen what Kai had done to those punks and she surely didn't want that
happening to her.
Noticing their proximity, she blushed and stepped backwards nervously.
"Where's my wallet?" he growled in a low threatening manner.
"I-I "she stuttered timidly
'Deny, deny, deny!' her mind screamed at her.
"don't have it," she finished in one breath.
"Liar! I know it was you! So where is it?!" he gripped one of her arms tightly,
making her whimper in fear.
"I don't have it!" she cried frantically trying tug her arm away from Kai.
His grip on her tightened; cutting off her circulation.
"I will ask one more time! Give it back to me!" he hissed in a deep guttural tone.
"Okay! I stole it but I don't have it!" she said quickly thinking up of a lie which
was kind of true. Her boss had the wallet, but she had the money. Only, he
asked for the WALLET not his MONEY.
"Where is it?!" Kai nearly roared, his patience growing thin.
"I-I, you see, um," Raven's brain scrambled to think of a new lie to cover up the
other one.
"Hurry up!" he shook her arm roughly.
"Some one jumped me and stole it!" she blurted out the first thing she thought of.
"Damn you!" Kai cursed in every language known. He growled, if he couldn't get
his money then he at least wanted something of the same value!
"Do you know how much was in that wallet?!" he took deep breaths in an effort to
calm himself, otherwise he might he end up doing something he regretted.
"No, but please, don't report me to the police!" Raven said hysterically afraid she
would be sent to jail for the rest of her life as she was pretty high up on the
wanted list.
His lips twisted into a cruel smirk, he had just thought of the most brilliant
idea since sliced bread. Oh boy! This was going to be fun! Rubbing his hands
in excitement he started off nonchalantly.
"Well, I was thinking of doing that, but I have another idea. If you don't say yes
then I'll be off to the police station."
Raven thought briefly, what could he possibly want from HER?! She sure
as hell didn't want to be going to the slammer so she agreed.
"Alright, here are the terms, YOU are now MY slave until you get engaged." She
almost wanted to laugh maniacally when he saw her horrified expression.
Oh boy! Revenge DID taste sweet!
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A/N the ending was less than spectacular but u see I lost this chappie and so I had to rewrite it quickly! Anyways plz review and thanx to those that did!
Reviewer Replies:
Cry of the Red Phoenix: Love ya! And here it is!
Mizu_Tenshi: Finally found them ne! And here ya go. Update twisted roses soon!
kaieshe@kai(anonymous): u think so? Thanx! Hope u can review again!
Droopy1389: Hey! U read It's All Your Fault don't u? Or was it Kawaii Kitties? Anywho, thanx 4 reviewing!
I'm so sad! These were all the reviews I got, well for the second chappie anyways. I hope whoever's reading this can review! I hope to make 25 reviews b4 I go on. Even if I don't, I'm still updating sometime this week! Cya soon!
-Tenma Koneko
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*ahem* Dear Flamer,
Thanks for your oh-so-kind review on how my story "sux". I don't care about what you think. This is my story, my creation and I'll share it with others as freely as I can. Of course, if you don't like it, you can always NOT READ MY STORY! You have a choice and I have a choice as well. I will have you know I have gotten over 300 reviews for this story so if I were you I would shut my sorry trap. Sorry if I have in any way insulted you, but YOU DESERVE IT. And now back to your regular program. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Whatcha gonna do about it little boy?" the man holding Saki sneered and
tightened his grip on her.
"This." Raven instinctively ducked as Kai swung a fist and punched the guy
straight on a pressure point.
The man howled as he stumbled back into the arms of his friends.
"No one calls me little and gets away with it," Kai smirked and crossed his arms.
The leader was a tall lean guy with a green mohawk who barked
nervously at his 4 other comrades,
"Go get him! What are you waiting for?!"
One man launched himself at Kai attempting to body slam him to the
ground. Kai nicely sidestepped sending the man tripping over his own two feet
and landing face first in the dirt. Another tried to strangle him from behind, but a
few well- placed kicks dislodged the bloke from his back. The third and fourth
assaulted him at the same time with a flurry of kicks and punches in which Kai
dodged most of them, but he also seemed unfazed by the ones that hit him.
Sending a roundhouse kick to one of the attackers head, he tripped the
other one and kicked both of them in the head for good measure.
He smirked, that was a good workout he hadn't had in a long time.
All the while, Raven had inched closer to a ladder by the side wall, and
when she saw Kai deliver the final blow, she efficiently clambered up the ladder
and ran along the rooftops.
