Yeah! It didn't take me forever to update this time I am so proud. I would
first like to start of by thanking all who reviewed.
Oy-with-the-poodles- here is your monopoly money and dust I threw in a cookie too. lol. Thanks for your review it makes me feel happy to know that you are excited about my story.
Tanguay40- thanks for your encouragement it helped me to want to update sooner. I will also try to make the chapters longer.
hockeylover- I'm glad to know that you are interested in finding out what happens next. I hope you too have a nice day.
musical1- thank you for your opinion and your point of view oh and I think they were like twelve when Kate went to camp but they did seem like awfully mature twelve year olds so pretend she is fifteen or so that is the age level I am writing at because that is the age level I know best. Pretend! Pretend! jk. Thanks a lot.
To kiss or not to kiss?
Chapter 7
"Hey!" Kate said before a minute later noticing that Eric was standing right behind Ethan. Eric walked up to the door a little jealous and then said, "Hey! Kate you ready to go." "Yeah! Well it was nice meeting you Ethan," she said before walking right past Ethan and going with Eric. "What was he doing here?" Eric asked. "Oh that was Ethan he just came to the door to introduce himself," Kate responded. "Oh, ok then why did he come to your door, humm?" "Why are you being so over protective your acting like you're my father?" "Look, I'm sorry its just that I really like you I guess my competitive guy instincts just took over for a minute I'm really sorry." "It's okay, so where are we going to dinner," Kate asked desperately trying to change the subject. Eric took the hint and responded we are going to Wendy's and a movie it's your choice (for the movie) (sorry NightlySparks I was going to make it a fancy restaurant but another reviewer reviewed first however if you have any other ideas I would love to hear them. Anyway back to the story.) "Humm, that sounds good and as for the movie I have been dying to see 50 first dates I heard it was really funny. Is that okay with you?" She asked. "Yeah sure", he replied. Truth be told he didn't really care what movie the saw as long as he could see it with her. Suddenly a thought came to Kate's mind how were they going to get there. Before she could ask she saw him stopping in front of a motorcycle and picking up the helmet. "Is this yours?" she asked. "No, unfortunately this is my best friend's bike." "Well who's your best friend," she asked curiously. "You just meet him," he responded. (Was going to end here but decided to continue.) "What do you mean?" she said quite confused. "Ethan Craft is my best friend." "Well that explains why you acted the way you did, but hey that's okay lets just go to dinner." With that they jumped on the motorcycle and speed down the street. When they arrived at Wendy's there wasn't much of a line so they got their food shortly. While they ate they talked about all sorts of things such as their favorite movies, and books, and how strict their parents were. When they were done eating they went to see the movie. After buying the tickets they found some seats and sat down. By the end of the film they were holding hands. When they returned to camp Eric offered to walk Kate to her cabin and Kate agreed. When they arrived at her cabin she said, "Well, I guess I better go. I had a great time, maybe we could do this again some time." "Sure," Eric responded. This was followed by an awkward silence. After about five minutes Kate was about to leave when Eric slowly leaned in and kissed her leaving Kate floating on a cloud.
Yeah I finished and I think this is my longest chapter yet. I am so proud of myself. Thank you for reading guys and please review. Your reviews mean a lot to me so please don't forget to review. Well have a nice day you guys. Bye.
Oy-with-the-poodles- here is your monopoly money and dust I threw in a cookie too. lol. Thanks for your review it makes me feel happy to know that you are excited about my story.
Tanguay40- thanks for your encouragement it helped me to want to update sooner. I will also try to make the chapters longer.
hockeylover- I'm glad to know that you are interested in finding out what happens next. I hope you too have a nice day.
musical1- thank you for your opinion and your point of view oh and I think they were like twelve when Kate went to camp but they did seem like awfully mature twelve year olds so pretend she is fifteen or so that is the age level I am writing at because that is the age level I know best. Pretend! Pretend! jk. Thanks a lot.
To kiss or not to kiss?
Chapter 7
"Hey!" Kate said before a minute later noticing that Eric was standing right behind Ethan. Eric walked up to the door a little jealous and then said, "Hey! Kate you ready to go." "Yeah! Well it was nice meeting you Ethan," she said before walking right past Ethan and going with Eric. "What was he doing here?" Eric asked. "Oh that was Ethan he just came to the door to introduce himself," Kate responded. "Oh, ok then why did he come to your door, humm?" "Why are you being so over protective your acting like you're my father?" "Look, I'm sorry its just that I really like you I guess my competitive guy instincts just took over for a minute I'm really sorry." "It's okay, so where are we going to dinner," Kate asked desperately trying to change the subject. Eric took the hint and responded we are going to Wendy's and a movie it's your choice (for the movie) (sorry NightlySparks I was going to make it a fancy restaurant but another reviewer reviewed first however if you have any other ideas I would love to hear them. Anyway back to the story.) "Humm, that sounds good and as for the movie I have been dying to see 50 first dates I heard it was really funny. Is that okay with you?" She asked. "Yeah sure", he replied. Truth be told he didn't really care what movie the saw as long as he could see it with her. Suddenly a thought came to Kate's mind how were they going to get there. Before she could ask she saw him stopping in front of a motorcycle and picking up the helmet. "Is this yours?" she asked. "No, unfortunately this is my best friend's bike." "Well who's your best friend," she asked curiously. "You just meet him," he responded. (Was going to end here but decided to continue.) "What do you mean?" she said quite confused. "Ethan Craft is my best friend." "Well that explains why you acted the way you did, but hey that's okay lets just go to dinner." With that they jumped on the motorcycle and speed down the street. When they arrived at Wendy's there wasn't much of a line so they got their food shortly. While they ate they talked about all sorts of things such as their favorite movies, and books, and how strict their parents were. When they were done eating they went to see the movie. After buying the tickets they found some seats and sat down. By the end of the film they were holding hands. When they returned to camp Eric offered to walk Kate to her cabin and Kate agreed. When they arrived at her cabin she said, "Well, I guess I better go. I had a great time, maybe we could do this again some time." "Sure," Eric responded. This was followed by an awkward silence. After about five minutes Kate was about to leave when Eric slowly leaned in and kissed her leaving Kate floating on a cloud.
Yeah I finished and I think this is my longest chapter yet. I am so proud of myself. Thank you for reading guys and please review. Your reviews mean a lot to me so please don't forget to review. Well have a nice day you guys. Bye.