Sweet Revenge
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A/N First of all, thanks so much to those who gave muchos constructive constructive criticism and for reminding what's important. I'm really sorry about last chappie there and for those who gave me a gentle reminder, kudos to all of you! Thanks for putting me back onto perspective and hopefully, you guys can give me more gud stuff! Kai cookies anyone?
Secondly, I know Kai acts a bit OOC in this chapter, but what you find out from it is sort of vital so bear with me. Remember, Kai knows nothing about the gang she works or rather worked for.
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"What?!! Are you crazy?! I can't-"
"Suit yourself. I'm heading to the police station now, care to come?" Kai
grinned evilly knowing that she would have to say yes eventually.
"But- Oh fine! Isn't there something else I can do?! Please! I don't want to
be a slave, cooking and cleaning all day for you! Besides, where would I
sleep?!" she asked, frustration evident in her voice.
"You can stay with me and the Bladebreakers. I'll pay for all your expenses
and we often eat out because we sleep in a hotel so you won't have to cook,
although you probably can't cook anyways."
"I can cook! And a lot better than you any day!" she glowered at Kai.
"Suuuuure, anyways, come with me to the stadium that we are practicing
in." he replied.
"Alright," her steps fell in sync with Kai's as she walked beside him.
"So tell me about yourself." Kai mumbled breaking the tentative silence.
"I'm 16 and I'm homeless because of my abusive father. I ran away when I
was ten," she hesitated about telling Kai about the ring of thieves she
worked for, but decided not to since she does owe them something for
helping her become a successful pickpocket.
"I'm a pickpocket as you can see, and contrary to popular belief, its not very
glamours." she explained.
"I see," was Kai's only reply.
Silence blanketed them since they were walking down the alleys.
Raven was uncomfortable with this quiet so she spoke up,
"Tell me about yourself."
"I beyblade with the Bladebreakers as you probably know already. I'm 17
and Voltaire is my grandfather and he raised me up in an abbey in Russia
with an evil guy named Boris. He created a black version of my bitbeast,
which held what he called ultimate power, and what I call idiocracy. I ran
away later and now I travel around the world blading in tournaments." He
said gruffly.
"Oh, I see. I have a beyblade too, although I'm not good at it." Raven said
thoughtfully.
"Let me see it anyways." He held out his hand.
Raven shrugged and pulled out her icy blue beyblade. She pressed it
into his hand and cautioned him,
"Don't you dare break it or destroy it in anyway."
"I just might do that," he smirked.
"Hey!" she lunged for her beyblade, but Kai swivelled away and Raven
grabbed empty air.
"Give that back!" she yelled. She jumped him form behind and hung on.
Using one hand to hang on, she used her other one to grab her blade back.
Kai grabbed her waist around his arm and swung her over his shoulder like a
pig going to the market.
"Let me down!" she screamed as she kicked his back with her legs.
Kai didn't even cringe as she booted him again.
"You're useless against me!" he pointed out, "So just stop trying, I'll let you
down soon enough."
Raven's hair encompassed her face and she was glad for that
since she didn't want Kai to see her blushing. Finally regaining her
composure, she asked in a cute innocent voice,
"Can you please let me down now? I don't feel particularly good about
being molested by a bag of testosterones."
"What the hell!" Kai's face turned tomato red, "Why would I want to touch
you?!"
"Then why are constantly shifting my position?" she challenged him.
"Whatever! I don't need to take this crap from you!" he said hotly, nearly
losing his temper.
Kai put her down and gave her her blade back as they were
nearing the stadium and going into the sidewalks.
"Finally!" she inhaled fresh air into her lungs.
They reached the stadium and Kai showed the receptionist his pass to
get into the stadium and said,
"She's my guest."
The lady at the counter nodded and let Raven through after asking her
name, address, and telephone number.
She gazed in wonder at the largeness of the stadiums and at the
people practising and training. The cool air conditioning inside felt
comforting against her hot skin. Kai lead her over to a stadium beside the
far right wall.
There, the rest of the team was training.
"Kai! You're back! We were so worried! What took so long!" Rei exclaimed.
Kai merely grunted in reply and sat down on the bench. Raven shyly
went over and sat down beside him. Tyson, Max, Rei and Kenny seemed to
notice her for the first time.
"Whose your friend that you brought with you?" Tyson asked quizzically.
"She's the girl who stole my wallet and now I made her my slave." Kai
wearily replied.