No way in hell would he let some stupid urchin steal his wallet and get
away with it! Running after her, he was amazed at his own ability to actually stay
on the rooftops. This was actually fun. His mouth tightened into a scowl as he
remembered why he was doing this. When he caught up with her, there was
nothing on heaven or earth that would save her from him! Oh yes, revenge will
be sweet!
He heard the huffing and puffing of the leader behind him and sped up 'til
he was several meters behind the girl.
He had to admit that she was quick and fast, he'd give her that. But Kai
had never been bested by a girl before and he didn't intend to give it a first!
Her breathing came out nice and steady, perfect, she thought. She
thanked her lucky stars that her plan actually worked. She had never in her life
ran along rooftops. She had sat on them, but never ran at the speed she was
going now.
She momentarily slowed down to look back to see if Kai was still chasing
her. BIG MISTAKE! He was now a meter or two behind her and closing in fast.
Mustering all her courage, she leaped off the rooftop and landed lightly on
the ground. She gathered her breath and took off again. She thought of the
alleys in her head. It was vital that she memorized it and so she had. She heard
a loud boom behind her, signalling that Kai had jumped down also. Faster than a
speeding bullet, she took off again.
'Left, right, then right again.' She made the first turn with Kai practically breathing
down her neck. She made the second turn losing Kai a bit more and made the
third turn, into a dead end.
'Dammit! I should've turned left!' she mentally chastised herself.
The hopelessness of the situation dawned on her and she started to panic.
'No panic! NO PANIC! Just breath.' By the time she let go of the breath she
realized she had been holding Kai had found her.
'I can taste it now.' He grinned evilly, revenge tasting sweeter than it had in many
years.
'Okay, deny, deny, deny! If that doesn't work then my puppy dog face might
work.' She desperately thought of ways to get out of this. Unfortunately, all her
plans seemed to evaporate into thing air when he took a large step, coming face
to face with her.
She squared her shoulders and gritted her teeth preparing for the worse.
She had seen what Kai had done to those punks and she surely didn't want that
happening to her.
Noticing their proximity, she blushed and stepped backwards nervously.
"Where's my wallet?" he growled in a low threatening manner.
"I-I "she stuttered timidly
'Deny, deny, deny!' her mind screamed at her.
"don't have it," she finished in one breath.
"Liar! I know it was you! So where is it?!" he gripped one of her arms tightly,
making her whimper in fear.
"I don't have it!" she cried frantically trying tug her arm away from Kai.
His grip on her tightened; cutting off her circulation.
"I will ask one more time! Give it back to me!" he hissed in a deep guttural tone.
"Okay! I stole it but I don't have it!" she said quickly thinking up of a lie which
was kind of true. Her boss had the wallet, but she had the money. Only, he
asked for the WALLET not his MONEY.
"Where is it?!" Kai nearly roared, his patience growing thin.
"I-I, you see, um," Raven's brain scrambled to think of a new lie to cover up the
other one.
"Hurry up!" he shook her arm roughly.
"Some one jumped me and stole it!" she blurted out the first thing she thought of.
"Damn you!" Kai cursed in every language known. He growled, if he couldn't get
his money then he at least wanted something of the same value!
"Do you know how much was in that wallet?!" he took deep breaths in an effort to
calm himself, otherwise he might he end up doing something he regretted.
"No, but please, don't report me to the police!" Raven said hysterically afraid she
would be sent to jail for the rest of her life as she was pretty high up on the
wanted list.
His lips twisted into a cruel smirk, he had just thought of the most brilliant
idea since sliced bread. Oh boy! This was going to be fun! Rubbing his hands
in excitement he started off nonchalantly.
"Well, I was thinking of doing that, but I have another idea. If you don't say yes
then I'll be off to the police station."
Raven thought briefly, what could he possibly want from HER?! She sure
as hell didn't want to be going to the slammer so she agreed.
"Alright, here are the terms, YOU are now MY slave until you get engaged." She
almost wanted to laugh maniacally when he saw her horrified expression.
Oh boy! Revenge DID taste sweet!
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A/N the ending was less than spectacular but u see I lost this chappie and so I had to rewrite it quickly! Anyways plz review and thanx to those that did!
Reviewer Replies:
Cry of the Red Phoenix: Love ya! And here it is!
Mizu_Tenshi: Finally found them ne! And here ya go. Update twisted roses soon!
kaieshe@kai(anonymous): u think so? Thanx! Hope u can review again!
Droopy1389: Hey! U read It's All Your Fault don't u? Or was it Kawaii Kitties? Anywho, thanx 4 reviewing!
I'm so sad! These were all the reviews I got, well for the second chappie anyways. I hope whoever's reading this can review! I hope to make 25 reviews b4 I go on. Even if I don't, I'm still updating sometime this week! Cya soon!
-Tenma Koneko