To Viper: Wow, that was a lot of criticism. But you know what? You are right. When I first read your review, I thought "WHAT?!" But then I thought about it and looked over my story. You are completely right, what was I thinking? I have decided to rewrite the story, make it better. I have some ideas too. Yeah, I shouldn't have put y'all all in there, sorry I'm used to talking that way. I'll pay more attention when I rewrite it. Also, you're right the sex scene sucked, especially since they haven't seen each other for so long. They would want to touch each other and do all the foreplay, again what was I thinking? I'll work hard on the rewrite, it'll be really different, I have decided to take your criticism and use it to better my story. If you'd like to help, by being my beta reader or something, just let me know. If you don't want to I'll understand. I just want to better the story for my readers. Oh and Angel isn't my real name, my real name is Carissa. But your right, she is like me. I have decided to change that also, and be more descriptive about things. Also, I'll do it from other people's point of views, also. I won't do Angel from my point of view anymore. Like I said, the rewrite will be really different. It might take a while to write it, but I hope you're not disappointed. Thanx.