"Oh," was the only comment Tyson had. On the other hand,
"Hey! I'm Ray and that's Max and that's Tyson and the kid with the laptop is
Kenny! So what's up?" Rei introduced Raven to each of them.
"Hey," she said timidly.
"Kai, are you sure she's the one? I mean she looks so innocent!" Max
asked suspiciously examining Raven.
"Yeah, I was the one who stole Kai's wallet and in return for not reporting me,
I have to be his servant." Raven spoke up.
Everyone stared at her curiously.
"What?" she snapped uncomfortable with all the attention that was given to
her.
"Haven't you ever stolen anything before?"
"Yeah," Rei grinned, "I stole gum and other... stuff before!" he
continued,
"Okay, so I kind of feel bad about it but it was for Mariah! She really wanted
this nice designer shirt and it cost way too much. I mean, how much could
it possibly have taken to make one of those shirts?! I say everything costs
too much these days" he grumbled and defended himself and the rest of
the team started to chuckle except for Kai of course.
Raven herself managed a small giggle. She was beginning to feel
more secure around the team when she realized they had nothing
against her. She had thought at first that they'd hate her since she stole
their leader's money, but when she saw how forgiving they were, she
changed her mind. Tyson hopped up and cried,
"There's no one to battle! Everyone's weaker than us! They're no
challenge!"
Raven grinned and leaped up to the dare,
"I'll battle you!" she said.
Tyson looked unsure.
"Do you have a bit beast?" he asked.
"Yup! Tearozen's the name and he is so totally awesome!" she exclaimed
excitedly, ready for a battle as she hadn't had one in a long time.
"Wait," he everyone's heads turned to the origin of the voice, Kai.
"I'll fight you first."
"Why?" Raven looked confused.
"Because I want to." Kai snapped. His patience was wearing thin and the
last thing he needed was an argument.
"Umm, Okay..." Raven said slowly. She wasn't so sure she wanted
to battle Kai since she seemed like the type who would demolish blade to
win.
"Hey! No fair! I asked her first!" Tyson whined.
"I'm your team captain and I will do what's best for the team and right now I
think it's best if you shut your trap hole!" Kai nearly yelled.
Tyson was treading on thin ice and he knew this so he sensibly shut
his mouth and let Kai do his thing. Kai gave Tyson a half hearted death
glare. He was tired and hungry and not in his best mood right now. Tyson
shrunk away from Kai and whimpered a little. Kai looked away and said,
"Well, are we going to beyblade or what?"
"I'm the referee!!" Max yelled, "It's always been my dream to be like Brad
Best and host the tournaments!" Max got all dreamy like and had stars in his
eyes.
Tyson laughed and the rest of the team snickered along with him.
Max made and angry face and Tyson hated to see Max angry so he tried to
console him.
"Aww c'mon buddy! I didn't mean it that way!"
Max gave Tyson the cold shoulder, which made idiotic bluenette get
down on his knees and plead,
"I'm sorry!! It's a really cool dream! Please forgive me!"
Max burst out laughing and Tyson looked confused, but it didn't take
too long for him to catch on. Raven giggled and Rei hooted while Kai
looked on with a hint of amusement in his eyes.
"Hey! That was cruel!!" Tyson bleated.
"Anyways, let's go beyblade" Kai commanded... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A/N Hey! Thanx for all ur lovely reviews! And yes I surpassed my goal. Anyways, I gave you an extra chappie! I uploaded chappie 5 into this one as well so u better like it! I actually changed a lot of the stuff up there, so for you second time readers you might wanna reread the two chappies.
'til next time,
-Tenma Koneko
Reviewer Replies:
Artimes347- Hey! Thanx, and lol yea!
Shadowed Light- I love u I love u! muchos gracious to ur constructive criticism!
Droopy1389- Yea I will. Just gotta proofread it. Thanx!
Mizu_tenshi- lol, I h8 those too. I got a billion trying to read the reviews so I could reply -.-' and thanx for ur support!
Tyrant (anonymous)- ur rite, and gudness I feel so ashamed of myself! ^^; anyways, thanx!
Blackout12- thanx for ur great review and as a result of ur review, I've finally put my dusty *blows cover full of dust* thesaurus into use! ^^;
kaiesha@kai (anonymous)- really? Ur awesome really!
Love y'all and cya soon!
Ps. Cud u plz take the time to chek out my otha fic, Kawaii Kitties? (Beyblade, humor, Kai and Tyson as cats. Need I say more?)
