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Chapter Two: The Sorting, Discussion, and Bad Days
After all of the students were seated in the Great Hall, the first yeas began to get sorted. After the last first year was sorted into the Hufflepuff house Dumbledore stood up and said:
"Welcome, welcome to Hogwarts! As you all know the Forbidden Forest is forbidden to all students. But, before we start the feast there is one more person to be sorted." Students watched eagerly at Dumbledore as McGonagall walked to the stool with Kwan at her side. "Her name is Kwannon Rizal, or Kwan for short, the transfer student from the University of Magic in America. I hope you will treat her with kindness, respect, and as if she was originally from Hogwarts."
Kwan walked up to the stool and placed the Sorting Hat on her head. During this Malfoy had his hands crossed under the table hoping she would be placed in Slytherin. At last the hat yelled-
"GRYFFINDOR"
Everyone was clapping and began to eat. Kwan was smiling and looked around at all of the students in the Great Hall. She spotted Malfoy and waved while Malfoy smiled back. After eating the students had set out to their common room.
"The password is Nymphadora, specially selected by the new Defense against the Dark Arts teacher Professor Tonks," said a Gryffindor prefect, "Come along."
"Wow! This place is amazing," Kwan told Harry. "It seems so relaxing."
"Kwan,' said Hermione, "I'll show you to our dormitory. Let's just say goodnight to Ron and Harry first."
After bidding the two goodnight Kwan and Hermione went to the girls dormitory room.
"Hermione, can I ask you something?"
"Sure Kwan, ask away."
"I was wondering who Draco Malfoy is. I-I mean is he nice?"
"Nice? Malfoy is anything but nice or considerate or thoughtful or polite." Hermione scoffed. "Ugh! Malfoy is the most loathsome, evil, foul- mouthed person I have ever met. I'm even surprised he is even human......Why?"
"Well he seemed very polite when I met him. He was blushing and stuttering." replied Kwan.
Kwan told Hermione her encounter with Malfoy earlier that day.
"Maybe he likes you," told Hermione to Kwan, "but he is really self- centered and he dislikes anyone who is not a pureblood. That incompetent git!"
"Oh," said Kwan looking saddened.
"Are you Muggle-born because I am."
"Yes I am. Only mother and her family are Muggles."
Kwan's first day of school at Hogwarts was a nightmare. First, she became separated from Hermione in the large crowd, and then she was late for Transfiguration class because she got lost. Next, Professor Snape gave the class a pop quiz from their studies the year before and had no idea what the whole quiz was about. Then she knocked down her potion and lost 10 points from Gryffindor. But Kwan's sadness was swept away by the sight of Malfoy in the Great Hall. Kwan wanted to talk to him.
"Kwan, are you coming with us to dinner?" asked Ron
"I'll catch up with you guys later. OK?" she replied.
"Alright then," Harry said, "we will be sitting by Neville!"
Kwan walked up to Malfoy who was looking for something in his pocket. He looked up and saw her and he was going to reveal his secret.
Chapter Two: The Sorting, Discussion, and Bad Days
After all of the students were seated in the Great Hall, the first yeas began to get sorted. After the last first year was sorted into the Hufflepuff house Dumbledore stood up and said:
"Welcome, welcome to Hogwarts! As you all know the Forbidden Forest is forbidden to all students. But, before we start the feast there is one more person to be sorted." Students watched eagerly at Dumbledore as McGonagall walked to the stool with Kwan at her side. "Her name is Kwannon Rizal, or Kwan for short, the transfer student from the University of Magic in America. I hope you will treat her with kindness, respect, and as if she was originally from Hogwarts."
Kwan walked up to the stool and placed the Sorting Hat on her head. During this Malfoy had his hands crossed under the table hoping she would be placed in Slytherin. At last the hat yelled-
"GRYFFINDOR"
Everyone was clapping and began to eat. Kwan was smiling and looked around at all of the students in the Great Hall. She spotted Malfoy and waved while Malfoy smiled back. After eating the students had set out to their common room.
"The password is Nymphadora, specially selected by the new Defense against the Dark Arts teacher Professor Tonks," said a Gryffindor prefect, "Come along."
"Wow! This place is amazing," Kwan told Harry. "It seems so relaxing."
"Kwan,' said Hermione, "I'll show you to our dormitory. Let's just say goodnight to Ron and Harry first."
After bidding the two goodnight Kwan and Hermione went to the girls dormitory room.
"Hermione, can I ask you something?"
"Sure Kwan, ask away."
"I was wondering who Draco Malfoy is. I-I mean is he nice?"
"Nice? Malfoy is anything but nice or considerate or thoughtful or polite." Hermione scoffed. "Ugh! Malfoy is the most loathsome, evil, foul- mouthed person I have ever met. I'm even surprised he is even human......Why?"
"Well he seemed very polite when I met him. He was blushing and stuttering." replied Kwan.
Kwan told Hermione her encounter with Malfoy earlier that day.
"Maybe he likes you," told Hermione to Kwan, "but he is really self- centered and he dislikes anyone who is not a pureblood. That incompetent git!"
"Oh," said Kwan looking saddened.
"Are you Muggle-born because I am."
"Yes I am. Only mother and her family are Muggles."
Kwan's first day of school at Hogwarts was a nightmare. First, she became separated from Hermione in the large crowd, and then she was late for Transfiguration class because she got lost. Next, Professor Snape gave the class a pop quiz from their studies the year before and had no idea what the whole quiz was about. Then she knocked down her potion and lost 10 points from Gryffindor. But Kwan's sadness was swept away by the sight of Malfoy in the Great Hall. Kwan wanted to talk to him.
"Kwan, are you coming with us to dinner?" asked Ron
"I'll catch up with you guys later. OK?" she replied.
"Alright then," Harry said, "we will be sitting by Neville!"
Kwan walked up to Malfoy who was looking for something in his pocket. He looked up and saw her and he was going to reveal his secret.