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A/N First of all, thanks so much to those who gave muchos constructive constructive criticism and for reminding what's important. I'm really sorry about last chappie there and for those who gave me a gentle reminder, kudos to all of you! Thanks for putting me back onto perspective and hopefully, you guys can give me more gud stuff! Kai cookies anyone?
Secondly, I know Kai acts a bit OOC in this chapter, but what you find out from it is sort of vital so bear with me. Remember, Kai knows nothing about the gang she works or rather worked for.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"What?!! Are you crazy?! I can't-"
"Suit yourself. I'm heading to the police station now, care to come?" Kai
grinned evilly knowing that she would have to say yes eventually.
"But- Oh fine! Isn't there something else I can do?! Please! I don't want to
be a slave, cooking and cleaning all day for you! Besides, where would I
sleep?!" she asked, frustration evident in her voice.
"You can stay with me and the Bladebreakers. I'll pay for all your expenses
and we often eat out because we sleep in a hotel so you won't have to cook,
although you probably can't cook anyways."
"I can cook! And a lot better than you any day!" she glowered at Kai.
"Suuuuure, anyways, come with me to the stadium that we are practicing
in." he replied.
"Alright," her steps fell in sync with Kai's as she walked beside him.
"So tell me about yourself." Kai mumbled breaking the tentative silence.
"I'm 16 and I'm homeless because of my abusive father. I ran away when I
was ten," she hesitated about telling Kai about the ring of thieves she
worked for, but decided not to since she does owe them something for
helping her become a successful pickpocket.
"I'm a pickpocket as you can see, and contrary to popular belief, its not very
glamours." she explained.
"I see," was Kai's only reply.
Silence blanketed them since they were walking down the alleys.
Raven was uncomfortable with this quiet so she spoke up,
"Tell me about yourself."
"I beyblade with the Bladebreakers as you probably know already. I'm 17
and Voltaire is my grandfather and he raised me up in an abbey in Russia
with an evil guy named Boris. He created a black version of my bitbeast,
which held what he called ultimate power, and what I call idiocracy. I ran
away later and now I travel around the world blading in tournaments." He
said gruffly.
"Oh, I see. I have a beyblade too, although I'm not good at it." Raven said
thoughtfully.
"Let me see it anyways." He held out his hand.
Raven shrugged and pulled out her icy blue beyblade. She pressed it
into his hand and cautioned him,
"Don't you dare break it or destroy it in anyway."
"I just might do that," he smirked.
"Hey!" she lunged for her beyblade, but Kai swivelled away and Raven
grabbed empty air.
"Give that back!" she yelled. She jumped him form behind and hung on.
Using one hand to hang on, she used her other one to grab her blade back.
Kai grabbed her waist around his arm and swung her over his shoulder like a
pig going to the market.
"Let me down!" she screamed as she kicked his back with her legs.
Kai didn't even cringe as she booted him again.
"You're useless against me!" he pointed out, "So just stop trying, I'll let you
down soon enough."
Raven's hair encompassed her face and she was glad for that
since she didn't want Kai to see her blushing. Finally regaining her
composure, she asked in a cute innocent voice,
"Can you please let me down now? I don't feel particularly good about
being molested by a bag of testosterones."
"What the hell!" Kai's face turned tomato red, "Why would I want to touch
you?!"
"Then why are constantly shifting my position?" she challenged him.
"Whatever! I don't need to take this crap from you!" he said hotly, nearly
losing his temper.
Kai put her down and gave her her blade back as they were
nearing the stadium and going into the sidewalks.
"Finally!" she inhaled fresh air into her lungs.
They reached the stadium and Kai showed the receptionist his pass to
get into the stadium and said,
"She's my guest."
The lady at the counter nodded and let Raven through after asking her
name, address, and telephone number.
She gazed in wonder at the largeness of the stadiums and at the
people practising and training. The cool air conditioning inside felt
comforting against her hot skin. Kai lead her over to a stadium beside the
far right wall.
There, the rest of the team was training.
"Kai! You're back! We were so worried! What took so long!" Rei exclaimed.
Kai merely grunted in reply and sat down on the bench. Raven shyly
went over and sat down beside him. Tyson, Max, Rei and Kenny seemed to
notice her for the first time.
"Whose your friend that you brought with you?" Tyson asked quizzically.
"She's the girl who stole my wallet and now I made her my slave." Kai
wearily replied.
"Oh," was the only comment Tyson had. On the other hand,
"Hey! I'm Ray and that's Max and that's Tyson and the kid with the laptop is
Kenny! So what's up?" Rei introduced Raven to each of them.
"Hey," she said timidly.
"Kai, are you sure she's the one? I mean she looks so innocent!" Max
asked suspiciously examining Raven.
"Yeah, I was the one who stole Kai's wallet and in return for not reporting me,
I have to be his servant." Raven spoke up.
Everyone stared at her curiously.
"What?" she snapped uncomfortable with all the attention that was given to
her.
"Haven't you ever stolen anything before?"
"Yeah," Rei grinned, "I stole gum and other... stuff before!" he
continued,
"Okay, so I kind of feel bad about it but it was for Mariah! She really wanted
this nice designer shirt and it cost way too much. I mean, how much could
it possibly have taken to make one of those shirts?! I say everything costs
too much these days" he grumbled and defended himself and the rest of
the team started to chuckle except for Kai of course.
Raven herself managed a small giggle. She was beginning to feel
more secure around the team when she realized they had nothing
against her. She had thought at first that they'd hate her since she stole
their leader's money, but when she saw how forgiving they were, she
changed her mind. Tyson hopped up and cried,
"There's no one to battle! Everyone's weaker than us! They're no
challenge!"
Raven grinned and leaped up to the dare,
"I'll battle you!" she said.
Tyson looked unsure.
"Do you have a bit beast?" he asked.
"Yup! Tearozen's the name and he is so totally awesome!" she exclaimed
excitedly, ready for a battle as she hadn't had one in a long time.
"Wait," he everyone's heads turned to the origin of the voice, Kai.
"I'll fight you first."
"Why?" Raven looked confused.
"Because I want to." Kai snapped. His patience was wearing thin and the
last thing he needed was an argument.
"Umm, Okay..." Raven said slowly. She wasn't so sure she wanted
to battle Kai since she seemed like the type who would demolish blade to
win.
"Hey! No fair! I asked her first!" Tyson whined.
"I'm your team captain and I will do what's best for the team and right now I
think it's best if you shut your trap hole!" Kai nearly yelled.
Tyson was treading on thin ice and he knew this so he sensibly shut
his mouth and let Kai do his thing. Kai gave Tyson a half hearted death
glare. He was tired and hungry and not in his best mood right now. Tyson
shrunk away from Kai and whimpered a little. Kai looked away and said,
"Well, are we going to beyblade or what?"
"I'm the referee!!" Max yelled, "It's always been my dream to be like Brad
Best and host the tournaments!" Max got all dreamy like and had stars in his
eyes.
Tyson laughed and the rest of the team snickered along with him.
Max made and angry face and Tyson hated to see Max angry so he tried to
console him.
"Aww c'mon buddy! I didn't mean it that way!"
Max gave Tyson the cold shoulder, which made idiotic bluenette get
down on his knees and plead,
"I'm sorry!! It's a really cool dream! Please forgive me!"
Max burst out laughing and Tyson looked confused, but it didn't take
too long for him to catch on. Raven giggled and Rei hooted while Kai
looked on with a hint of amusement in his eyes.
"Hey! That was cruel!!" Tyson bleated.
"Anyways, let's go beyblade" Kai commanded... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A/N Hey! Thanx for all ur lovely reviews! And yes I surpassed my goal. Anyways, I gave you an extra chappie! I uploaded chappie 5 into this one as well so u better like it! I actually changed a lot of the stuff up there, so for you second time readers you might wanna reread the two chappies.
'til next time,
-Tenma Koneko
Reviewer Replies:
Artimes347- Hey! Thanx, and lol yea!
Shadowed Light- I love u I love u! muchos gracious to ur constructive criticism!
Droopy1389- Yea I will. Just gotta proofread it. Thanx!
Mizu_tenshi- lol, I h8 those too. I got a billion trying to read the reviews so I could reply -.-' and thanx for ur support!
Tyrant (anonymous)- ur rite, and gudness I feel so ashamed of myself! ^^; anyways, thanx!
Blackout12- thanx for ur great review and as a result of ur review, I've finally put my dusty *blows cover full of dust* thesaurus into use! ^^;
kaiesha@kai (anonymous)- really? Ur awesome really!
Love y'all and cya soon!
Ps. Cud u plz take the time to chek out my otha fic, Kawaii Kitties? (Beyblade, humor, Kai and Tyson as cats. Need I say more?)